What I sincerely appreciated about Love’s and Shannon’s expose was the concerted effort to enlighten the reader on both the facts and fiction of the Lalaurie legend. What I was – at times – disappointed in was the execution.
Although I live only a few hours from New Olreans and have traveled there on numerous occassions, I must claim ignorance of the Lalaurie legend. I suppose that is simply another example to prove the adage that people are sometimes most ignorant of their own culture.
Mad Madame Lalaurie is a short book, only 11 chapters in a mere 142 pages, and perhaps in some cases even that is too long. The general impression after reading the book is that there isn’t much to know- the fiction is short, but the facts even shorter. The book opens exactly as it should – with the legend; Chapter 2 begins the history of Delphine Lalaurie, who bears the brunt of the allegations. It was here, early in the second chapter that I began to find the book somewhat lacking. Reference is made to Delphine being a “happy, sociable girl” as described by neighbors who “told of her gracious visits to their plantations.” However, no primary sources were quoted to support this. I would have been interested in reading exerpts of period diaries or letters. The lack of support from primary sources is also observed in the 4th chapter where Delphine and her third husband Dr. Lalaurie are described as throwing “lavish parties, which were often written up in the society pages.” Again, this is where I’d like to have seen an exceprt or two from those referenced society pages.
More than the lack of primary support, at some points the organization is just frustrating. In the fourth chapter, the legend of Dr. Lalaurie’s use of “Haitian-style ‘zombie drugs’” is mentioned but then rather than discussing these, the authors say, “This bizarre theory is discussed in more detail in the tenth chapter.” Why not group all information about a particular topic together? Why introduce the reader to the idea and then say, “This is a teaser. Wait 6 more chapters and I’ll tell you more.”? Chapters 5- 6 complete the story of the Lalauries discussing the exile in France and the last years of Delphine. Chapter 7 is an interesting chapter where the authors detail the popular cultural references to the Lalauries, but then the authors revert back to legend in Chapter 8 entitled “What If It’s All True?” – which you think they have exhausted. Essentially, this is a repeat of the legend detailed in Chapter 1 and seems both repetitive and out-of-place this late in the book. All of this has been addressed, why do so again? Chapters 9 and 10 reiterate their conclusions and again separate fact from fiction, and again many of these conclusion have been expressed earlier; still they each, at some point, do something that hasn’t been done before. Chapter 9 places the Lalaurie’s treatment of their slaves in a larger context; however, this chapter would have better followed Chapter 6. Chapter 10 addresses the facts and myths in a question and answer format. If someone wanted a concise and thorough summary of the authors’ findings, they could spend 10 minutes on this chapter and still hold an intelligent discussion on the tragedy; this would have been more effectively placed in the appendix. Chapter 11 discusses the hauntings of the mansion following the exile of the Lalauries; interesting stories, but again the flow between chapters is poor.
This small volume addresses a tragic part of New Orleans history, and it is evident that the research was both tedious and thorough; however, a short story should not be stretched into a long one, and simple organization of chapters would have made all the difference in the perception of the book. If you choose to read this still-valuable volume, I propose a new reading order.
Proposed Reading Order of Mad Madame Lalaurie:
Chapter 1: The Legend
Chapter 2: Delphine’s Early Life and First Marriage
Chapter 3: Delphine’s Second Marriage
Chapter 4: Louis Lalaurie and the “Catastrophe of 1834″
Chapter 5: Exiled in Paris
Chapter 6: Delphine Lalaurie’s Last Years
Chapter 9: Our Conclusions
Chapter 7: Mad Madame Lalaurie in Popular History and Culture
Chapter 11: And What About the Haunted House?