I really dislike the doujinshi artist Murasaki. I don't think she actually adds anything to the story, and the way Momo met her at a comiket and became SO close and the way Murasaki likes to tease the MC just feels a bit too sudden and also just convenient how she goes to such lengths to reach out to the MC to get MC and Momo to come hang out at her house. I also just think she's an uninteresting woman who teases MC and doesn't add anything plot wise or development wise. Momo writing light novels/doujinshi from her suggestion is also a bit of a leap from a total novice.
But otherwise, I enjoyed it. I like Azuki and the developing romance there, and I also enjoy the gradual development of MC and his friendships with the other people. I do wish Suzuki was fleshed out a bit more by now, but eh, I still enjoyed it overall. Started and finished in a day ish btw.
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