MM9 is the kind of book that frustrates me on so many levels, but primarily it's a difficult read because it couldn't been a much bigger, much more human book than what it was. I know that may sound weird to say, considering it's a book that deals with Kaiju and gigantic creatures stomping all over the Earth and particularly all over Japan, but I felt the characters could've been fleshed out more, given some more backstory, and developed to a point where I could tell one from the other. I almost couldn't in this story, and I think anchoring a fantastic tale of giant dragons and poisonous, overgrown flowers and other Kaiju nasties to a sense of any kind of reality, you absolutely need to have some humanity in the story too. There sadly wasn't much to offer here.
I think, too, the problem is that the book is very short. It's only around 251 pages or so, give or take. That's not enough paper to write down all the wonderful ins and outs of this great idea that Hiroshi had come up with for MM9. And this kind of story could have gone so many different directions, been explored thoroughly, and shown us far more than a few Kaiju encounters that the MMD team has to deal with. Instead, the book just abruptly ends, and none of the stories that were kind of being put in place for the few human characters we got to meet were even really resolved. How disappointing.
The other MM9-size problem, if you will, was that Hiroshi was waaaaaay too literal and scientific for this book to be enjoyable. Don't get me wrong, I am all about an author doing their research and making me believe and feel the world that they are allowing me to enter. It's important to get facts right, and I think it's also important to let your readers know a bit about the mythology and the history of any subject matter you want to talk about or write a book about. That makes sense, you know? I think of Dan Brown and The Da Vinci Code, and how Dan took timeouts from the narrative in each chapter to really explain what Robert Langdon was dealing with as he uncovered all those crazy, religious mysteries. And Hiroshi often takes timeouts to talk about the physics of certain situations, such as how a large creature couldn't possibly swim a certain speed in the ocean (yawn), or how the Anthropic principle is how the Kaiju have entered our world and affected it (yawn again), and, well, the difference I suppose between what Dan Brown did and what Hiroshi has done is that the explanations of the fantastic and mystical were, in Dan's case, highly interesting and flowed really well with the overall narrative even for being like timeouts in the storytelling, and Hiroshi's explanations started to become distractions to everything that was happening. Honestly, I could care less about the projectile distance of a missile hitting a Kaiju if shot from a certain height. I started to feel like I was reading an instruction manual, not a cool story about a world all too familiar with the likes of Godzilla-like baddies.
One other really disappointing turn off for me was that one of the Kaiju was a young girl who could grow into a large giant. I won't say more for fear of ruining the plot or how this girl (unoriginally called "Princess" by the MMD) figures into the important final scene of the book, but let me just say that the moment I read about this girl, I felt Hiroshi just was being lazy with his writing. Why did the Kaiju have to be human? Why couldn't you just keep Kaiju monsters from the deep or another universe or whatever? I kept asking myself this as I read more and more about Princess. It just dulled my interest a lot.
The flip side to this book is that it's a quick read, a fascinating read at times, and if are the kind of person who saw Pacific Rim or watch a lot of anime that deals with monsters, then this book could be a much more easier read to digest. And I hope it is, because I think somebody out there who reads this and is an author themself could really be inspired by what this book could've been, and decide to write something similar and improve upon the experience that Hiroshi tried to give us with MM9. Now, that is a book that will probably keep my interest, and make me gush, for years to come.