Captive: Taken

by Leigh Tierney

Chelsea Davenport, a fledgling model, meets the owner of her building late one night as she returns home from a night out with her girlfriends. Rather than continue their conversation in the stairwell, she invites him into her apartment.Michael McAllister, a handsome millionaire real estate magnate, uses his money and resources to prey on beautiful, unattached women. He takes them from their apartments and brings them to his own. They will be his captives, fulfilling each and every one of his various kinky sexual needs.On their first night together, Michael explores all of Chelsea's available options, including her one remaining virginal entrance.It is a rough night for Chelsea as her life takes an unexpected turn.

Genres: Erotica, Short Stories, BDSM, Adult

40 pages, Kindle Edition

First published February 4, 2013

About the author

I write books about sex. Dirty, naughty… sometimes even raunchy books that put you in the minds of both my male and female protagonists. You will know what they think and what they feel. I focus mainly on BDSM, often with strong sex training/slavery and/or medical fetish influences. I'm open to constructive comments and love interacting with my readers!

Reviews

[Sarah Elizabeth · Rating 2 out of 5]

This whole book was about a girl letting a stranger into her home, for him to rape and abuse her. Not very nice really. I hope this makes people at least a little wary about inviting people who they don't know into their homes.

[Rossana Peña Rivera · Rating 5 out of 5]

pyscho alert

[Shadow Jubilee · Rating 2 out of 5]

Poorly written

[DeAnn · Rating 3 out of 5]

Michael is Worse Than Jeffrey

If you've ever been secretly fascinated by Jeffrey Epstein or the thought of how women and girls get sucked in to that kind of life, this book gives you an up close look at the kind of depraved man who initiates these encounters. This is human trafficking on steroids, in the fast lane and brutally honest and up front about how Chelsea's life is going to be different from now on.

The rating is not a reflection on the subject matter. The author did a good job creating realism, as we've seen with the lifestyles of the rich and famous lately how they are able to dehumanize and debauch anyone they can get their sadistic hands on simply because they have more money than they know what to do with it. The rating reflects the writing quality. It was a bit stiff. It needed more connective words throughout various sentences to make the story flow better. In addition, the editing quality began to break down towards the end of the story, with errors in spelling and verb tense.

Stories like this one are important for us to read. We need to be more aware of how evil people can initially appear to be so normal and can quickly suck naive people into compromising situations. This story could be used as a primer to train people about the possible consequences of letting their guards down. It's truly sad that we now need to train our children to understand the depravities of warped predators.

[Fannie Greene]

So Hot!!!!!!!!

Ms Tierney's creativity and imagination is mind-blowing. She was able to creat such unique and in depth characters that were able to carry this story so perfectly that as a reader I will never forget this spine tingling, sexy, raunchy, mouth watering and yet so delicious book that leaves you breathless and panting for more. Ms Tierney did such a fabulous job that I highly recommend this book!!

[Mina · Rating 2 out of 5]

Meh

Nothing out of the ordinary.
Rough language, not very descriptive, which made this feel very abusive and not enjoyable.
Also, too short, so nothing but a luring chapter to the rest of the books.

[John · Rating 3 out of 5]

Very erotic, but a lot of the story made me feel uneasy. I don't care for torture or having sex with a female where her pleasure isn't even concidered. Sorry, not about to read the next book in the series

[DesertReal · Rating 2 out of 5]

Nah.
Just skip.
Nothing to see here but a crazy word salad that will leave you wondering why you even bothered.

[Lucy_Eggo:) · Rating 1 out of 5]

What the fuck….

DNF 26%

I would not recommend this to anyone it’s messed up.

[Kelly Rippert · Rating 3 out of 5]

Dark

[JavaBookEnds · Rating 1 out of 5]

Absolute trash. My review was posted to Amazon if you wish to read how truly horrible this book was. Don’t bother reading this garbage.

[IkeaGoddess · Rating 1 out of 5]

I thought this book had all I liked in a dirty little non-con story: hot guy, spanking, anal.... But this was rape which neither the heroine nor I as a reader enjoyed.