Just barely 2 stars. It was entertaining enough to keep me reading, but only just. Parts were boring and a lot of it was cheesy, generic, and sometimes over the top (i.e. When Chelsea tells everyone at the coffee shop that Josh broke up with her, this line: "What?" Andrea cried, putting both hands to her face in shock. - Never once have I seen anyone but a cartoon character do this move).
It was also predictable and the drama felt unnecessary and forced. It was like, oh, things are going too well. We need some drama, so we'll just have Josh break up with her for some ridiculous reason. His jumping to breaking up after making one mistake was kind of out there for someone supposedly in love. It would have been much more realistic if his parents had blown up at him for that mistake and told him he had to break up with her or grounded him or something.
The love stuff was pretty ridiculous all on its own. I know teenagers fall in and out of "love" at the drop of a hat, but you do not fall in love with someone in a month. You do not get to know someone like no one else ever has, in a month, the way Chelsea believe she has done with Josh.
Chelsea acting like someone died after the break up was also a little silly. I get it, she was heartbroken, but it was pretty extreme for knowing the guy for such a short period of time.
And then for the whole thing to be resolved with 2 rational discussions... Why had Josh never thought to have any kind of discussion with his parents before Chelsea told him to? Is he that stupid?
Honestly, Chelsea and Josh were odd. Not in the quirky, endearing way so much, they were more just strange. Chelsea did and thought odd things. Like at the coffee shop when they know something is wrong after she and Josh broke up. Her first thought when they could tell was "but I put on makeup!" So, apparently Chelsea believes that make up conceals your facial expressions?
Or when she's thinking about knowing Josh so well - about how his dimples 'just get deeper when she's around', or something goofy like that. Um, how would she know they're deeper than when she's not around? If she's not around those other times, she can't see to compare. There were a few other little gems like that that really didn't make sense.
Another thing was, why did it never occur to her to write things in a book until she got her present from her grandmother? I mean, I write notes on scrap paper too, but those are things like phone numbers, doctor's appointments, or other general reminders that I don't care much about or intend to keep. When Chelsea started writing things down, I thought she might have some disorder and that it was some quirk that she had to do like the obsessive compulsive person who has to wash their hands 17 times or something. It was that random with no real explanation of that need to get words on paper that a writer feels.
But seriously, why not a book? It's not exactly a difficult mental leap. Particularly for someone who's so into books. If she were 7 or 8, it might be believable. Not so much for a 15 year old.
Josh was also strange. One minute he seemed annoyed with his parents, and the next minute, he was angry at them. Was he angry or irritated? If so, why exactly? There was no explanation as to why he feels responsible for any of it. Has he always been a 45 year old trapped in a kid's body? Had his parents lost a business before? And if so, why aren't they aware of how to do it again? Nope. We don't know any of that. From what I could tell, there was no real reason for his self-imposed responsibility to the store. And why not ever do anything about it? If he was angry, he could have taken a step back and let them deal with the consequences. The whole losing the store thing was a thin excuse too. It's not like a rough month or two is going to sweep the store out from under them. Maybe he thought his parents were too stupid to handle it?
But at least Josh and Chelsea are well-matched in their weirdness/stupidity, I guess.
Chelsea felt really immature at times too. And yeah, teenagers can be immature, but sometimes, it seemed like she was about 12. Which made it seem like she was much too young for a boyfriend. And her family was a little too idealized. Everyone got along perfectly and had wonderful manners. Not really the feel of an actual family. Maybe the author doesn't have any siblings?
Finally, the stuff about Chicago really bugged me. It made me wonder if the author had ever actually been there or if she just wanted to reference it for the cool factor or something. As someone who was born and raised in Chicago until 14, I can tell you that no real Chicagoan says it "Chicawgo". Someone with a thick Chicago accent (there's no such thing as a "south side of Chicago accent") would say it "ChicAHgo". Very flat A sound.
And while I'm on that, how would a 15 year old girl from L.A. be able to differentiate a "south side of Chicago" accent from a different Chicago area accent? Assuming there was an actual difference?
Also, no, Chicagoans are not weird about mustard. Yes, mustard only is a Chicago thing...I've heard anyway. I don't think I've ever even seen anyone do it before though.
It would have been more authentic for them to make a big deal about putting everything on it. That's an actual Chicago thing.
And what was with 'dese', 'dose', 'dis', and 'dat'? I'm assuming it's a play off of the old SNL skit with "Da Bears!"... but no one actually talks that way for real.