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The Promise
Mallory’s search for happiness leads her to a faraway place. There she finds heartache, betrayal—and danger.
Mallory Hammond is determined that no one will stand in the way of her goal—to save a life. She had that chance years ago, and she failed to take it, leaving her adrift and in search of the real meaning of her life. Finally, she meets a man online from a volatile corner of the world who offers her the chance to find that purpose. But she will have to leave everyone she loves behind in order to take it.
Tate Webber has loved Mallory for many years. He understands that Mallory will never be happy with him until her deepest heart’s desire is satisfied. When Mallory decides to travel across the world to fulfi ll her dreams, Tate begs her not to go but tries to give her the space she needs. Mallory embarks on her dangerous journey only to discover how swiftly and easily promises can be broken. And Mallory can only pray that she will make it out alive.
Inspired by actual events, The Promise is a riveting love story that asks the question: how far will we go for love?
Mallory Hammond is determined that no one will stand in the way of her goal—to save a life. She had that chance years ago, and she failed to take it, leaving her adrift and in search of the real meaning of her life. Finally, she meets a man online from a volatile corner of the world who offers her the chance to find that purpose. But she will have to leave everyone she loves behind in order to take it.
Tate Webber has loved Mallory for many years. He understands that Mallory will never be happy with him until her deepest heart’s desire is satisfied. When Mallory decides to travel across the world to fulfi ll her dreams, Tate begs her not to go but tries to give her the space she needs. Mallory embarks on her dangerous journey only to discover how swiftly and easily promises can be broken. And Mallory can only pray that she will make it out alive.
Inspired by actual events, The Promise is a riveting love story that asks the question: how far will we go for love?
320 pages, Paperback
First published January 1, 2014
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Beth Wiseman
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Beth is the best-selling and award winning author of the Daughters of the Promise series - Plain Perfect, Plain Pursuit, Plain Promise, Plain Paradise, and Plain Proposal. She is contracted with HarperCollins Christian Publishing. Her other series--the Land of Canaan Novels--begins with Seek Me With All Your Heart, then The Wonder of Your Love and now, His Love Endures Forever. Seek Me With All Your Heart is the first Amish fiction book selected as a Women of Faith novel in 2011. Beth has also written three contemporary Christian fiction novels, Need You Now published in 2012 and The House That Love Built in 2013. In The Promise, (2014) Beth jumps way outside the box. This story takes readers far away from Amish Country and small Texas towns to a dangerous place on the other side of the world. Inspired by a true story, Beth believes this is the book she’s been working toward for a long time. 2015 brings Beth back to the Pennsylvania Amish with her new series, Amish Secrets. She is currently working on book #2 following much success with book #1, Her Brother's Keeper.
You can also follow Beth on Twitter: @BethWiseman
Beth is the best-selling and award winning author of the Daughters of the Promise series - Plain Perfect, Plain Pursuit, Plain Promise, Plain Paradise, and Plain Proposal. She is contracted with HarperCollins Christian Publishing. Her other series--the Land of Canaan Novels--begins with Seek Me With All Your Heart, then The Wonder of Your Love and now, His Love Endures Forever. Seek Me With All Your Heart is the first Amish fiction book selected as a Women of Faith novel in 2011. Beth has also written three contemporary Christian fiction novels, Need You Now published in 2012 and The House That Love Built in 2013. In The Promise, (2014) Beth jumps way outside the box. This story takes readers far away from Amish Country and small Texas towns to a dangerous place on the other side of the world. Inspired by a true story, Beth believes this is the book she’s been working toward for a long time. 2015 brings Beth back to the Pennsylvania Amish with her new series, Amish Secrets. She is currently working on book #2 following much success with book #1, Her Brother's Keeper.
You can also follow Beth on Twitter: @BethWiseman
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November 3, 2014
I wasn't sure what to expect from reading The Promise. It definitely turned out to be quite different than what I thought it would be. The story deals with the aftermath of 9/11 in some ways, specifically with air travel, security, and how both Americans and Muslims felt towards each other. There was definitely a lack of trust created from those terrorist attacks and the subsequent reactions.
The story revolves around a woman, Mallory, in her young 30's whose tunnel vision for what she believes she should do tends to rule her life. What I wanted her to do was to stop and really think and be honest with herself. I also wanted her and Tate's relationship to be more resolved, or maybe it's more that I felt they never actually talked through or really worked out anything. I wanted it all to feel more authentic and for all involved to act reasonably. Of course, what would be the fun in that, right?
The story felt a little stilted at the beginning (had some issues connecting with it) and then flew by towards the end as I could feel Mallory's fear and desperation. There were some inspirational moments and discussions, but I felt they were on the lighter side and many things were left open. I wanted Mallery to go and figure things out and make it home. I wanted things to work out with Tate. I wanted Verdell to open up more and to get his own happily ever after. The potential was definitely there. I won't spoil anything and tell what happens.
Content: References to abuse, partners sleeping over, rape, violence, and adultery.
Source: From the publisher through Litfuse, which did not affect my review in any way.
The story revolves around a woman, Mallory, in her young 30's whose tunnel vision for what she believes she should do tends to rule her life. What I wanted her to do was to stop and really think and be honest with herself. I also wanted her and Tate's relationship to be more resolved, or maybe it's more that I felt they never actually talked through or really worked out anything. I wanted it all to feel more authentic and for all involved to act reasonably. Of course, what would be the fun in that, right?
The story felt a little stilted at the beginning (had some issues connecting with it) and then flew by towards the end as I could feel Mallory's fear and desperation. There were some inspirational moments and discussions, but I felt they were on the lighter side and many things were left open. I wanted Mallery to go and figure things out and make it home. I wanted things to work out with Tate. I wanted Verdell to open up more and to get his own happily ever after. The potential was definitely there. I won't spoil anything and tell what happens.
Content: References to abuse, partners sleeping over, rape, violence, and adultery.
Source: From the publisher through Litfuse, which did not affect my review in any way.
December 7, 2014
I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review from NetGalley.
Oh my gosh. Wow. This was such an amazing book. A little background first, and perhaps this will explain why this book hit so close to home for me. When I was younger, and carefree, and thought love made the world go ‘round, I fell in love with someone online and moved to another country, another continent. It was pre-9/11, and certainly in a safer place in the world than Mallory chose, but I was still in a culture shock, and abused as well. The story was so riveting for me because I could remember everything as I read the story. I felt everything all over again. A combination of the incredible way the author wrote, and my own experiences, made this one of the most powerful books I read in a few months.
Knowing that it was based on a true story, I can only wonder if Beth’s friend cried the same way I did, when I walked off the plane into Dulles airport and saw that large sign said “Welcome to the USA”.
Everyone just has to read this book.
Oh my gosh. Wow. This was such an amazing book. A little background first, and perhaps this will explain why this book hit so close to home for me. When I was younger, and carefree, and thought love made the world go ‘round, I fell in love with someone online and moved to another country, another continent. It was pre-9/11, and certainly in a safer place in the world than Mallory chose, but I was still in a culture shock, and abused as well. The story was so riveting for me because I could remember everything as I read the story. I felt everything all over again. A combination of the incredible way the author wrote, and my own experiences, made this one of the most powerful books I read in a few months.
Knowing that it was based on a true story, I can only wonder if Beth’s friend cried the same way I did, when I walked off the plane into Dulles airport and saw that large sign said “Welcome to the USA”.
Everyone just has to read this book.
April 25, 2015
I used to read a lot of Amish/Christian type reads, and when I saw a Beth Wiseman book on Net Galley I requested it, seeing as it was the kind of books I used to enjoy I thought I would travel back and read one of hers as I have read ones written by her previously.
I have to say though, this is NOT at all what I expected. The Beth Wiseman books I have previously enjoyed I cannot fault, but the topic in this one left me a bit 'yawny' and although I finished it from front page to last page, I can honestly say, I was glad when I closed my Kindle. I don't mean that to sound harsh, I just am telling it how I felt, I just didn't enjoy this one. I wanted to, I just couldn't.
Its sort of loosely based around facts of 9/11 talking of security and air travel.
Muslims and that sort of thing.
The basis of the story was good, the part where this Pakastan chap needed to get treatment for his 16 year old daughter was the best bit that stood out for me.
It just slipped and slide, I just couldn't focus.
I would like to thank Thomas Nelson--FICTION via Net galley for copy
November 7, 2014
The fact that this story is inspired by actual events amazes me! My goodness. This story had me hooked from the prologue. You start the story off with such hope as Mallory has wonderful news for her cousin, but we come to find out years later, her hope was crushed and a new desire has come in to play.
Mallory is a girl who has a deep passion to help someone. She suffered a trauma when she was younger and it has haunted her ever since. As I progressed into the story, Mallory came off as a girl who was a very innocent and naive girl. Her desire to help someone overcame who she is and kept her from seeing the things around her. I thought it was an admirable trait to have in wanting to help, but she tended to take it to the extreme and it left her vulnerable.
Beth Wiseman has realness to her writing. That is what hooked me. Her characters are flawed, there are many good qualities, but they aren't perfect. It's like life. I love that in stories. Mallory is determined to follow her desire to finish her quest, her boyfriend Tate is a good guy. He is a guy who has faith and has grown up in the church, but he doesn't live it all the time.
I was also impressed with how Beth wove in the struggle that people face when it comes to religion. Tate has a solid background and wants Mallory to join him when he does go to church, but because of a good friend and her fiancee's background in Islam, Mallory starts to pursue it and in doing so, she jumbles things up and she suffers a major misunderstanding. With the things that is fed to Mallory, it is easy to see why there is confusion. Mallory never had a background in church and only goes on what she think she knows or the brief snippets she's heard in her life. She has no foundation.
Mallory's story is a bit rough. The idea of flying to a war zone is staggering, but she does and when she is there she sees and experiences things she never could have imagined. You just hurt for her and hope she can find an escape. I honestly could not put this story down. The last hundred pages had me turning pages as quickly as I could to see what was going to happen. It was a thrilling read as you followed Mallory through everything.
This story not only was thrilling, but it was also a good reminder....what you see on the internet is not always the case. Tread carefully. So many people have been hurt because of this. Sociopaths know the ins and outs. Mallory's story shows that so clearly.
I could not put this one down. I look forward to reading more by Beth Wiseman!
Thank you to Thomas Nelson and Litfuse Publicity, I received a copy of this book for free in exchange for an honest review.
This review was originally posted @ http://wordsfromabookaholic.blogspot....
Mallory is a girl who has a deep passion to help someone. She suffered a trauma when she was younger and it has haunted her ever since. As I progressed into the story, Mallory came off as a girl who was a very innocent and naive girl. Her desire to help someone overcame who she is and kept her from seeing the things around her. I thought it was an admirable trait to have in wanting to help, but she tended to take it to the extreme and it left her vulnerable.
Beth Wiseman has realness to her writing. That is what hooked me. Her characters are flawed, there are many good qualities, but they aren't perfect. It's like life. I love that in stories. Mallory is determined to follow her desire to finish her quest, her boyfriend Tate is a good guy. He is a guy who has faith and has grown up in the church, but he doesn't live it all the time.
I was also impressed with how Beth wove in the struggle that people face when it comes to religion. Tate has a solid background and wants Mallory to join him when he does go to church, but because of a good friend and her fiancee's background in Islam, Mallory starts to pursue it and in doing so, she jumbles things up and she suffers a major misunderstanding. With the things that is fed to Mallory, it is easy to see why there is confusion. Mallory never had a background in church and only goes on what she think she knows or the brief snippets she's heard in her life. She has no foundation.
Mallory's story is a bit rough. The idea of flying to a war zone is staggering, but she does and when she is there she sees and experiences things she never could have imagined. You just hurt for her and hope she can find an escape. I honestly could not put this story down. The last hundred pages had me turning pages as quickly as I could to see what was going to happen. It was a thrilling read as you followed Mallory through everything.
This story not only was thrilling, but it was also a good reminder....what you see on the internet is not always the case. Tread carefully. So many people have been hurt because of this. Sociopaths know the ins and outs. Mallory's story shows that so clearly.
I could not put this one down. I look forward to reading more by Beth Wiseman!
Thank you to Thomas Nelson and Litfuse Publicity, I received a copy of this book for free in exchange for an honest review.
This review was originally posted @ http://wordsfromabookaholic.blogspot....
January 12, 2017
Mallory is driven by a promise she made to her dying cousin when she was a teenager. Her cousin was dying because she couldn't get a kidney transplant, and Mallory's parents wouldn't let her donate one. Mallory promised her cousin she would save a life.
Now Mallory is an adult, and is all set to make a kidney transplant, when she finds out she has a rare gene that won't allow her to transplant one. She is shattered, and desperately looks for a new way to fulfill her promise. That isn't the only thing going wrong in her life though.
Mallory's boyfriend has gotten offered a once in a lifetime job opportunity, but the only problem is that it is in another state. Mallory doesn't want to leave her job, and she doesn't feel ready to marry Tate either, even though she can't imagine life without him. They are at a standstill.
After fighting with Tate one night, Mallory calls another friend and stumbles upon someone in need. Her coworkers family lives in India, and has a cousin that is going to die without medical service that is not available in India. Her only option is to come to the United States, but obtaining a visa isn't possible without her dad marrying an american women. This is a very dangerous situation, but driven by the need to fulfill her promise, and after fighting with Tate, Mallory agrees.
She will need to travel to one of the most dangerous parts of India to marry this stranger, all to save a life. Everyone tries to discourage her from going, but eventually she does.
Once there, she realizes that everything is not as it seems. The man she is supposed to be marrying has an ex wife that still lives in the same house. Mysterious bruises show up on the children, and stories seem to be changing. She then finds out that the girl that supposedly has cancer, is pregnant, but hides it because her father would "honer kill" her otherwise, because she is not married. So then why does the father say that the daughter has cancer? There is more to the story than good deeds, and once Mallory figures that out, she is forced into marriage and kept hostage.
Will Tate save her, or does he not care anymore?
I liked this book because of the real situations that happened, and it shows how you need to use good judgement and common sense. I felt as though the author exaggerated some of the effects though, and I think it would be a better story if she kept it as real as possible.
I recommend this book to teens and adults who enjoy realistic fiction.
Now Mallory is an adult, and is all set to make a kidney transplant, when she finds out she has a rare gene that won't allow her to transplant one. She is shattered, and desperately looks for a new way to fulfill her promise. That isn't the only thing going wrong in her life though.
Mallory's boyfriend has gotten offered a once in a lifetime job opportunity, but the only problem is that it is in another state. Mallory doesn't want to leave her job, and she doesn't feel ready to marry Tate either, even though she can't imagine life without him. They are at a standstill.
After fighting with Tate one night, Mallory calls another friend and stumbles upon someone in need. Her coworkers family lives in India, and has a cousin that is going to die without medical service that is not available in India. Her only option is to come to the United States, but obtaining a visa isn't possible without her dad marrying an american women. This is a very dangerous situation, but driven by the need to fulfill her promise, and after fighting with Tate, Mallory agrees.
She will need to travel to one of the most dangerous parts of India to marry this stranger, all to save a life. Everyone tries to discourage her from going, but eventually she does.
Once there, she realizes that everything is not as it seems. The man she is supposed to be marrying has an ex wife that still lives in the same house. Mysterious bruises show up on the children, and stories seem to be changing. She then finds out that the girl that supposedly has cancer, is pregnant, but hides it because her father would "honer kill" her otherwise, because she is not married. So then why does the father say that the daughter has cancer? There is more to the story than good deeds, and once Mallory figures that out, she is forced into marriage and kept hostage.
Will Tate save her, or does he not care anymore?
I liked this book because of the real situations that happened, and it shows how you need to use good judgement and common sense. I felt as though the author exaggerated some of the effects though, and I think it would be a better story if she kept it as real as possible.
I recommend this book to teens and adults who enjoy realistic fiction.
November 6, 2014
When seventeen-year-old Mallory wasn’t allowed to donate the kidney that would have saved her cousin’s life, she made a promise to herself that one day she would do it. She would save a life. Twelve years later, she has another opportunity, but her parents aren’t going to like this one either, because it involves a trip to Pakistan and a sick teen. And her long-term boyfriend, Tate, isn’t happy either.
I quickly discovered Mallory is my least-favourite kind of fictional heroine: noble, academically bright but naïve, with little understanding of life outside her first-world bubble. She shows herself to be easily led--in the wrong direction--as she makes a vital decision based on some basic internet research, and has no idea what she’s letting herself in for. I hoped I’d be wrong about the way the story would progress, but I wasn’t (although it could have been worse. It usually is, based on the stories I used to read in the London newspapers when I lived there).
However, I really liked Tate. There was a nobility and intelligence about him that Mallory lacked, but he still had two major faults, one being Mallory. My dislike of her aside, Tate is a committed Catholic who attends Mass and believes Jesus is the only way to God. Mallory has no personal faith, and has never read the Bible, yet is happy to start reading the Quran—so why is Tate in a relationship with her? The second fault is that he cries. A lot. I guess that as a music teacher she’s supposed to be the sensitive new age (?) guy, the metrosexual who is in touch with his feelings. Maybe. But it came across as girly (note: this isn’t intended to be a sexist comment. I get equally annoyed by fictional women who cry all the time).
I can imagine a lot of people are going to rave about this novel. It’s based on real-life events the author was personally involved in—but I didn't find that out to the end. Maybe I'd have been able to feel more sympathy for Mallory if I'd known.
The writing is solid (not spectacular, but solid), it’s touching on subjects and issues not usually seen in Christian fiction, and it certainly inspired emotion in my as I read. The first half of the book was a real struggle as I kept hoping Mallory would come to her senses (and knowing she wouldn’t). The second half was a lot better, with a lot more action and suspense, but overall, I found the novel a frustrating read.
Thanks to Litfuse Publicity and NetGalley for providing a free ebook for review.
I quickly discovered Mallory is my least-favourite kind of fictional heroine: noble, academically bright but naïve, with little understanding of life outside her first-world bubble. She shows herself to be easily led--in the wrong direction--as she makes a vital decision based on some basic internet research, and has no idea what she’s letting herself in for. I hoped I’d be wrong about the way the story would progress, but I wasn’t (although it could have been worse. It usually is, based on the stories I used to read in the London newspapers when I lived there).
However, I really liked Tate. There was a nobility and intelligence about him that Mallory lacked, but he still had two major faults, one being Mallory. My dislike of her aside, Tate is a committed Catholic who attends Mass and believes Jesus is the only way to God. Mallory has no personal faith, and has never read the Bible, yet is happy to start reading the Quran—so why is Tate in a relationship with her? The second fault is that he cries. A lot. I guess that as a music teacher she’s supposed to be the sensitive new age (?) guy, the metrosexual who is in touch with his feelings. Maybe. But it came across as girly (note: this isn’t intended to be a sexist comment. I get equally annoyed by fictional women who cry all the time).
I can imagine a lot of people are going to rave about this novel. It’s based on real-life events the author was personally involved in—but I didn't find that out to the end. Maybe I'd have been able to feel more sympathy for Mallory if I'd known.
The writing is solid (not spectacular, but solid), it’s touching on subjects and issues not usually seen in Christian fiction, and it certainly inspired emotion in my as I read. The first half of the book was a real struggle as I kept hoping Mallory would come to her senses (and knowing she wouldn’t). The second half was a lot better, with a lot more action and suspense, but overall, I found the novel a frustrating read.
Thanks to Litfuse Publicity and NetGalley for providing a free ebook for review.
May 19, 2015
The book tells the story of Mallory Hammond's promise to a dying cousin. Since she couldn't donate her kidney to Kelsey as she was too young for an operation, she vowed to do it and save someone else's life when she's older.
Right after college, Mallory spent all her time literally looking at every opportunity where she can save life. She even worked in a medical clinic so she can help people while waiting to fulfill her promise. One day, an opportunity came knocking on her door. A dying girl from Pakistan needs to travel to the US so she can have a chance for a better treatment. Although she knew traveling to a war-torn Pakistan would be a dangerous mission, she packed her bag and went to fetch the Pakistani girl.
Thought The Promise is the best Christian book I have read from Thomas Nelson. It talks about how people with different faith and background, still could get along, could feel love to one another as long as they respect each other's belief. Mallory, the main character is a non-believer while her boyfriend is a devout Catholic, her boss and his fiancée are both Muslim. The Promise is tagged as a Christian book, which is usually a slow read. I was pleasantly surprised that the story is intense, lots of action and suspense. Overall, this is an extremely good read, can't wait to read more from this author!
Right after college, Mallory spent all her time literally looking at every opportunity where she can save life. She even worked in a medical clinic so she can help people while waiting to fulfill her promise. One day, an opportunity came knocking on her door. A dying girl from Pakistan needs to travel to the US so she can have a chance for a better treatment. Although she knew traveling to a war-torn Pakistan would be a dangerous mission, she packed her bag and went to fetch the Pakistani girl.
Thought The Promise is the best Christian book I have read from Thomas Nelson. It talks about how people with different faith and background, still could get along, could feel love to one another as long as they respect each other's belief. Mallory, the main character is a non-believer while her boyfriend is a devout Catholic, her boss and his fiancée are both Muslim. The Promise is tagged as a Christian book, which is usually a slow read. I was pleasantly surprised that the story is intense, lots of action and suspense. Overall, this is an extremely good read, can't wait to read more from this author!
June 25, 2016
3.5 stars!!!
I had no expectations going into this book, as I haven't heard anything (good or bad) about it & the synopsis was incredibly vague, but I think that's the best way to go into reading this-knowing nothing. It had absolutely nothing to do with what I had thought it was going to, which actually a really nice surprise lol. The storyline is unlike anything I have ever read before, which I greatly appreciated because I have been looking for something new and not romancy, and although the main two characters are dating, it (thankfully) doesn't take up the entire novel. They do proclaim early on that they are Christian, and this is labeled as a Christian book, but aside from praying & Mallory's occasional conversation with her Muslim friends about God, Christianity really isn't a big factor in this book. Kind of tying in with that, I learned so much about the Muslim culture and religion, which I really really enjoyed. Obviously there is undoubtedly so much more to learn about it all, but the information in this book (which I am just going to assume is true & Wiseman did her research) got the ball rolling.
Overall it was a really easy read (however in the beginning it seemed really cheesy & almost cliché) but I did enjoy it & the last 100 pages or so really stressed me out, which is good sign when a book has the power to do that!
I had no expectations going into this book, as I haven't heard anything (good or bad) about it & the synopsis was incredibly vague, but I think that's the best way to go into reading this-knowing nothing. It had absolutely nothing to do with what I had thought it was going to, which actually a really nice surprise lol. The storyline is unlike anything I have ever read before, which I greatly appreciated because I have been looking for something new and not romancy, and although the main two characters are dating, it (thankfully) doesn't take up the entire novel. They do proclaim early on that they are Christian, and this is labeled as a Christian book, but aside from praying & Mallory's occasional conversation with her Muslim friends about God, Christianity really isn't a big factor in this book. Kind of tying in with that, I learned so much about the Muslim culture and religion, which I really really enjoyed. Obviously there is undoubtedly so much more to learn about it all, but the information in this book (which I am just going to assume is true & Wiseman did her research) got the ball rolling.
Overall it was a really easy read (however in the beginning it seemed really cheesy & almost cliché) but I did enjoy it & the last 100 pages or so really stressed me out, which is good sign when a book has the power to do that!
December 1, 2014
I do not give a 5 star rating lightly. My record this year is awarding 5% of my reads a 5 star rating. The book has to be phenomenal or move me dramatically. I've read one other book my Beth Wiseman, The House that Love Built, and that was an enjoyable contemporary romance. The Promise was simply amazing.
I read this novel, which was based upon a true story, in less than 24 hours. In the final pages, I couldn't read quickly enough to keep up with the suspense.
This novel was about a young woman named Mallory who's number one bucket list item was to help save the life of another. I hesitate to say much more as I do not want to give anything away.
This novel is recommended for those who enjoy contemporary Christian Fiction.
I read this novel, which was based upon a true story, in less than 24 hours. In the final pages, I couldn't read quickly enough to keep up with the suspense.
This novel was about a young woman named Mallory who's number one bucket list item was to help save the life of another. I hesitate to say much more as I do not want to give anything away.
This novel is recommended for those who enjoy contemporary Christian Fiction.
May 29, 2015
Just a few notes:
I listened to the audiobook of this title performed by Rebecca Gallagher.
The narrators voice was pleasant and I would gladly listen to another performance.
As for the book, it was well written and entertaining. I found the main character to be likable even though she made a few really poor/foolish/gullible decisions. These choice ultimately serve to test and refine Mallory's faith.
Over the course of the story I gained new insights into Islam as well as Muslim customs and traditions in Pakistan.
I listened to the audiobook of this title performed by Rebecca Gallagher.
The narrators voice was pleasant and I would gladly listen to another performance.
As for the book, it was well written and entertaining. I found the main character to be likable even though she made a few really poor/foolish/gullible decisions. These choice ultimately serve to test and refine Mallory's faith.
Over the course of the story I gained new insights into Islam as well as Muslim customs and traditions in Pakistan.
January 3, 2015
Oh my gosh! This book had me on my toes the whole time, never knowing what was going to happen next! I got to points in the books were I was literally shaking-from head to toe. I definitely liked all of the new informaton that I learned about Pakistan and also learning more about their religion. I would most definitely reccomend this book, especially if you like learning about different cultures and religions.
October 29, 2018
I read Christian fiction books, and this was not it. Sorry, I stopped reading this book after two chapters, because I was confused. Islam? Catholic boyfriend, inching his girlfriend toward the bedroom? “Why don’t we just move in together...?” Went on Goodreads to read the reviews and even get spoilers, trying to understand why Thomas Nelson publishing would publish this book. Allah and God are not the same, by the way.
June 8, 2018
Good information except a glaring mistake, they kept saying that the one true God and Allah were the same. See link for info: http://www.bpnews.net/16527/differenc...
October 13, 2014
Wonderful story. I enjoyed it very much (though I wanted to shake the main character).
Beth Wiseman writes characters that draw us into the story.
This one is definitely five stars.
Beth Wiseman writes characters that draw us into the story.
This one is definitely five stars.
May 12, 2018
If you enjoy books about weak and stupid women, then this is the one for you. I'm also not sure how it could possibly be labeled as Christian fiction.
May 26, 2015
*WARNING - CONTAINS SPOILERS*
A quick review - a naive American woman who DESPITE WARNINGS falls for a muslim man, thinking she is going to do the ultimate and save a life. Flies to Peshawar, Pakistan, stays with the family, finds out there is no life to be saved and she has been lied to, becomes forced to marry the man who was so sweet to her on Skype, is abused by him and his other wife, gets stuck in the country, expecting the American Embassy to help get her out of trouble, OR, she has now become a key player in Human Trafficking, being expected to earn her keep, if you know what I mean.
The REAL review:
One star for taking the time to TRY to write a story that is not Amish. This author needs to stick with writing her Amish stories because in my opinion, that is ALL she CAN write. I have NEVER been as disappointed and upset as I was while reading this book over ANY other book. Don't get FOOLED into buying or borrowing this book and wasting your time to read it like I did.
I saw this book at NetGalley at Thomas Nelson Publishers and had seen it around other blogs for quite a while, (that should have been a clue to me as to 'why' it was STILL AT NETGALLEY!) The cover is catchy, and I always wondered what this book was about, but I never noticed or read what the book was about, and knew the author was popular for writing a lot of Amish books, so I thought I would take a chance as it had potential. 'Had potential' is one of the key words here. It's a huge FAIL!
Let me tell you one thing before I continue. I have taken WEEKS which turned into MONTHS writing this review out. I ditched every single review I wrote. I tried and tried to write a review that wasn't so long it wouldn't bore you to death. I kept putting my own opinions in, took them out, then finally decided I'll just tell it like it is. Pathetic!
This book is supposed to be based upon a true story, but I don't know ONE PERSON who could possibly be this naive and flat-out dumb, but this book has been written, so I guess that one person is out there. This author has written a character who is such a push-over, stupid, and yes, I said STUPID! This young woman is in her twenties and I think she crawled out from behind a ROCK! No one would do what she did without asking a single question, or even doubting what she was about to do, but she does it! Unbelievable in every meaning of the word!
Mallory, at age 17, had a cousin dying from a kidney disease and was on dialysis for it. This cousin was in the end stages of her life as her kidneys were not working to remove the waste from your body. Mallory already knows she can't have children. (How? We never are given an explanation.) She goes through all the testing and would have been able to donate her kidney to save her cousin's life, and since she could not have children, I'm assuming she could give a kidney and not have to worry about only having one? The author does not tell us this.
Mallory's parents said no. We are never given a reason WHY they said no, they just said no. Her cousin dies, but Mallory still wants to save someone's life. I guess now she is an adult and in her twenties (when I keep saying I guess or I am assuming something, that is because the author has conveniently left that part out!) and she still wants to carry out this 'save a life' thing. Great. I'm all for it. I guess like attracts like because she has a boyfriend named Tate, and he never questions this event that she is willing to walk into as well. He has to be just as naive! (I just can't believe this author would write such a story and ask us, the Reader, to believe this!!!)
Mallory works with an Indian woman named Soraya, married to Ismail. He is friends with a man named Abdul, and he lives in Peshawar, (near Istanbul) Pakistan, one of the most dangerous cities in that country. Abdul supposedly has a daughter who has cancer, and if Mallory will marry him, he can bring her here to the US to get treatment for her here. Soraya thinks this is a good idea; and she is putting ALL her trust into her husband, Ismail. She is believes in him and tells Mallory. (Remember that.) The author hints something is amiss with this story, but that is all she does, never telling us just what it is.
Mallory and Abdul start to Skype. It is during these phone calls that Mallory starts to talk about religion with Abdul. Mallory does not own a Bible, but DOES go out and buys a Qur'an. This sends Tate off the deep end!
Abdul is Islam . . . just wait! Malory has to be screwed up. Abdul praises her constantly with compliments, understanding of her confusion about religion, kind and understanding to her, but he crosses the line when he talks about what a beautiful woman she is, how nice she is, and how can she not be married yet? Mallory crosses the line when she accepts Abdul's compliments, making her blush and feel good about herself, and she looks forward to these phone calls despite her having Tate as a boyfriend whom she loves, and he love her back with a vengeance.
Abdul is apparently over the moon in love with her. (Wait! Isn't she supposed to be going there to help save a life and should NOT be being courted?) The boyfriend doesn’t find anything wrong about this except about the religion they were trying to confuse her over??? Or, as we’ve come to know Mallory by now, has she not told him anything about what Abdul is saying to her? That is probably the most logical reason. Mallory looks up the country and sees the US has US Citizen TRAVEL WARNINGS all over every website she goes to. That tells her nothing! If it were me, I would NOT be going! She goes!!!
On one of the Skype calls, she sees a woman's arm serving Abdul tea. She asks who that is, and Abdul has an explanation that his divorced wife still lives with him because she is the mother of their children. She ACCEPTS this answer! As you can tell, red flags are popping up all over the place! Off Mallory goes on the plane to Peshawar, Pakistan.
(Here is a map to help you understand where she went.)
You can see this map at my blog post that has this review posted at. Here is the link:
http://www.lauriehere.com/2015/05/rev...
(Photo courtesy of http://www.kwintessential.co.uk/resou...)
As Mallory was getting off the plane, an American man approached her to talk to her and tried to find out what she was doing there and tried to make sure she knew of the danger. He pressed his business card discreetly in her hand and said to call him if needed. She thought this was strange and she wouldn't need his card. Hello? She's in the middle of the thick of things, of people who do not get along, etc! Trust me, she needed that business card!
As you can see, Peshawar is right next to Afghanistan. There was a cross of Pakistani's and Afghanistan's in the crowds in the city. There were vehicles with men holding guns, men walking around with guns, etc. If you can imagine it, it was written in this book. This part of the book was the most detailed. At least it shows this author can do research. It didn't take long for me to learn this is NOT a country for a blonde haired, blue-eyed, light skinned American woman to go to!)
At this point do I care? No! I have no sympathy for this woman, and I'm not sorry about it. The author has failed to give me any convincing reason to even like Mallory. All I think of about Mallory is she is so dumb to have fallen for such a plan! I knew this was going to happen!
Within a week of Mallory being in Pakistan living with Abdul and his family, including his wife, she finds out his daughter does NOT have cancer. What is she here for? To save a life, yet there is NO LIFE TO BE SAVED!
Eventually, Abdul forcefully marries Mallory. As everyone is going to bed that night, Abdul's wife looks over to her and smirks, telling Mallory that Abdul will be sleeping with her tonight, NOT Mallory.
Okay. Abdul is practicing polygamy, a part of the Islam religion.
NOW Mallory wakes up! Now she sees she must get out of that country, and fast. Fast is NOT a word in Pakistan. She contacts that man at the American Embassy and in the book it sounds like it only takes a few weeks to get her out, but in reality, in reading the author's notes, it sounds like it may have taken a year or two to get her out.
So, do you think Tate is still waiting for her back here in the states? Yes, in real life he does help her get home.
I just can't believe someone who had EVERYTHING would drop and LOSE EVERYTHING for a man, a LIAR in Pakistan!
Oh! The BEST part - I almost forgot! Soraya found out what her husband did to help Abdul. She left him! Yes! I LOVE it!!
In closing, I just want to say if you feel you have a calling, even to save a life, DO IT IN THE USA!
Here are some links to help you do what you feel called to do:
Living Donors - to donate a kidney IN THE USA:
http://www.kidneyregistry.org/living_...
and
http://www.ungift.org/knowledgehub/en...
Look EVERYTHING up online before your feet hit ANY foreign soil! Today there are bound to be OODLES of websites and information at your FINGERTIPS before you go and put your body in danger! Thank you.
A quick review - a naive American woman who DESPITE WARNINGS falls for a muslim man, thinking she is going to do the ultimate and save a life. Flies to Peshawar, Pakistan, stays with the family, finds out there is no life to be saved and she has been lied to, becomes forced to marry the man who was so sweet to her on Skype, is abused by him and his other wife, gets stuck in the country, expecting the American Embassy to help get her out of trouble, OR, she has now become a key player in Human Trafficking, being expected to earn her keep, if you know what I mean.
The REAL review:
One star for taking the time to TRY to write a story that is not Amish. This author needs to stick with writing her Amish stories because in my opinion, that is ALL she CAN write. I have NEVER been as disappointed and upset as I was while reading this book over ANY other book. Don't get FOOLED into buying or borrowing this book and wasting your time to read it like I did.
I saw this book at NetGalley at Thomas Nelson Publishers and had seen it around other blogs for quite a while, (that should have been a clue to me as to 'why' it was STILL AT NETGALLEY!) The cover is catchy, and I always wondered what this book was about, but I never noticed or read what the book was about, and knew the author was popular for writing a lot of Amish books, so I thought I would take a chance as it had potential. 'Had potential' is one of the key words here. It's a huge FAIL!
Let me tell you one thing before I continue. I have taken WEEKS which turned into MONTHS writing this review out. I ditched every single review I wrote. I tried and tried to write a review that wasn't so long it wouldn't bore you to death. I kept putting my own opinions in, took them out, then finally decided I'll just tell it like it is. Pathetic!
This book is supposed to be based upon a true story, but I don't know ONE PERSON who could possibly be this naive and flat-out dumb, but this book has been written, so I guess that one person is out there. This author has written a character who is such a push-over, stupid, and yes, I said STUPID! This young woman is in her twenties and I think she crawled out from behind a ROCK! No one would do what she did without asking a single question, or even doubting what she was about to do, but she does it! Unbelievable in every meaning of the word!
Mallory, at age 17, had a cousin dying from a kidney disease and was on dialysis for it. This cousin was in the end stages of her life as her kidneys were not working to remove the waste from your body. Mallory already knows she can't have children. (How? We never are given an explanation.) She goes through all the testing and would have been able to donate her kidney to save her cousin's life, and since she could not have children, I'm assuming she could give a kidney and not have to worry about only having one? The author does not tell us this.
Mallory's parents said no. We are never given a reason WHY they said no, they just said no. Her cousin dies, but Mallory still wants to save someone's life. I guess now she is an adult and in her twenties (when I keep saying I guess or I am assuming something, that is because the author has conveniently left that part out!) and she still wants to carry out this 'save a life' thing. Great. I'm all for it. I guess like attracts like because she has a boyfriend named Tate, and he never questions this event that she is willing to walk into as well. He has to be just as naive! (I just can't believe this author would write such a story and ask us, the Reader, to believe this!!!)
Mallory works with an Indian woman named Soraya, married to Ismail. He is friends with a man named Abdul, and he lives in Peshawar, (near Istanbul) Pakistan, one of the most dangerous cities in that country. Abdul supposedly has a daughter who has cancer, and if Mallory will marry him, he can bring her here to the US to get treatment for her here. Soraya thinks this is a good idea; and she is putting ALL her trust into her husband, Ismail. She is believes in him and tells Mallory. (Remember that.) The author hints something is amiss with this story, but that is all she does, never telling us just what it is.
Mallory and Abdul start to Skype. It is during these phone calls that Mallory starts to talk about religion with Abdul. Mallory does not own a Bible, but DOES go out and buys a Qur'an. This sends Tate off the deep end!
Abdul is Islam . . . just wait! Malory has to be screwed up. Abdul praises her constantly with compliments, understanding of her confusion about religion, kind and understanding to her, but he crosses the line when he talks about what a beautiful woman she is, how nice she is, and how can she not be married yet? Mallory crosses the line when she accepts Abdul's compliments, making her blush and feel good about herself, and she looks forward to these phone calls despite her having Tate as a boyfriend whom she loves, and he love her back with a vengeance.
Abdul is apparently over the moon in love with her. (Wait! Isn't she supposed to be going there to help save a life and should NOT be being courted?) The boyfriend doesn’t find anything wrong about this except about the religion they were trying to confuse her over??? Or, as we’ve come to know Mallory by now, has she not told him anything about what Abdul is saying to her? That is probably the most logical reason. Mallory looks up the country and sees the US has US Citizen TRAVEL WARNINGS all over every website she goes to. That tells her nothing! If it were me, I would NOT be going! She goes!!!
On one of the Skype calls, she sees a woman's arm serving Abdul tea. She asks who that is, and Abdul has an explanation that his divorced wife still lives with him because she is the mother of their children. She ACCEPTS this answer! As you can tell, red flags are popping up all over the place! Off Mallory goes on the plane to Peshawar, Pakistan.
(Here is a map to help you understand where she went.)
You can see this map at my blog post that has this review posted at. Here is the link:
http://www.lauriehere.com/2015/05/rev...
(Photo courtesy of http://www.kwintessential.co.uk/resou...)
As Mallory was getting off the plane, an American man approached her to talk to her and tried to find out what she was doing there and tried to make sure she knew of the danger. He pressed his business card discreetly in her hand and said to call him if needed. She thought this was strange and she wouldn't need his card. Hello? She's in the middle of the thick of things, of people who do not get along, etc! Trust me, she needed that business card!
As you can see, Peshawar is right next to Afghanistan. There was a cross of Pakistani's and Afghanistan's in the crowds in the city. There were vehicles with men holding guns, men walking around with guns, etc. If you can imagine it, it was written in this book. This part of the book was the most detailed. At least it shows this author can do research. It didn't take long for me to learn this is NOT a country for a blonde haired, blue-eyed, light skinned American woman to go to!)
At this point do I care? No! I have no sympathy for this woman, and I'm not sorry about it. The author has failed to give me any convincing reason to even like Mallory. All I think of about Mallory is she is so dumb to have fallen for such a plan! I knew this was going to happen!
Within a week of Mallory being in Pakistan living with Abdul and his family, including his wife, she finds out his daughter does NOT have cancer. What is she here for? To save a life, yet there is NO LIFE TO BE SAVED!
Eventually, Abdul forcefully marries Mallory. As everyone is going to bed that night, Abdul's wife looks over to her and smirks, telling Mallory that Abdul will be sleeping with her tonight, NOT Mallory.
Okay. Abdul is practicing polygamy, a part of the Islam religion.
NOW Mallory wakes up! Now she sees she must get out of that country, and fast. Fast is NOT a word in Pakistan. She contacts that man at the American Embassy and in the book it sounds like it only takes a few weeks to get her out, but in reality, in reading the author's notes, it sounds like it may have taken a year or two to get her out.
So, do you think Tate is still waiting for her back here in the states? Yes, in real life he does help her get home.
I just can't believe someone who had EVERYTHING would drop and LOSE EVERYTHING for a man, a LIAR in Pakistan!
Oh! The BEST part - I almost forgot! Soraya found out what her husband did to help Abdul. She left him! Yes! I LOVE it!!
In closing, I just want to say if you feel you have a calling, even to save a life, DO IT IN THE USA!
Here are some links to help you do what you feel called to do:
Living Donors - to donate a kidney IN THE USA:
http://www.kidneyregistry.org/living_...
and
http://www.ungift.org/knowledgehub/en...
Look EVERYTHING up online before your feet hit ANY foreign soil! Today there are bound to be OODLES of websites and information at your FINGERTIPS before you go and put your body in danger! Thank you.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 11, 2016
This review is also posted on Book by Book.
Prior to reading The Promise, I had only experienced novellas by Beth Wiseman (“A July Bride” and “When Christmas Comes Again” – both thoroughly enjoyable, by the way), so I was very interested to see what she could do in a full-length novel. And Wiseman’s The Promise definitely satisfied my curiosity and left me completely impressed. An excellently engaging story so different than the ones I usually read, it has even more to offer than the intriguing back-of-the-book blurb gives away – and is incredibly based on true events, too. Wow. I had no idea that the sort of deception and manipulation Mallory experiences actually happens, and that is utterly mind-boggling. On more than one occasion, my heart broke for Mallory, who just wants to do a good deed, and her unfortunate circumstances. Her journey is emotional, heartfelt and culturally fascinating and I couldn’t stop reading until I knew how it ends. Incredibly worth a read, The Promise is a book I would recommend. Read it.
Thanks to LitFuse Publicity Group, I received a copy of The Promise and the opportunity to provide an honest review. I was not required to write a positive review, and all the opinions I have expressed are my own.
Prior to reading The Promise, I had only experienced novellas by Beth Wiseman (“A July Bride” and “When Christmas Comes Again” – both thoroughly enjoyable, by the way), so I was very interested to see what she could do in a full-length novel. And Wiseman’s The Promise definitely satisfied my curiosity and left me completely impressed. An excellently engaging story so different than the ones I usually read, it has even more to offer than the intriguing back-of-the-book blurb gives away – and is incredibly based on true events, too. Wow. I had no idea that the sort of deception and manipulation Mallory experiences actually happens, and that is utterly mind-boggling. On more than one occasion, my heart broke for Mallory, who just wants to do a good deed, and her unfortunate circumstances. Her journey is emotional, heartfelt and culturally fascinating and I couldn’t stop reading until I knew how it ends. Incredibly worth a read, The Promise is a book I would recommend. Read it.
Thanks to LitFuse Publicity Group, I received a copy of The Promise and the opportunity to provide an honest review. I was not required to write a positive review, and all the opinions I have expressed are my own.
June 21, 2023
I did not expect curse words nor the suggestions that other religions that do not recognize Jesus as God's Son were still serving the One True God. I also did not expect the clearly stated fact that both couples where having premarital relations.
From other books by this author I was very shocked to discover the significant difference in what she considers Christianity. I don't plan to read any other books by this author.
The book was suspenseful and frightening if those situations can actually happen which I assume they can since the author claims this was based on actual events.
It would have been nice to have it explained or confirmed that the marriage was annulled. Given the the other incidents mentioned regarding honor killings and the forced captivity and marriage, it would be assumed that dissolving the marriage would be difficult if not impossible without consent from the husband even if she could prove the marriage was never consummated.
From other books by this author I was very shocked to discover the significant difference in what she considers Christianity. I don't plan to read any other books by this author.
The book was suspenseful and frightening if those situations can actually happen which I assume they can since the author claims this was based on actual events.
It would have been nice to have it explained or confirmed that the marriage was annulled. Given the the other incidents mentioned regarding honor killings and the forced captivity and marriage, it would be assumed that dissolving the marriage would be difficult if not impossible without consent from the husband even if she could prove the marriage was never consummated.
May 1, 2019
Wow what a book
Thrilling
Excited
Sad
Romantic
Horror
This book had you on the edge of your seat the hole way! While I find The main characters a little silly, I know she would be the only one tricked into going over there.
While I found the ending to be incredibly frustrating as I found it had a lot of loses ends I was alittle disappointing. However what made up for that was the fact that it’s a ture story!
I found it to be so sad how a smart, American woman could be Persuaded to go there shows how incredibly convincing these people are. In fact they are masters of it. And we can all read this book and say how silly, and dumb that she went over there I feel like it should be said that they are masters at manipulation to get what they want!
Thrilling
Excited
Sad
Romantic
Horror
This book had you on the edge of your seat the hole way! While I find The main characters a little silly, I know she would be the only one tricked into going over there.
While I found the ending to be incredibly frustrating as I found it had a lot of loses ends I was alittle disappointing. However what made up for that was the fact that it’s a ture story!
I found it to be so sad how a smart, American woman could be Persuaded to go there shows how incredibly convincing these people are. In fact they are masters of it. And we can all read this book and say how silly, and dumb that she went over there I feel like it should be said that they are masters at manipulation to get what they want!
July 20, 2016
The Promise kept me glued to the pages. I was agreeing with Mallory, yelling at her, and fearing for her life. Great read.
August 6, 2025
Mallory wanted to donate one of her kidneys when she found out she was a match for her cousin Kelsey. However, with Mallory being so young her parents wouldn't let her leading to Kelsey passing away. Mallory promised Kelsey that she would save a life and made it #1 on her bucket list. Years later Mallory works for Ismail at a doctors office and loves her job. Her boyfriend Tate applied for a job in Chicago leading to Mallory and Tate having to discuss big topics ( like will Tate move? will Mallory marry him? ) This leads to arguments and constant little fights throughout the weeks leading up to Tate hearing back from the job. In the meantime Ismail gets a call from his brother Abdul saying that his daughter Majida has leukemia and only has months left. The only option at this point to get Majida to the states for treatment is if Abdul marries an American women. Ismail doesn't know any single women off the top of his head but when his father calls threatening his fiancé Mallory came to his mind. However, traveling to Pakistan is very dangerous for an American let alone a woman so Ismail would have to give Mallory a little push in the right direction. After hearing the situation Mallory agrees and makes the trip to Pakistan and spends two weeks in Abdul's house. Mallory never really leaves the house since it is unsafe for a woman like her to do so. Mallory has no contact with anyone for a couple days since there is no internet and the WIFI appears to be down according to Abdul. During her time in Pakistan her trust is broken as she finds out that Abdul is still married and only married Mallory to gain U.S citizenship. His daughter also doesn't have cancer but is pregnant with twins. If Abdul finds out he will kill her due to it being dishonorable to the family. Mallory finds a weak signal in the house and emails Tate telling him what is going on. She later also calls Soraya, Ismail's fiancé, telling her everything that has happened. Soraya tells Mallory that Majida should stay with her parents in a nearby town to keep her safe while she needs to find a way out of the house. Soraya confronts Ismail about the lies his brother told him and tells him the wedding is off due to no longer being able to trust him. Mallory is able to get in contact with the US Consulate thanks to Tate and come up with a plan of escape. As Mallory is leaving Fozia, Abdul's wife, pleads with Mallory to take Majida with her to safety telling her this is her chance to save a life. Mallory takes Majida with her and they are both relocated to a safe house. Majida leaves for Soraya's parents house and Mallory is taken to the airport to fly back to the states. However, as she is boarding the plane she misplaces a bag tag leading her to have to go through baggage claim again. Mallory misses her flight and has to wait another week before she can try again. This time when Mallory reaches the airport she is met with Tate who will be traveling back with her. Tate also tells Mallory that he got the job in Chicago. Mallory is over the moon and tells Tate that she will move with him and that she loves him.
{this book was written based on a true story and it puts into perspective how different the dynamic of what a marriage looks like throughout the world in different cultures. It also bring about awareness about how often things like this happen. It is not uncommon for "foreigners" to sway how we feel using that as leverage in order to get what they want "a better life". I wonder what happens to Verdell if Tate and Mallory "adopt" him. What about Ismail and Soraya's relationship. What about Ismail and Mallory's relationship? What happens to Abdul's wife? Was she killed? Was the marriage official? Did Mallory get her money back that she tried to give to Majida? Did Majida give birth to twins and will she ever see her mom and brothers again? I will say it really ANNOYED me when Mallory couldn't find her baggage tag leading her to miss her flight home and at what point would she have left her bag behind? You also get different POV's of how people with different backgrounds/religions feel in the U.S like being judged based on their race. Also I cannot believe that Ismail never got on a plane and flew to get Mallory what a wimp....}
{this book was written based on a true story and it puts into perspective how different the dynamic of what a marriage looks like throughout the world in different cultures. It also bring about awareness about how often things like this happen. It is not uncommon for "foreigners" to sway how we feel using that as leverage in order to get what they want "a better life". I wonder what happens to Verdell if Tate and Mallory "adopt" him. What about Ismail and Soraya's relationship. What about Ismail and Mallory's relationship? What happens to Abdul's wife? Was she killed? Was the marriage official? Did Mallory get her money back that she tried to give to Majida? Did Majida give birth to twins and will she ever see her mom and brothers again? I will say it really ANNOYED me when Mallory couldn't find her baggage tag leading her to miss her flight home and at what point would she have left her bag behind? You also get different POV's of how people with different backgrounds/religions feel in the U.S like being judged based on their race. Also I cannot believe that Ismail never got on a plane and flew to get Mallory what a wimp....}
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 5, 2023
This is a very different book than Beth usually writes but it is outstanding. It is about a young girl who makes a promise to her sister and due to circumstances beyond her control she can not keep the promise. This stays on the girls mind and so she promises to find another way and person to make the same promise. This time though again she is denied the ability to keep the promise as she is not physically able. Now she has a chance to got overseas and marry a man just in order to bring back his daughter and him so that the daughter can save her life. This is just what Mallory is going to do! No one is going to stop her this time. Not her boyfriend, parents, best friends or her boss.
What really hit home for me was that so many times we tell GOD what we are going to do instead of asking if this will bring him happiness and if this is in his desires for us. Mallory was told over and over that this was not the right thing to do and then when she comes up with the plan to marry this man everyone of those who love her tell her it is not a good idea. But Mallory so wants to save a person that she closes her eyes to what is right in front of her.
During the 1980's many Middle Eastern men came to study in the United States. They were attractive, and had a plan. If they could marry an American they could stay in this country. Then there was some upheaval and they required their wives to return to their home country with them. Many of the woman had no idea of what they were getting into because once in their country they found they had no rights, and everything about their relationship was to bring honor to the men.
The men they married changed from the wonderful men in America to horrible, abusive men who had no regard for their wives and thought of them as chattel. They owned them. Many women had to find a way to escape the country using the Embassies as ways to return home.
Beth's story shows what it was like for those women and how the men would say anything to get what they wanted. She finds out that everything she has been told is a lie and now must figure out how to make it back to the man she really loves in America safe.
The thing I really took out of this story was that we need to wait until GOD gives us the go ahead. He had been telling her to wait on him, he had a plan and in the end the child she wanted to save was given to her. In GOD's time not her time. We must sit back, relax and listen for GOD knows what he has in mind for us and will lead us into the road that is there with his blessings, guidance and love.
Be prepared to have so many feelings when you read this story and praise you Beth for bringing it into a story for all of us to share.
I was given this book to read as an ARC for my honest opinion.
What really hit home for me was that so many times we tell GOD what we are going to do instead of asking if this will bring him happiness and if this is in his desires for us. Mallory was told over and over that this was not the right thing to do and then when she comes up with the plan to marry this man everyone of those who love her tell her it is not a good idea. But Mallory so wants to save a person that she closes her eyes to what is right in front of her.
During the 1980's many Middle Eastern men came to study in the United States. They were attractive, and had a plan. If they could marry an American they could stay in this country. Then there was some upheaval and they required their wives to return to their home country with them. Many of the woman had no idea of what they were getting into because once in their country they found they had no rights, and everything about their relationship was to bring honor to the men.
The men they married changed from the wonderful men in America to horrible, abusive men who had no regard for their wives and thought of them as chattel. They owned them. Many women had to find a way to escape the country using the Embassies as ways to return home.
Beth's story shows what it was like for those women and how the men would say anything to get what they wanted. She finds out that everything she has been told is a lie and now must figure out how to make it back to the man she really loves in America safe.
The thing I really took out of this story was that we need to wait until GOD gives us the go ahead. He had been telling her to wait on him, he had a plan and in the end the child she wanted to save was given to her. In GOD's time not her time. We must sit back, relax and listen for GOD knows what he has in mind for us and will lead us into the road that is there with his blessings, guidance and love.
Be prepared to have so many feelings when you read this story and praise you Beth for bringing it into a story for all of us to share.
I was given this book to read as an ARC for my honest opinion.
May 2, 2023
I bought this book at a used bookstore, only because I like the author's books, I had no idea about the story. It sat on my bookshelf for about a year, then I was surprised at the storyline. The most difficult was to realize it really happened.
Mallory worked for a kidney transplant program in Houston because her best friend had kidney disease and it was getting worse. But she was not an adult, and her parents refused to give consent to donate a kidney to her friend. By the time she was old enough to donate, her tests showed that she was pre-diabetic. Very upset that she could not keep her promise to God and herself to save a life, she became very vulnerable and talked to a doctor at work about the situation.
The doctor, Ismail, was contacted constantly by his father who he had no reason to trust told him that his niece was seriously ill and needed medical treatment. The doctor told Mallory about it and she volunteered to fly to a dangerous part of Pakistan to bring the girl to the United States.
Mallory's boyfriend taught piano and one of his customers who was the aunt of an eleven-year-old boy, wanted the boy to get back his passion for playing the piano but his heart was not in it after both of his parents died tragically. Tate, Mallory's boyfriend was very sweet and kind and of course, shocked when Mallory decided to fly to Pakistan. His student, Verdell, does not have a guardian who will carefully watch out for him and is very neglected. Verdell's aunt drops him off with a suitcase and drives to Oklahoma to be with her boyfriend.
All of the above happened very quickly in the book and the writing of this very intense story is riveting and I felt like I did not want to stop reading. What happens to Mallory was shocking and read the whole book very quickly.
After I divorced I dated a man from Iran who gave a me warning to be very careful and never marry and go to the Middle East as a wife. He told me it was not safe. I wish that the woman who was Mallory in this story ( the woman's real name was not disclosed) would have been able to receive that warning from my friend. It could have prevented her from almost losing her life.
This is a very important story that all women need to read for their safety.
Mallory worked for a kidney transplant program in Houston because her best friend had kidney disease and it was getting worse. But she was not an adult, and her parents refused to give consent to donate a kidney to her friend. By the time she was old enough to donate, her tests showed that she was pre-diabetic. Very upset that she could not keep her promise to God and herself to save a life, she became very vulnerable and talked to a doctor at work about the situation.
The doctor, Ismail, was contacted constantly by his father who he had no reason to trust told him that his niece was seriously ill and needed medical treatment. The doctor told Mallory about it and she volunteered to fly to a dangerous part of Pakistan to bring the girl to the United States.
Mallory's boyfriend taught piano and one of his customers who was the aunt of an eleven-year-old boy, wanted the boy to get back his passion for playing the piano but his heart was not in it after both of his parents died tragically. Tate, Mallory's boyfriend was very sweet and kind and of course, shocked when Mallory decided to fly to Pakistan. His student, Verdell, does not have a guardian who will carefully watch out for him and is very neglected. Verdell's aunt drops him off with a suitcase and drives to Oklahoma to be with her boyfriend.
All of the above happened very quickly in the book and the writing of this very intense story is riveting and I felt like I did not want to stop reading. What happens to Mallory was shocking and read the whole book very quickly.
After I divorced I dated a man from Iran who gave a me warning to be very careful and never marry and go to the Middle East as a wife. He told me it was not safe. I wish that the woman who was Mallory in this story ( the woman's real name was not disclosed) would have been able to receive that warning from my friend. It could have prevented her from almost losing her life.
This is a very important story that all women need to read for their safety.
April 23, 2018
Wow!!! The Promise by Beth Wiseman was intense, frustrating, and eye-opening. This book was based on a real-life story, and the author, Beth Wiseman, does an amazing job bringing the realities of the middle-eastern world to the page. Told from multiple points of view, the reader is able to sense that not all is what it seems.
Mallory has a kind and tender heart and has been on a mission to help others since she was a teenager, but her plans to help her cousin were squashed by her parents. Once she is an adult and can make her own decisions, Mallory's compassionate and emotional nature overrides her common sense, and she is focused solely on having an amazing "life experience" despite the warnings and red flags that she chooses to ignore.
As I was reading I felt a combination of pity for her circumstances and what-did-you-expect?!?! There was also a subplot with Tate's side of the story of a piano student abandoned to his care which showed more dimension to his character besides the constant worrying for his relationship with Mallory and her safety. The book starts out relatively slow but momentum quickly builds with the suspense and an intense ending. This was a difficult book to put down because I was constantly worried about Mallory’s safety and the outcome of her decision. This “edge-of-your-seat” book should not to be missed.
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GENRE: Christian Suspense
WRITING STYLE: Compelling
TONE: Inspiring; Thought-Provoking
LOCATION: Pakistan
SUBJECT: Christian Women; Couples; Deception; Faith (Christianity); Pen Pals; Threat; Voyages & Travels
- Crystal, Librarian
Mallory has a kind and tender heart and has been on a mission to help others since she was a teenager, but her plans to help her cousin were squashed by her parents. Once she is an adult and can make her own decisions, Mallory's compassionate and emotional nature overrides her common sense, and she is focused solely on having an amazing "life experience" despite the warnings and red flags that she chooses to ignore.
As I was reading I felt a combination of pity for her circumstances and what-did-you-expect?!?! There was also a subplot with Tate's side of the story of a piano student abandoned to his care which showed more dimension to his character besides the constant worrying for his relationship with Mallory and her safety. The book starts out relatively slow but momentum quickly builds with the suspense and an intense ending. This was a difficult book to put down because I was constantly worried about Mallory’s safety and the outcome of her decision. This “edge-of-your-seat” book should not to be missed.
ARE YOU AND THIS BOOK A GOOD MATCH?
DISCOVER MORE WITH NOVELIST APPEALS!
GENRE: Christian Suspense
WRITING STYLE: Compelling
TONE: Inspiring; Thought-Provoking
LOCATION: Pakistan
SUBJECT: Christian Women; Couples; Deception; Faith (Christianity); Pen Pals; Threat; Voyages & Travels
- Crystal, Librarian
October 20, 2025
I thought the plot line was very interesting and entertaining from the beginning to the end, however I do have an issue with the spiritual message that seemed to be implied. It almost seemed like the author was implying that the God of the Bible, Yahweh, Yeshua, Jesus Christ, the King of Kings is the same God as the Islamic religion. Or that you can pray to different Gods but it’s basically all praying to the same thing. Jesus, in John 14:6 says “I am the way and the truth and the life. No one comes to the Father except through me.” And in John 14:11 Jesus says “Believe me when I say that I am in the Father and the Father is in me…” If the Islamic religion does not believe that Jesus is God, then Christians and Muslims absolutely do not pray to the same God. I was waiting throughout the story for a big redemptive moment where the main character realizes that Jesus is the one true living perfect God and that the god of the Islamic religion is not Him, but I never saw that distinction truly made and was very disappointed in that. Jesus Christ is the only way, He’s the only true God, you cannot make it to eternal life in heaven if you do not believe that He is God.
March 4, 2024
A Lifesaver
Mallory sought purpose which amounted to saving a life. Her parents refused permission to donate a kidney to her cousin. Abdul entered her life indirectly through a suggestion from her boss, Ismail. He was informed by Abdul that his daughter was dying from cancer. The plan was to marry an American in order to access advanced medical care to treat the disease. It was all a lie that endangered Mallory's life. The marriage was forced while Mallory suffered a severe illness. How could see escape? Several twists take place that deepen the stakes for Mallory and the daughter. Ultimately three lives are at risk. Will Mallory and Abdul's daughter succeed in their flight?
Mallory sought purpose which amounted to saving a life. Her parents refused permission to donate a kidney to her cousin. Abdul entered her life indirectly through a suggestion from her boss, Ismail. He was informed by Abdul that his daughter was dying from cancer. The plan was to marry an American in order to access advanced medical care to treat the disease. It was all a lie that endangered Mallory's life. The marriage was forced while Mallory suffered a severe illness. How could see escape? Several twists take place that deepen the stakes for Mallory and the daughter. Ultimately three lives are at risk. Will Mallory and Abdul's daughter succeed in their flight?
August 13, 2017
Considering that this book is based on a true story, I had truly high hopes for it. The premise sounded enticing and incredibly interesting. But it failed short in delivery.
The Promise had me bored to tears at times, with interludes of excitement and genuinely good writing, which only showed me how much better the entire book could have been if the Author would have put a little more effort into the story.
The good part is, that it is not such an in-your-face Christian story, that someone who is not Christian could not get some value from it.
I just like my books continuously faced paced.
I received a copy of this book for free in exchange for an honest review
The Promise had me bored to tears at times, with interludes of excitement and genuinely good writing, which only showed me how much better the entire book could have been if the Author would have put a little more effort into the story.
The good part is, that it is not such an in-your-face Christian story, that someone who is not Christian could not get some value from it.
I just like my books continuously faced paced.
I received a copy of this book for free in exchange for an honest review
December 23, 2023
Bearable. That's all this book was. The writting was decent and the character wa somewhere likeable and super naive. Overall it was like a movie that is nobody's favourite that everyone knows is an average film. The story was interesting. Thrilling even. I haven't read books that talk about a third world country. It was interesting seeing it from a American's perspective though I don't know much about Pakistan's "SCAM" of luring woman into buying themselves one way ticket to US but it was pretty interesting stuff. Actually to put it out there that these things do happen to considered "privileged" woman of the world. 5/10.
August 23, 2017
This is a gripping novel that touches the heart. Beth wiseman takes you to a land you have yet to discover. In this book a girl felt useless when she couldn't be a doner. So when she was old enough to decide, she vowed she would, and so she found a girl in a different country/lifestyle. She got in touch with a guy, he seemed very dark and mysterious but had a nice fake personality on the outside. But she found out something that made her have to leave to get to safety from him. But could she get away? This book keeps you on your toes, once you start you won't be able to put down!
December 2, 2018
It Felt Too Real
Several years ago, when this book was first published, I entered a drawing for a signed copy and won! As I began to read the first chapters it all seemed so real, and I had to put the book aside. Having my own precious daughters entering adulthood didn't help.
Being a big fan of Ms Wiseman, when I ran across my copy the other day, I decided to give it another shot. It took me 4 evenings to finish it. I couldn't put it down.
You will be drawn into this story, I guarantee it.
Several years ago, when this book was first published, I entered a drawing for a signed copy and won! As I began to read the first chapters it all seemed so real, and I had to put the book aside. Having my own precious daughters entering adulthood didn't help.
Being a big fan of Ms Wiseman, when I ran across my copy the other day, I decided to give it another shot. It took me 4 evenings to finish it. I couldn't put it down.
You will be drawn into this story, I guarantee it.
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