This book could have been 100 pages shorter had the main characters' repetitive inner dialog been reduced to a minimum. Yes, we all argue with ourselves in the head, but reading it in a book over and over again is really quite annoying. The dialog consisted mainly of the following:
Female MC:
I love him!
But I can't really love him, we only just met!
Male MC:
I'm in love with her!
But I can't be in love with her, I'm not sure if she's a spy or not.
Female MC:
I traveled through time.
But how is that possible?
Cuz. Miracles!!
But what's the purpose of all this if I can't change the past?!?!
There were also several very awkward changes in point-of-view mid-section that were sloppy and really ruined the flow for me. The writer jumped between characters' heads far too often. I also felt the section where Clara goes to visit her high school teacher to prove that time travel is possible was completely unnecessary. Look, this is fiction. I will buy it if you say it happened and you make it believable (which the author did for this type of story). We, as readers, don't need an authority figure on science to step in and suggest time travel is possible, unless he were building a time machine or introducing the method for doing it. In this story, Clara wills her time travel to happen and that is enough for me. Science isn't about miracles...
I liked the story overall, but I was really disappointed with the ending. I expected that maybe because Jed's death was a "disappearance," he would find a way to travel into the future using the same miracle or "willing it to happen" as Clara employed to go back. I wanted him to come back and they could be together. Instead, Drew is introduced as a reincarnated Jed Landry, which, I dont know... That whole theory came late in the book and seemed like a cover up explanation for a quick ending... I even theorized that Drew was instead Jed under an assumed name or something (since he couldn't be Jed Landry anymore, being that he's supposed to be dead).
One small incongruity I noticed: How did Clara have her mittens in the end when she left them in 1941? At the beginning of the story, she talks about how she got them when she moved into her apartment (because Jed left them for her in 1941). Then she took them with her to her second trip to 1941, but she left them behind when she left, which is how Jed sent them to her through her future landlord. Then she has them again in 2006 when she leaves to go on the date with Drew... even though she had just returned from 1941 where she left them... Uh...?
Well, anyway, it was a fun read, despite my gripes. So it still gets 3 stars. I just wish the overall writing were a little tighter.