I don't know if I can continue on with this series... I *want* to like it, but 'Glen' is making that a difficult task.
As I noted on book 1, his writing style is like that of a high school freshman trying to impress his buddies and live out his wildest imagination through a composition assignment. What became even clearer in book 2 is the way he continuously repeats himself to highlight points, beating a dead horse, like we'd forgotten he already mentioned it. Or, worse, he forgot...
I could have put all of that aside for the sake of the story, considering "Glen" wasn't an author prior to starting this venture and is still coming into his voice, but what I couldn't put aside is the pompous arrogance that rises from the pages.
First, there's the whole "told ya so" theme. Over and over he puts on an act like he doesn't want to tell his wife that "he was right, she was wrong", except that he incessantly insists that he wants her to know it. He wants her to feel wrong - and realize she's wrong - without having to say it. He wants to reign supreme, but doesn't have the sack to stand up to her.
Then there's the belief that hitting the range occasionally, with a group of untrained civilians, will turn you into a badass operator. As a VFW Marine, I can assure you that's not how it works.
Finally, what drove the nail in the coffin was the way he just gave up and walked out on his family, then spent the rest of the book whining about how unfair it was and that he didn't really abandon them. No, dude, you did. You said 'let's go', she said 'no', so you conceded 'cool, I'm gone'. Like I said, no sack. A "man", as you called yourself for doing what you thought was "right", would have done everything possible to ensure the safety of his family - even if that meant upsetting his wife - not hightailing to save his own six and leaving his own children in a situation that you, yourself, deemed unsafe.
I realize that, by the end of book 2, the family is reunited, but it's too late. All of these themes run together to highlight one glaring point: "Glen", I mean "Grant", is a self-righteous mall ninja that certainly has a high opinion of himself.
I've even heard a few interviews of him where he claims he didn't write a story, he lived it out and just took notes as he went. Really? You lived out the collapse of Washington state? The collapse of the federal government? The abandonment of your family?
Mkay...