Why is this book rated so highly? I don't freaking get it...
Logan Stanley, the main character we are supposed to empathize with, is a total brat. Even more so than her sister, Nicole, who Logan hates. I can understand Logan being mad at her sister for "stealing" the guy she likes (Brad), but she goes to extremes to get revenge. Like dressing up as her sister at the Halloween party just to be with Brad. In fact, I can't think of anything truly mean that Nicole did except eat Logan's Poptart and make snarky comments about her flat chest. A lot of siblings do stuff like that. Logan is hellbent on making Nicole's life miserable, and instead of facing bad consequences, she's rewarded! More on that later though...
Logan's friends exist only as "sidekicks" to help Logan get her man. They have no personalities, no hopes or dreams, or anything interesting about them at all. Every second, they're like, "Logan this, Logan that...no way! We need a plan to help Logan snag Brad!" Logan treats them more like slaves than best friends. I can't even remember their names.
None of the characters really talked like high schoolers either. They all kind of spoke the same way. Near the end, Logan writes in her diary, "Me and Lanny are going steady now!" Most teens today might know what that means, but who uses that term anymore? Why doesn't she simply say "going out" or "we're dating" or even "we're a couple"? I was like, "Really, Logan? Really?"
The story itself is very predictable. After Lanny and Logan spoke a couple of sentences to each other, I knew they were going to get together at the end. That's not even a spoiler. Lanny obviously likes her, for some reason unbeknownst to me.
In stories, I like when there's nervousness or signs that they like each other, as long as it doesn't go overboard. For example: "I could feel myself blushing" or "I noticed his pupils dilating." It makes the situation seem more realistic and builds romantic tension. In this, there was nothing like that. Nothing. Lanny and Logan would go out and say things without any embarrassment or hesitation.
Like I stated before, Logan gets revenge on her sister for no GOOD reason. Brad is the same age as Nicole, so of course there's a better chance of him liking her instead of Logan The Brat. When Logan gets revenge, she is rewarded with Lanny's kiss and Nicole's undying respect instead of dealing with any punishment or consequences of some sort.
***Woooow, that's totally believable, you guise!***
Another questionable lesson comes up at the end. Basically, it teaches girls that they NEED a boy to constantly reassure them, to raise their self-esteem and to make them feel like valuable human beings. Now I'm not saying that your boyfriend or guy friend can't help you feel better about yourself. What they cannot do is "complete you" or make you understand who you really are. Because Logan claims Lanny does exactly that. I really hate this message going around in YA books and being popularized by boy bands.
Low self-esteem is not a desirable or attractive trait.
It's one thing to like someone who has a low opinion of themselves, and it's one thing to say, "You're a great friend/girlfriend/boyfriend. I think you're awesome and I hope you'll see that for yourself." But it's another thing to spread the idea that you have to rely on other people to make you feel worthwhile. Only you can find your purpose, not some "gorgeous", hormone-driven teenage guy.
To sum it all up, this is pretty much what the book teaches: If you plot vengeance against someone and use your friends to help you get whatever you want, you'll get the guy of your dreams, and you'll magically grow from a training bra to a B cup in only three months! Oh yeah, and boys will solve all your problems for you!
Heh heh.
My 12-year-old sister writes more realistic romance than this. I'm not even being snarky...