I should start this review by stating that I really think that Angela Darling possesses talent and has extreme potential in transforming into a stellar author.
The book is about a woman named Marion who assumes another identity when she takes a job as governess to ultimate patriarch, Gabriel Thorne's young daughter. Throw in a family mystery, two handsome adult sons of Gabriel, a bloody first chapter and you honestly have a great novel in concept alone. There were chapters which were simply page-turners as Marion moved about the creepy mansion with a limited amount of time or would run into mysterious characters. Loren's character, one of the brothers who faces constant rejection from his father, was developed extremely well and I felt an inordinate amount of sympathy for the poor guy.
Where it comes short is that at times, there were areas that were relatively contrived and honestly a little juvenile. For example, our heroine just happens to fall into the arms of one of the brothers. We've seen it in movies and in sitcoms, but can many of us profess to have experienced such a stereotypical event in our younger days filled with romantically awkward follies? The relationship between Marion and Cade also seemed unrealistic as they hadn't really interacted. In addition, the resolution with Marion's brother also fell short. I felt pretty robbed by the end of the book when it is discovered what became of Graeme. Had the parents known?!?
Lastly, there were quite a few editorial mistakes - none were too severe but one. For the majority of the book, there's an emphasis placed on the fact that Cade's eyes are green. Well, not just green but Mediterranean green. Somehow towards the final chapters, his eyes are suddenly blue. Normally I wouldn't really have noticed; however, the author had made a point earlier in the novel to make it clear to us how green those eyes of his were. Nothing a good editor couldn't have fixed.
The author just released a prequel to the book which revolves around Gabriel, Admittedly, I am hesitant to read it as it seems unnecessary. I got my resolution with Gabriel - how he came to be so disconnected, so angered by his wife, the hatred he suddently felt towards his once beloved son. I'm also turned off by the title as it seems too...whimsical and juvenile.
Angela Darling can undoubtedly tell a story. The woman has extraordinary talent to spin a wonderful and engaging tale. Would I read another of her books? With the exception of the prequel, of course. With some editing and a good sound board, she could truly become a tremendous author.