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To Disturb the Dead
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Kathy Mender's obsession with horror takes her to the brink of madness. So much so, she longs to unearth a dead body. When Bobby Farks, her faithful lover, gets word, he has to see it for himself. Following her to Rose Hill Cemetery, however, in the early hours of a January morning proves maddening in itself, and what Bobby discovers is far more than unrequited love.
Kathy Mender's obsession with horror takes her to the brink of madness. So much so, she longs to unearth a dead body. When Bobby Farks, her faithful lover, gets word, he has to see it for himself. Following her to Rose Hill Cemetery, however, in the early hours of a January morning proves maddening in itself, and what Bobby discovers is far more than unrequited love.
45 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 1, 2013
About the author
Brandon Berntson
45 books76 followersBrandon Berntson grew up in various towns throughout Colorado, where most of his stories take place. His work spans from serious, adult horror to playful, young adult fantasy and everything in between. He is the author of Castle Juliet and When We Were Dragons, enchanting, magical reads for all ages. He is also the author of Body of Immorality, a cryptic collection of horror stories, and the raw, adult themed All The Gods Against Me.
He loves art, music, indie films, classic horror films, and hockey. He lives in Longmont, Colorado.
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April 20, 2017
"Let us show you the way into the forest. Follow the mist that looks like a trail. Pluck—from the darkness—every black flower. I’ll help you with those bags, princess. Let me show you to your coffin."
This short story is entertaining, creepy and intriguing, with a twist that is absolutely perfect. It's well-written, and I couldn't put it down.
Kathy Mender - talk is, she’s a strange sort. But she don't care. She is a worshipper of the demented dark, loves reading horror stories and watching movies, the only thing that provides her the only joy in life. But she will soon find out, the dead, from beyond the grave, will be calling for her… I could relate to Kathy.. I love all things dark, demented and don't get me started on horror books or movies.
I'm kicking myself for not reading this sooner, and I would definitely read more of the author's work.
June 9, 2013
I used to listen to this broadcast on the radio when I was teenager. I think it was called Macabre Theatre, not sure. I would lie in bed with the lights out and listen to stories told by one or two actors. There would be sound effects to go along with their narration, like creaking floorboards and squealing hinges as a door slowly creeps open. They were deliciously frightful and scared me but good.
This would have been a great story to listen to on that program. I think I would have been too creeped out to run over and turn the light on. I’d probably have pulled the covers up to my eyes and lay flat on my back, hoping nothing yelled “Boo!”
Kathy Mender is 16 years old and thinks she knows it all.
A typical teenager. But she’s not. She is obsessed with death and digging up a dead body.
Her life at home is miserable and she spends all of her time in classes reading dark, disturbing books. That’s where she’d rather be.
She doesn’t know where she belongs.
One morning, between classes, a thought blossoms in her mind.
“Don’t make us perform these grisly deeds ourselves. Help us build a monument, erect a found action for the dead. We can give you that education you desire, honey. Along with a loving upbringing.”
This had me thinking. Did something just speak to her, encourage her strange desire to dig up a body, or is she deranged. Because, she is now determined to do this deed. She’s not going to wait any longer.
Poor Bobby Farks. He is so in love with Kathy, he will blindly follow her descent into the world of the dead.
Maybe popcorn and movie would have been a better first date for these two. I mean, digging up a dead body! This boy is head over heels, stupid blind, in love.
Nothing good will come of this union.
I had a creeping feeling all through this story. It’s ghoulish and keeps you wondering. I especially liked the ending the author gave me. Not what I was expecting.
This would have been a great story to listen to on that program. I think I would have been too creeped out to run over and turn the light on. I’d probably have pulled the covers up to my eyes and lay flat on my back, hoping nothing yelled “Boo!”
Kathy Mender is 16 years old and thinks she knows it all.
A typical teenager. But she’s not. She is obsessed with death and digging up a dead body.
Her life at home is miserable and she spends all of her time in classes reading dark, disturbing books. That’s where she’d rather be.
She doesn’t know where she belongs.
One morning, between classes, a thought blossoms in her mind.
“Don’t make us perform these grisly deeds ourselves. Help us build a monument, erect a found action for the dead. We can give you that education you desire, honey. Along with a loving upbringing.”
This had me thinking. Did something just speak to her, encourage her strange desire to dig up a body, or is she deranged. Because, she is now determined to do this deed. She’s not going to wait any longer.
Poor Bobby Farks. He is so in love with Kathy, he will blindly follow her descent into the world of the dead.
Maybe popcorn and movie would have been a better first date for these two. I mean, digging up a dead body! This boy is head over heels, stupid blind, in love.
Nothing good will come of this union.
I had a creeping feeling all through this story. It’s ghoulish and keeps you wondering. I especially liked the ending the author gave me. Not what I was expecting.
July 6, 2016
A seriously creepy read about a girl who is equally so. A chilling tale, in more ways than one.
Disturbingly like having an accident happening in front of you. It's all happening in slow motion, you know disaster is looming, but aren't quite sure what the end result is going to be.
An enjoyably unsettling read.
Disturbingly like having an accident happening in front of you. It's all happening in slow motion, you know disaster is looming, but aren't quite sure what the end result is going to be.
An enjoyably unsettling read.
July 4, 2013
This is one of the most unique stories I've ever read. A boy, a girl, a calling and a cemetery - and the ending was completely unexpected.
July 10, 2013
It wasn't really my cup of tea.
May 27, 2017
Disturbing
The obsessions of teenagers. Darkly written and well put together. Reminds me of the macabre stories of my grandmother. Recommended
The obsessions of teenagers. Darkly written and well put together. Reminds me of the macabre stories of my grandmother. Recommended
June 16, 2014
Different
I had no idea what I was going to be reading when I started this book. It was different but in a weird/good way.
I had no idea what I was going to be reading when I started this book. It was different but in a weird/good way.
December 15, 2014
Obsession, madness, the undead, and two unrequited lovers. Not your average zombie tale at all. I loved the end. Not what I was expecting, and very unconventional.
December 18, 2014
At first this seems like a modern teenage romance, but by the time you get to the end, it is a pretty hairy horror story! I was not expecting that at all. Great story!
December 23, 2014
Take a break from the Apocalyptic zombie tale and give this one a try. Short and sweet, but satisfying.
May 24, 2015
It was good
It was an interesting concept. Definitely had some areas that need some editing work. Sometimes the passages repeat themselves. It just was not scary.
It was an interesting concept. Definitely had some areas that need some editing work. Sometimes the passages repeat themselves. It just was not scary.
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