Serious continuity problems, August 30, 2017
This review is from: Devil's Guard Afghanistan (Devil's Guard Book 6) (Kindle Edition)
In my opinion this is the worst book in Eric Meyers DEVIL'S GUARD series. The main character Max Hoffman carries a French passport until a few pages later when he carries a Thai passport as he is a citizen of Thailand. He reflects that the French are leery of issuing a passport to anyone named Hoffman. This is apparently because of his grandfather, Jurgen Hoffman, which makes no sense as Jurgen served with distinction in the French Foreign Legion. He did nothing to embarrass or antagonize the French government.
Then there is the matter of Max's military service. At various places in the book he served in the Thai special forces even killing a Vietnamese soldier in a border incident. At other places in the book, he had no military experience and needs coaching from a mercenary leader. The same confusion is present about his firearms knowledge. Despite his service in the Thai army, the only weapon he knows how to use is the M1911 .45 pistol. Near the end of the book he is carrying one of these uncocked in combat. Obviously he wasn't trained very well in the use of the M1911.
There are other continuity problems, but the plot is silly as well. Despite no combat experience and, at this point in the book, the author writes that he has no military experience at all, an American infantry platoon and a group of experienced mercenaries known as the Devil's Guard quickly agree to follow him in combat. Apparently on the sole strength of his grandfather being Jurgen Hoffman. There is more such as the unfinished issues at the end of the book, but I have hit the high points.