This is the first story in a new mafia series by Ava Gray. I loved the storyline and universe, plus the chemistry between Lee / Liam and Rory / Aurora was 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥! Do the mafia families in this series act like they would irl (if they existed 😉😉)? No, but they don’t have to abide by common sense, that is part of the magic of reading. I read this with a sense of suspended belief and just took it at face value.
** If you have not read this story, the following may contain spoilers. I will do my best not to provide any, just enough information to explain my rating and opinion. **
⛔️ There are quite a few potential triggers for sensitive readers, including adult language; derogatory terms about, and treatment of, women; steamy detailed intimate scenes between a dirty talking alpha and virgin female, with dominance and submission, etc.; violence stereotypical of the mafia genre such as fighting, threats, subterfuge, blackmail, coercion, murder, kidnapping, torture, illegal: gambling, gun-running, drug manufacture, drug distribution, etc.
I loved Lee and Rory! The way their characters are written, the interactions / dialogue between them, and the angst built into their storyline … all of these could have been easily overdone, but Ava Gray brought them right to the brink.
I am a ‘visual reader’, meaning that I basically watch a movie in my mind as I read. Therefore, I hardly ever have enough descriptions for the characters or story universe, but I didn’t feel like I was missing anything concerning these as I read through this story.
This is a dark story, with a fast pace. I read it faster than I thought I would, just because it was hard to stop when I started. I am apparently really dark as well, because I really liked the storyline and the natural anxiety built into everything with Rory and Liam’s respective fathers.
There were still a couple of places where I had questions, or wanted more information, but nothing that made me want to lower the rating. These were inconsistent data mentioned in the excerpt of book two, and a scenario involving Dante, Rory’s involuntary fiancé, when he was captured and released.
There were also some grammatical errors. I mention them because they can be frustrating, disrupt the flow and cause the reader to disengage from the story. These included: typos, incorrect word tenses, missing words, incorrect punctuation (commas, periods, quotation marks), missing spaces before and after ellipsis, incorrect capitalization of honorifics, incorrect word choice, etc. I have a copy of my notes available for anyone interested.