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Ghost Unbroken
Short Story
Her future is set, her life mapped out, but one unexpected meeting turns her carefully laid plans upside down.
Her future is set, her life mapped out, but one unexpected meeting turns her carefully laid plans upside down.
48 pages, Kindle Edition
First published July 22, 2013
About the author
Annie McLeod
14 books3 followersAnnie McLeod writes romantic fiction novles and short stories. She lives in Scotland with her husband and young children.
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June 4, 2014
Ghost Unbroken is a short story about a ghost. It's fast paced and rather sweet, although there are some tense moments. The author added a bit of romance and humor into the story also. This is an easy read that is sure to entertain ghost lovers!
January 2, 2018
This is a very sweet story—-short and fun to read, though the main character has some serious problems. It’s a bit of a Cinderella narrative. There are some minor writing problems (words out of place, for example) but just overlook those. I enjoyed it.
May 7, 2017
Enjoyed
Great short story. Angels ARE among us. We are guided but must keep our mind open. Look forward to another book.
Great short story. Angels ARE among us. We are guided but must keep our mind open. Look forward to another book.
January 15, 2014
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Actual Rating 3.5
It was the beautiful cover that attracted me into downloading this when I saw it on the Amazon Kindle free list. I needed some short, quick reads to break up my own editing and this book fit the description perfectly.
Ghost Unbroken was a very short, fast-pace read that has a lot crammed into the small amount of pages. It flows by quickly and overall a sweet story with some darker secrets.
Although its short, I liked Sophie and her determination to be better and have better, not only for herself but also for Bethany. It was believable and although the issues are not described in detail you get enough so as not to b confused. As well as this, the slight paranormal aspect was good. I did feel it was an easy way of keeping the book short as John always seemed to appear and come up with the right answers so I'm not sure if it was really needed but I think in the end I liked John too much to say he should have been cut.
The one issue I had with this novella was that it covers a big period of time and I found when the moments came for it to fast forward I was left a bit confused as to how far ahead I was in the characters' lives. Most novellas I read focus on about a week or a few days, not a few years and although it allowed the author to cram in a bit more history and drama I did feel it should have occurred over a shorter time span or the time switches should have been made clearer. I think this might have been down to the fact this is three short stories but into one novella.
Overall Ghost Unbroken is a quick easy read that you just fly through. It was a good break from my own work.
Actual Rating 3.5
It was the beautiful cover that attracted me into downloading this when I saw it on the Amazon Kindle free list. I needed some short, quick reads to break up my own editing and this book fit the description perfectly.
Ghost Unbroken was a very short, fast-pace read that has a lot crammed into the small amount of pages. It flows by quickly and overall a sweet story with some darker secrets.
Although its short, I liked Sophie and her determination to be better and have better, not only for herself but also for Bethany. It was believable and although the issues are not described in detail you get enough so as not to b confused. As well as this, the slight paranormal aspect was good. I did feel it was an easy way of keeping the book short as John always seemed to appear and come up with the right answers so I'm not sure if it was really needed but I think in the end I liked John too much to say he should have been cut.
The one issue I had with this novella was that it covers a big period of time and I found when the moments came for it to fast forward I was left a bit confused as to how far ahead I was in the characters' lives. Most novellas I read focus on about a week or a few days, not a few years and although it allowed the author to cram in a bit more history and drama I did feel it should have occurred over a shorter time span or the time switches should have been made clearer. I think this might have been down to the fact this is three short stories but into one novella.
Overall Ghost Unbroken is a quick easy read that you just fly through. It was a good break from my own work.
July 19, 2014
I enjoyed this short story about a young lady and a man that both needed help. The man's brother brings them together to help each other. It takes a while but John's plan does work. Entertaining and a quick read.
May 25, 2015
I liked the idea behind the story, and it's nice how they got together through the matchmaking efforts of his dead brother. If he was not there the first time they met, they might not have met at all. It was a nice read. (I like this book cover - a lot)
January 2, 2014
This was a pretty amazing story... Packed with fun, laughter, and a little (maybe a little more then a little) anger but not too bad
January 26, 2014
The beautiful cover captivated me. The story was sweet and simple but I think it will suit younger readers more.
March 17, 2014
Really great short story. The characters came through well, would definitely recommend reading :)
June 2, 2014
Interesting short story. The concept was good and I felt the story was well executed but am struggling to rave about it. Just a nice quick read.
June 21, 2014
this book is a nice sweet short novel, fast paced and entertaining with good characters and ghosts with a fast plot, very enjoyable way to spend an afternoon!
December 8, 2014
Not usually a fan of " ghost " stories , but somehow this one works and I loved it ;-)
April 3, 2015
this was an okay short story.
September 7, 2015
Meh, to be honest, I didn't think it was that great. Nice idea but I didn't really learn to know Sophie or David or care for them. Easy come, easy go, not very memorable.
July 11, 2016
Great read
Fast paced, I felt thoroughly involved in the story. Hopefully there is a continuation because I did not get my total fix.
Fast paced, I felt thoroughly involved in the story. Hopefully there is a continuation because I did not get my total fix.
January 21, 2017
It was good
Okay, so I loved it. It polled me in and this is the third book that I read this week.
If you're looking for a quick read and a love story, this book is for you :)
Okay, so I loved it. It polled me in and this is the third book that I read this week.
If you're looking for a quick read and a love story, this book is for you :)
January 7, 2019
Quirky
Quirky little short story. For the length of the book the author packs quite a lot in the story. I quite enjoyed it.
Quirky little short story. For the length of the book the author packs quite a lot in the story. I quite enjoyed it.
December 29, 2013
Twas a sweet story. Light and easy read.
May 23, 2014
the cover is beautiful that's what caught me.nice sweet short story.
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