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338 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 11, 2013
"'Please'---Corinna sounded so weak---'I can't go back there. He hurts me.'
'Well, give him a daughter and then he won't anymore."
Since a very young age, I was weaned on a mixture of fantasy, fairy tales, and history. In my native country, a well-known tale based on actual history concerns two sisters who rebel against their upbringing and fought against the Chinese for freedom against imperial rule. I was raised on these tales. I grew up reading about girls who just want more than what society and their family would want them to have. Princesses, commoners, it doesn't matter. Be it Princess Jasmine, the Trung sisters, or Mulan. Real or fictional, these girls have always sought more, they know there is another life for them outside of the boundaries that ordinary life has set. They don't want to get married right out of adolescence. They want education. They want to explore the world beyond their narrow village. Even lacking the traditional education that men have the privilege of getting, these girls are intelligent; street smart or book smart, they use what they have to strive for their dream. This is the background to which I refer as I delve into this book, and that is what made this book so utterly insipid and jarring to me.![]()
"She'd grown up thinking her first kiss would be with her husband, an American hero who had served his country and was ready to dote on her nonstop, someone who was respected by everyone around him, and whom she was eager to serve. They would settle down in a small town where the two of them would be the most famous couple in the area, he for his bravery and Mia for her looks."Bidder? Yes, bidder. The Registry gives every girl a value. Mia's is an exceptionally high one, of $500,000, which confuses me a bit. Even these days $500k is not getting to be so much money, and hundreds of years in the future? Did the author forget to adjust for inflation or something? That value is higher than all of her sisters combined. Mia will make her already wealthy father an even richer man. Mia is stunningly lovely, and remarkably stupid through her lack of education. She thought her ignorance would lower her price---it only increases her value.
"She flipped to the first question.Initially, I saw red when I read about Mia's ignorance. We first meet Mia as she sees her sister Corinna again. Corinna has run away from her abusive husband; emaciated, beaten, broken. Mia's reaction?
1. What is 80% of $20.00?
Math? Mia had never studied math, so she had no clue how to answer this."
"'Did you do something? Were you a bad wife?' Mia asked, still confused.Before she is forced to leave, Corinna shows Mia an article from an UK magazine she has hidden away concerning the "slavery" of American girls. Here's where I found things unbelievable. Mia has been programmed to be a good little girl who will be a good little wife her entire life, then after reading one article, she completely changes her outlook? People do not change that easily. Mia does, within a few pages. I want to give her credit for this change, but it is too sudden to be credible. She forms a truly harebrained scheme to run away from home, dragging along her book-smart but otherwise frivolous friend Whitney, whose dream is to get married, but whom nobody wants because her price is so ridiculously low. Why? She's been edumacated!!! She can calculate percentages!!!!!!
'William did this to me, after my son was born. He said I was a bad investment.'
The muffled sound of her parents walking toward the door stopped Mia from asking any more questions. Husbands didn’t hurt their wives. Husbands protected their wives."
"He knew the dangers of being seen with an unmarried girl, had heard stories about unserved boys who were stupid enough to get caught up in a pretty face---someone they didn't deserve to have. He wasn't stupid and he wasn't taking any chances. It was almost his time to serve, and once he was discharged he would be ready for and deserving of female companionship. For now, the only love in his life was for his country."I'm not quite sure how to classify their romance, if it can even be called romance. Andrew is dead set on resisting the beautiful but terminally foolish Mia, and Mia can't help her attraction to him, despite knowing that he's in trouble because of her. She places them in danger more times than I can count, and Mia and Whitney's behavior are so childish that I can't help hating both, despite their effort at escaping a lifeless existence.



The greatest accomplishment a female can achieve is becoming a wife.
When courting potential matches, no man wants a talkative lady. It is best for females to avoid speaking...
All fathers love their daughters. A daughter returns that love by obtaining a high marriage fee. Not only is a high appraisal price a point of pride, it is also a repayment for the money and time spent raising her.
A wife never inquired into her husband's background.
It is common for wives to take on some traits of their husbands - after all, it is the woman's responsibility to know what her husband likes, in a order to please him - but a good wife will ensure she retains her delicate feminine traits.

