March 27 2023-
It was great to dive back into the Human Cycle for notes on Book 3. Still think it's a decent book and even with its flaws, there's a lot to enjoy.
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It's not every day you're able to read your own book. You'll see different reviews here though I have quite a different perspective. This isn't the first time I read my book, meaning the manuscript. It is however the first time I've read my own book in the physical version and it was quite an interesting experience. If you're expecting me to say this is the most awesome book you'll ever read, you probably don't know me that well lol. I will do my best to be as objective as possible although it's pretty hard since I did write this book.
That said, I did enjoy it as a book, not as my work, but as A work. Not as my baby, but as a story, the first installment of what will be a 3 book series.
So here's the breakdown of the story for me and how it unfolded: the first half of the book is very detail heavy and a slow burn of a read. I didn't feel the need to rush through it and that was the case until about Chapter 13... then the book picks up and it honestly gains momentum throughout most of the second half of the book. So if you're reading, I think my best recommendation is that if it's a bit slow, give it a chance. I honestly think if you give it to chapter 13 or 14, you won't be disappointed. Mind you, I'm not saying that the first half isn't good, It's just that after all the initial setup which was necessary, the story can finally take off and boy does it. Starting in a nondescript location in the US, most likely on the Eastern seaboard, the story takes you through Europe, parts of Egypt and Africa, the Middle East and Asia.
Throughout the adventure, various conceptions of vampires are broken and that's a good point to tackle: this ISN'T a vampire book. It does have vampires in it, along with Therians (never call them werewolves), demons, angels and creatures that echo Tolkien without repeating it.
The influences range from Neil Gaiman, to Tolkien, to CS Lewis, Frank Herbert, and others.
Regarding characters, my highlights are Daniel, Bill, Captain Jane and Liam... which is interesting since Nathaniel, one of the protagonists was interesting, though not as much as these others. The reason for this is that these other characters do have a more level development and come into their own in interesting ways.
Now for a perspective that only I can give as the one who wrote this book, there's a reason why I'll always love this book, even if it's uneven, at times too long, at times too wordy, at times too detailed or whatever other critique people can offer and it's this: I can see when I find my voice a writer. Right around where I tell you that the book takes off, that's where word craft ceases to be the focus and the narrative takes over. That's when the story began to write itself and I was just hanging on for the ride. To be able to read that and feel that moment when the story clicks... that is an indescribable sensation and makes me love this book even more.
As humans we are flawed by nature... and the title of this book is a reflection of a work lovingly worked on for 7 years and insisted on.
Apart from all of this, let me close with this thought and it's one of the clear cut compliments I can offer my work. At the very least, this book and the entire Human Cycle is very different. Sure it has the archetype of the hero saving the world, that aside, the development of the story, the dialogue, the characters, the locations and the twists and several surprises I think merit a read and that's me being as honest about the story as I can. This is not me plugging my book, this is me saying that I enjoyed a story, even if it was my own, and maybe, just maybe, you'll enjoy it too.
Cheers