My first mistake had been expecting too much from this novel. It had the potential (like so many others before it) to be a good novel, but fell short. The only thing that saved Ms. York from a single star rating was the fact that despite everything wrong with it, she does have a decent writing style.
I'll start off with the good. Texas Hard is Ms. York's second book in her Texas Soul series. Despite this, it isn't hard to figure out what happened in the 1st book. She does a wonderful job of filling you in and even foreshadows for the follow-up.
In Texas Hard we follow surgeon Dr. Riley and Texas Ranger Connor. They meet with a literal bang. Connor is trying to bring in a suspect, when they're in a car accident. Riley is on the scene by serendipity. Things don't start off too great when Riley and Connor start fighting. One explosion later, they're on their way to the hospital with the suspect dead and Connor in need of care.
We flash forward a few months, Connor bought a plot of land by Riley's. There just happens to be a lake there that Riley likes to skinny dip in. They meet again under not-so-great circumstances, but instead of duking it out with fists, they give into their 3-month long desire and have kinky oral sex outside. First thing that popped in my head was protection. They failed to use it, and you'd think with Riley being a doctor he'd be concerned about STDs.
From there we basically proceed with a hodgepodge of plots all thrown together. For about 80% of this novel I didn't know what was going on. It was a slow drag of nothing. The interesting parts consisted of about %10, and that wasn't the last bit when things finally came together in this chaotic blend of stories.
I had been hoping that this would touch on multicultural issues, but despite Connor being an African American and Riley Caucasian, there was nothing multicultural about it. So if you're looking for something that delves into a deep note of ethnicity and cultural, mosey on along.
We basically see instant love between Connor and Riley. Ms. York tries to mask this over by repeating several times that 'I don't believe in love at first sight' and 'this isn't love'. But they then admit it pretty early on and jump into a serious relationship right after the first suck. I'm not a fan of these kinds of stories, so maybe that was my mistake. That was my first turn off. I mean, they're in a relationship for a week-or-so and they already discuss moving in?
Ms. York takes us around in circles with a tug-o-war of childish emotions where her characters act like teenagers instead of grown mid in their thirties. Lane, Riley's former attraction and love, is with Gresh. They show up and stir problems between the new lovebirds. While Riley and Connor struggle to sync schedules, Connor battles his jealousy over Lane. We then get some weird thing about Riley's name (maybe it was from the 1st book, but honestly I didn't see the point).
At one point Connor finds Lane in Riley's bed and freaks. Now this is where I really lost interest. If a guy I just started dating slams me in the ground and chokes me (even if I did cheat), I'd be done. Then to go and threaten that said offender. Yeah, I'd be saying peace. Instead Riley explains the misunderstanding and continues to profess his undying love.
That's the basis of the story. We get a bit about Erick, a member of the Rangers kidnapped that Connor is trying to find. That was the interesting part. But when things could really get good with Erick's rescue, Ms. York skims over the action and Erick is miraculously back. From there we have Erick in love with Connor. Connor's ex back (which was RANDOM) and a happy ending where everything is PERFECT.
I skimmed the sex scenes towards the end. Ms. York dabbled in LIGHT BDSM in the beginning, but that was dropped about halfway through.
I honestly skimmed the last %25.
Her biggest issue is she had too much in there. She'd be going with one thing and then drop it. So much could have been done, but it all came together in an ugly, poor-edited mess.
Yes, that's right. On top of everything else this story was riddled in mistakes.
I think with some fleshing out and editing this could be a good story.
Oh, and on an ending note: I HATE LANE. He was a spoiled brat and I wanted him to die.