Fresh out of basic training, Airman Bradley Connor is just trying to keep his head down and his mouth shut. When a gorgeous, dominant officer makes that impossible, Bradley is faced with orders no normal airman would ever have. This 3200+ word erotica short contains steamy, gay scenes involving consensual adults. This should not be read by anyone under the age of 18.100% of proceeds will go to if there is a price on this book.
Wow, that was... incredibly short! Not too bad, but if there was a story in there somewhere... I have yet to find it.. The ending was really crap. I was just getting warmed up...
And that was the fastest GFY I have ever read..
Hell, he wasn’t even sure that he was gay and yet the image of that well groomed man bent over him, desperately swallowing down inch after inch, made his cock twitch roughly as Andrew gulped his length into his throat.
It was quick, very quick. Kindle didn't even properly calculate how fast I was going to finish it. I can't really give it a good rating, the changes in perspective were too jarring and the pacing was all off. I just think this was too short. For quite a bit of it I had trouble following along, it was just too much and too little information shoved into eight pages.
I marked this as erotica but it just didn't seem anywhere near erotic to me. I mean yes there is sex described within it but, it was far from vivid or interesting. The writing seemed stilted and strained. It was a free book and I didn't pay a dime for it but I almost feel like I should have been paid for my time.
This book is much too short for quotes and nothing notable jumped out at me to be repeated.
If you are looking for a story with strong character development, lofty prose or great meaning you will be deeply disappointed in this work. On the other hand if your goal is to raise your libido while you spank the monkey, this should do the job quite well. It is what it is, nothing more or less.
Started out as a hot little story but it hit me broadside at the end.
The young captain paused, examining the paper before sighing and picking them back up. He shook his head, walking on through the hangar toward the poor stupid man who'd left the paperwork all over his desk. He couldn't help but watch him go. Those blues were just tight enough that he could see a perfect curve of his ass as he left. Not that he was allowed to look at such things. It was part of the contract, wasn't it?
I know, I know the author has a problem with pronouns, but it was a good little read. Nothing special then WTF?
Short, hot, and with an unexpected twist at the end, this is the story of some very unapproved "activity" between an officer and an airman. The airman may be thinking about the risk, and not really asking for any of the things the officer does to him, but he doesn't exactly put up a lot of resistance either.
If you're looking for a short tale about man-on-man sex without too many concerns about a plot, you may like this very short story.
Quick read -- more a few long scenes than a short story
There seem to be more and more of these quick read pieces popping up. It was less a short story, and more a couple of long, intense scenes that make for a quick and immersive read.
It was so quick I was never really sure why either character did what they did... other than to give me a provocative read, so in that respect it felt a little too thin.
For the sake of time, I'll just say that I wasn't too impressed with this book. There was little character developmenr, the story seemed convoluded, it was hard to follow, which I wouldn't mind if I actually cared about what happened.
I loved the book at first, the story was going just fine, the sex was awesome. Then, it turns out to be a dream. I hate these kinds of books. Give me a heads or a maybe but not something like this.
Pretty decent short if you're looking for quick and dirty military fun. It's not long enough to build its own tension, but the built in tension of the armed services repression is enough.
I've read this already but when? So another quickie that is a fantasy. Kind of rough around the edges.. sex scenes could have been fleshed out with more detail
Thought this book was something other than what the blurb said. Nevertheless I enjoyed this short read. I guess I just confused the summary for this book with that of another.
Just saw this in my library on a whim- not poor writing (for an NSFW novel at least), but the plot severely lacks embellishment/ development into exploration of sexuality, largely due to its brevity though.
Cute story. At first I was a bit dubious as to whether it was going to be any good or not. It was hard to suspend belief and really get into the story at first. The main character thinking that because his Captain sat with him at lunch he automatically was interested in him etc. The flow of the characters dialogue with each other and the whole situation just seemed a bit too much of a stretch, especially considering how homophobic the military is and all with their "Don't ask, don't tell" and such. I guess I'm one of those that likes a bit more reality in my romance/erotica.
Also,who's flying the plane?! No mention of autopilot or anything. The characters just get up from the cockpit and go have a quickie in the back. How did they not crash and burn? Yeah, I know it was probably supposed to be implied the plane was flying itself on auto but for some reason the way the scene played out hit me as highly amusing. And while on the subject of aircraft, what kind of plane were they in? The captain mentions trying out a new kind of plane part which, in my mind anyways, implies some kind of jet. If that's the case, there's no way that plane scene could have happened. Were they in a helicopter or transport plane instead then, and if so are those types of military aircraft capable of an autopilot that would allow both pilots to leave it unattended?
Again, most of that is just me probably being nit-picky and overall it was a decent pwp type story. I liked it better after I finished it and saw that it was a dream. That small fact made the unrealistic military stuff less glaring and annoying to me because dreams don't have to be realistic right? ;P
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