Do you ever wonder if, as life goes on, we're going to run out of ideas for stories? Does it seem like a lot of the books out there are too similar? I don't think that'll happen--the world is constantly evolving, which alone, will garner endless ideas. But I think the author of 2 A.M. at the Cat's Pajamas does think we're running out of ideas...and she tries way too hard to create something original, resulting in exasperation on my part (Marie-Helene Bertino, you have the bones of a great story--you don't need to impress us with clever wordplay, weird dream sequences, confusing time flow, etc. etc.).
Come on, admit it--isn't that an enticing title? Doesn't the cover have a cool 60's vintage feel? Ok, you've got me...I'm in.
The story features three main characters and opens with Madeleine Altimari, a nine-year-old aspiring jazz singer, shimmying and scatting in her bedroom. How could you not love a character who's described in this way: "Madeleine prefers to spend this and every recess alone, singing scales under her breath, walking laps up and down the parking lot. Madeleine has no friends: Not because she contains a tender grace that fifth graders detect and loathe. Not because she has a natural ability that points her starward, though she does. Madeleine has no friends because she is a jerk." And she is, with good reason. Madeleine's mother has recently died and her grieving father refuses to get out of bed and take care of her. She takes care of herself the best a nine-year old can. Fortunately, she's surrounded by loving neighbors who promised Madeleine's mother they'd take care of her and they do. Still she's friendless and dirty, perfect reasons (to children) why her classmates should torment her. She's smart-assed and spunky and she's by far my favorite character.
The second main character is Madeleine's teacher, Sarina, who sees the aching little girl underneath her tough demeanor. She's recently divorced and hoping to connect with her high school boyfriend...the one who got away. She's decent and kind and a good teacher.
The third character is Jack Lorca and he's the owner of The Cat's Pajamas, a legendary jazz club where all the main characters will converge.
So far, this sounds like a story with good bones. Then, the author starts trying to get creative and clever and the whole thing goes off the rails, and now, I'm out. All three main characters are vibrant and interesting, so why does the author have to throw in chapters with a dog's viewpoint, a random conversation among people in a hair salon that has nothing to do with the story, Sarina's ex-husband, a pointless character who adds nothing to the story, and on and on? Why do they merit entire chapters? And Sarina, who the author has already established as a shy, kind person, is asked by some guys at a bachelor party to take their picture, and bam, this is how she responds: "Grab each other's cocks and let's go. Jerk each other off so this is worth my while. What I'm looking at is a bunch of worthless pussies and I wanna see cock." Excuse me, but along that vein, I say, WTF? I don't believe for one minute that Sarina would actually say that. She seems way too smart to think that might impress the person she's with (in fact, I think he's horrified). Then there are about-faces in time and weird dream sequences that are plopped in for who knows what reason, and so many minor characters popping up that I can't remember their places in the story.
Then it all ends with a very minor character bursting, then floating up into the sky and flying over the city. Yes, you read that right. Again, I say, WTF! What is the purpose of that chapter? By the way, I don't consider this a spoiler because the story has already had a satisfying ending and this second pointless ending has nothing to do with the story.
I wish the author would go back to those good bones. The three main characters are great, the setting of Philadelphia (which really could be considered a fourth character: "Good morning," the city says. Fuck you.") is great. But, this author looks young, and I guess she thinks she needs to establish her unique voice in order to stand out from the crowd. Next time, please don't try so hard.