I'm torn because on the one hand, the plot had great potential and it's obvious the author too the time to flesh out his universe to an unusual degree. On the other hand, the writing style was so bad, I truly had to force myself to finish this. It read like it was written for elementary school students. It's really too bad, because I was excited by the plot description and would have forgiven some amount of bad writing, but the way the plot meandered along combined with the absolutely horrible writing style made me clench my teeth in frustration. I was disappointed by the writing and by how the plot ended up being dealt with - it ended up being more of a murder-mystery/thriller than sci-fi. By the time I reached the end, I just wanted it to end.