In the Kitchen

by Dylan Cross

A short story about a housewife's kitchen encounter.

Genres: Erotica, Short Stories

5 pages, Kindle Edition

First published October 6, 2012

Reviews

[Carol Cassada · Rating 3 out of 5]

Short and to the point

Out of all the short stories I've read, this is the shortest. Basically, the story goes straight to the sex scene and it's over. The story could've been expanded on more to include some details about the characters before jumping into the sex scenes. I think a little more details about the characters would make the story stand out more.

[Ray · Rating 3 out of 5]

this was a blink. there wasn't enough of it to honestly say much about. It was intriguing to some degree what the author managed to do in the span of a few pages. he might be worth exploring on a larger work.

[C · Rating 3 out of 5]

Spatula

The build up is great in this very short read but I think it needed more of start and a finish or something like that.

[Patricia Cordovez · Rating 5 out of 5]

Short read

Of you're not into kink this short story is not for you. Great short read and maybe some future ideas

[Gina Burkart · Rating 5 out of 5]

Wow what amazing short erotica short story that will have you looking at kitchen different.

[Charity · Rating 2 out of 5]

If this isn't free please do not waste your time. It is only 5 pages, one very brief scene. Not my cup of tea at all. I enjoy a good stranger in the kitchen, wife playing on the side type of story, but the only thing I thought about while I was reading was "Why the hell am I reading this?"

[Sleepy · Rating 2 out of 5]

Extremely short! I guess this author only writes one sex scene for each book. Its not bad kind of hot with the stranger and being blindfolded and spanked but the spatula was pushing it. Again a little weird.

[SEM · Rating 4 out of 5]

Not sure if this book is going for the record of the shortest short story but, if so, it's very much in the running... An interesting spanking quickie, mysterious blindfolded housewife is visited by mysterious man and a kitchen spatula plays a starring role in their tryst.

[Karen Roma · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is a blink of the eye read, except for the very visual content.
Beware your delicate sensibilities, for there is no room for them in this story.
By the time you realise you're sqirming it's over, but impact has been made.

[Suleika Santana -All About Books · Rating 5 out of 5]

Hmmm

Hmmm

O_O <--- those are my eyes right now. I gotta say I will never look at another spatula the same way after reading this story. It was short but to the point. Good writing style.

[Patricia · Rating 5 out of 5]

It's hot in the kitchen. Waiting with bated breath, she can only listen. This is such a short story, but it gives you everything you could want. Love it, will be reading it again and is now one of my faves <3

[Bethany · Rating 1 out of 5]

It takes longer to get to my kitchen than to read this. Could have made for a sassy scene in a longer book, but at 3 pages it is too short to even leave me hanging, just wondering where the rest of the story was.

[A.R. Von · Rating 4 out of 5]

In the Kitchen is like nothing I've ever read before. VERY short, but gives us a glimpse into what the author is capable of which (to me) is a great thing when you are nervous about trying new authors.
Dylan Cross gave us a tease that leaves the reader wanting more with this short...

[Katie Harder-schauer · Rating 4 out of 5]

Eh

This is super short, clearly and I would not and did not pay money for it as it is. If this were a scene in a longer story, I would be very interested to read that story. My one complaint and the reason I detracted a star is because the formatting is off, and that bugs me.

[Bethany Wilbanks · Rating 5 out of 5]

Very good read.

[Stacy Wollett · Rating 3 out of 5]

Great for the shortest read in the history of books.

[Donna Rae · Rating 5 out of 5]

A very short story but I enjoy anything with an unexpected turn at the end.

[Cassie Hess-dean · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was a VERY short read about a wife & mother who is in the kitchen being worked over by a stranger just before the kids & her husband come home.

[Kathryn Parry · Rating 4 out of 5]

Oh god far to short to give a reivew. What to say about five pages???? Hot but short.

[SB Morales · Rating 4 out of 5]

What just happened?? In just a few pages I know I need to read more Dylan Cross. I will never look at a spatula the same way. This is an amazing erotic scene. Don't miss out!

[Kelcey Gonnerman-rienhardt · Rating 5 out of 5]

Would love to see this one and "paying the rent" both turned into books, I need more Dylan!! Pretty please!!!

[Debbie · Rating 5 out of 5]

short and HOT!!!

[Jodi Cain · Rating 5 out of 5]

Even though this story was short, it was hotter than hell. This is just a glimpse of what Dylan Cross is capable of..

[Marci · Rating 4 out of 5]

Flashč

This story/Scene was very quick. Well written inspire of its shortness. I would definitely read more stories like this one!

[Candy Box · Rating 5 out of 5]

super hot sexy short read

can't wait to read more