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Two Worlds Collide
Melissa is an Earthling who was saved in the last second from dying in a meteorite shower. She, along with many other young women, have been taken to a spaceship where the men live among modern technology, but they have very old fashioned ways of thinking. The women have to sit on their men's laps all day long, and if their men feel that they aren't behaving, they spank them. When their men want to make love with them, they do. No matter where they are or who is watching. Melissa was kidnapped by the leader. She's frustrated because they can't talk to each other. She doesn't want to, but she quickly finds herself falling in love with her rescuer. This is an erotic spanking book. If such things offends you, please don't buy the book. Ages 18 and up.
225 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 9, 2013
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September 29, 2019
Too many horrors to be able to appreciate this story
This story had 3 strikes, which is why it only got 2 stars.
First: the so called rescuers of the earth women, including the heroine, forced these women into marriage and proceeded to rape or used dubious forced seduction which bordered on rape.
Second: These women are never explained any rules or their new circumstances and often spanked or worse beaten with whips and belts. It was abusive, especially when the women had no means to understand or learn these extreme rules set for them.
Third: The aliens only bothered to provide a translation device after they managed to cow down the women into an acceptable submission through beatings. When they could have spared them these horrors had they recieved the devices to begin with.
Bonus: The heroine was treated to a beating for expressing and sharing concerns for her husband's mother. She was human too but was kept in the dark the entire relationship with her own husband and denied to teach her son her own language it'd even speak out. She was never able to learn the alien language. What I find confusing is that the king of the aliens mention owning half the universe and yet earth was completely ignorant of them. It isn't until nearly end that we discovered that earth was hit by a meteor shower and the aliens came to rescue what women survived. This story would have benefited from the alien kings point of view. There was no background and it took took long to realize what the heroine's circumstances were. Perhaps it was the writer's intention the the reader was kept oblivious and confused, allowing only to learn what was happening as the heroine discovered it. This approach was an epic fail. I felt complete horror the first half of the story, hoping it would get better only to be pissed off at the injustice and perverse love these aliens demonstrated to their "wives". I do Not recommend this read. Unless you think you could enjoy such premise for a story.
This story had 3 strikes, which is why it only got 2 stars.
First: the so called rescuers of the earth women, including the heroine, forced these women into marriage and proceeded to rape or used dubious forced seduction which bordered on rape.
Second: These women are never explained any rules or their new circumstances and often spanked or worse beaten with whips and belts. It was abusive, especially when the women had no means to understand or learn these extreme rules set for them.
Third: The aliens only bothered to provide a translation device after they managed to cow down the women into an acceptable submission through beatings. When they could have spared them these horrors had they recieved the devices to begin with.
Bonus: The heroine was treated to a beating for expressing and sharing concerns for her husband's mother. She was human too but was kept in the dark the entire relationship with her own husband and denied to teach her son her own language it'd even speak out. She was never able to learn the alien language. What I find confusing is that the king of the aliens mention owning half the universe and yet earth was completely ignorant of them. It isn't until nearly end that we discovered that earth was hit by a meteor shower and the aliens came to rescue what women survived. This story would have benefited from the alien kings point of view. There was no background and it took took long to realize what the heroine's circumstances were. Perhaps it was the writer's intention the the reader was kept oblivious and confused, allowing only to learn what was happening as the heroine discovered it. This approach was an epic fail. I felt complete horror the first half of the story, hoping it would get better only to be pissed off at the injustice and perverse love these aliens demonstrated to their "wives". I do Not recommend this read. Unless you think you could enjoy such premise for a story.
January 31, 2025
1⭐️
If there’s one thing I can’t stand, it’s a female protagonist who’s an absolute twit. The woman is kidnapped by aliens, says she doesn’t want to sleep with him, but he touches her and she’s suddenly the horniest girl to ever horn, sleeps with him and says she loves him (all within a few hours). I kept waiting for there to be some sort of brain-washing situation to reveal itself, but no. She’s just an innocent virgin who was saving it for her husband but now is so happy she gave it up to an alien instead, because he likes sleeping with her so therefore he loves her.
The writing is very basic, the story is underdeveloped, the aliens are basically just tall humans, and the romance makes no sense, it reads as delusion more than anything. The whole time I kept rolling my eyes at the ridiculous and painfully cheesy things our main character kept thinking. This line is a great example: “Out of all the women today, I was the one who looked the womanliest.” I think the premise isn’t bad, it has an appeal to it, but the story really needs to be reworked.
If there’s one thing I can’t stand, it’s a female protagonist who’s an absolute twit. The woman is kidnapped by aliens, says she doesn’t want to sleep with him, but he touches her and she’s suddenly the horniest girl to ever horn, sleeps with him and says she loves him (all within a few hours). I kept waiting for there to be some sort of brain-washing situation to reveal itself, but no. She’s just an innocent virgin who was saving it for her husband but now is so happy she gave it up to an alien instead, because he likes sleeping with her so therefore he loves her.
The writing is very basic, the story is underdeveloped, the aliens are basically just tall humans, and the romance makes no sense, it reads as delusion more than anything. The whole time I kept rolling my eyes at the ridiculous and painfully cheesy things our main character kept thinking. This line is a great example: “Out of all the women today, I was the one who looked the womanliest.” I think the premise isn’t bad, it has an appeal to it, but the story really needs to be reworked.
September 18, 2016
This was OK but I do believe IT COULD HAVE BEEN BETTER
The story is written in the heroine's, Melisa's POV only. Though I have no problem with 1st Pov novels the grammar error found in it was unbearable. Not worth the money.
I also find the world building lacking and even though I had read books where there is language barrier with heroine's communicating with the alien hero they they still try to communicate. They also jumped at the chance on trying to learn the language and if there is a translator they tend to have it. In here the heroine Melissa was the leader's woman and we later know that the hero, Aid is a king which makes her a queen. She is suppose to be an example to the other woman and be a leader. I know she doesn't have leadership and had a boring life and was a good girl but still I found her character completely lacking and was submissive. She don't stand up for herself when she was put with the other woman and was always crying. I don't know how many times she was crying in the book.
I didn't like their lack of real communication because if she had understood each other more earlier more could had been explained in the world building and what was really going on. What's more I was very mad and sad about Aid's mother because she couldn't talk with anyone and was unable to communicate even with her husband because she speaks French. I somehow find the thing about Aid's mother loving his father questionable.
There was also way too much crying and spanking in the book. I felt this was rushed in the end. There were just too many loop holes in the story about the green men who kidnapped Melissa and other things.
What other planets are there in the universe? Where does Aid and the others came from? Don't they live in a planet? How do they divide the universe? How come Earth is part of Aid's boundary? What happened to the queen, namely Aid's mother? Not even sure if she had a name in the book.
Have they ever kidnapped women from Earth before? because his mother was a French woman from Earth. What is the difference with our physique?Especially when Melissa was pregnant in a week and gave birth in just a few days. After giving birth to her son she was pregnant again so soon when she wasn't supposed to get pregnant while lactating.
I did enjoy the flow of the story and Aid in the beginning but somehow lose interest in him in the end so I will not read this again especially with all the grammar error.
The story is written in the heroine's, Melisa's POV only. Though I have no problem with 1st Pov novels the grammar error found in it was unbearable. Not worth the money.
I also find the world building lacking and even though I had read books where there is language barrier with heroine's communicating with the alien hero they they still try to communicate. They also jumped at the chance on trying to learn the language and if there is a translator they tend to have it. In here the heroine Melissa was the leader's woman and we later know that the hero, Aid is a king which makes her a queen. She is suppose to be an example to the other woman and be a leader. I know she doesn't have leadership and had a boring life and was a good girl but still I found her character completely lacking and was submissive. She don't stand up for herself when she was put with the other woman and was always crying. I don't know how many times she was crying in the book.
I didn't like their lack of real communication because if she had understood each other more earlier more could had been explained in the world building and what was really going on. What's more I was very mad and sad about Aid's mother because she couldn't talk with anyone and was unable to communicate even with her husband because she speaks French. I somehow find the thing about Aid's mother loving his father questionable.
There was also way too much crying and spanking in the book. I felt this was rushed in the end. There were just too many loop holes in the story about the green men who kidnapped Melissa and other things.
What other planets are there in the universe? Where does Aid and the others came from? Don't they live in a planet? How do they divide the universe? How come Earth is part of Aid's boundary? What happened to the queen, namely Aid's mother? Not even sure if she had a name in the book.
Have they ever kidnapped women from Earth before? because his mother was a French woman from Earth. What is the difference with our physique?Especially when Melissa was pregnant in a week and gave birth in just a few days. After giving birth to her son she was pregnant again so soon when she wasn't supposed to get pregnant while lactating.
I did enjoy the flow of the story and Aid in the beginning but somehow lose interest in him in the end so I will not read this again especially with all the grammar error.
February 3, 2015
I didn't know if I would cry or laugh.. Beautiful story.
This actually my third time reading this story.. sad in some way, humorous in other ways. And some of it you just want to smack the king and his men. But you can see why Melissa fell in love with Aide. So worth reading...
This actually my third time reading this story.. sad in some way, humorous in other ways. And some of it you just want to smack the king and his men. But you can see why Melissa fell in love with Aide. So worth reading...
August 15, 2015
It could have been better.
I love how you can write such sweet, sad, and poignant stories. This book was a bit lacking. What happened to the other queen? What was done to "aide" (teehee) the green men? The story felt like you rushed to get it done without tying up loose ends within the main plot. B- grade.
I love how you can write such sweet, sad, and poignant stories. This book was a bit lacking. What happened to the other queen? What was done to "aide" (teehee) the green men? The story felt like you rushed to get it done without tying up loose ends within the main plot. B- grade.
April 16, 2015
Sci fi erotica and spanking... pluses. The minuses a.k.a. wtf was wrong with this book. Why didn't the hero's dad, the other king, ever learn his wife's language. The silliness of the pregnancy and how it was portrayed. The hero is king of half the universe and doesn't seem to get much done.
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