I chose Two Girls, Fat and Thin for our book club (The League of Unreliable Narrators, aka #Chicagiforifiction) because I hadn't read any Mary Gaitskill, and I'd heard good things about both this, her debut novel, and her breakout short story collection, Bad Behavior. I didn't know much except that it had some pretty explicit S&M, and was partially about an Ayn Rand-like writer and political thinker named Anna Granite. So, off we went into the woods of self-hate and Definitism.
To start with, the Rand stuff is on the nose, so literally ported from both the literature and the beliefs of the most revered saint among American assholes, it could only have been changed in name due to threats of lawsuit. I would have loved if Gaitskill had tweaked the mythology a bit, but it's pretty much a 1:1 conversion.
With that as a backdrop, we get the account of Dorothy Never (born Dorothy Footie), a devout follower of Anna Granite, and journalist Justine Shade, who is working on an expose of the since-repudiated Definitist movement.
This is all in the first 30 pages. The two have a meeting, and it's clear that 1. Justine isn't in it to show the world how misunderstood the poor Definitists are, and 2. Dorothy thinks that's exactly what Justine is doing. They leave with those contrasting thoughts in their head, and that's the last of the present we see for quite some time.
Gaitskill sends us back 18 to 20 years, to the childhoods of both Dorothy and Justine, in a long, long, LONG section intended to give the background of how these two people became who they are. Both are both victims of abuse (Justine was molested by a friend of her father's; Dorothy by her own father, repeatedly, for years), and both spent time not only as victim but also as aggressor. The book is full of long, lurid, disquieting sections about the brutality of girl cliques, everyone either tormenting physically or emotionally, often to the point of suicide or relocation to a new school. Gaitskill is unforgiving here, and the girls' childhoods, which often blur together (on purpose, I suspect), are full of domineering fathers, heaps of abuse, and coping mechanisms that often include transferring that abuse to people even weaker. And not only is it hard reading, there is a LOT of it. It wouldn't have taken more than adding a hundred extra pages to cut this section out of the novel and making it its own gruesome little coming-of-age novel.
With this much riding on the past, I assumed that, as we return to the present, Gaitskill would use all this fuel like a rocket booster, the pain and loathing of the past guiding the decisions of the present day.
But she never really does. Whether disinterest in the subject or simply the pacing issues of a debut novel, the two parts never really join together. As such, all of the fuel Gaitskill has poured in doesn't fire the rocket into the stratosphere, but causes it to explode on the launch pad.
The interview continues, and Dorothy begins to obsess over Justine and how her article will return Definitism to its rightful place in American thought -- even though Anna Granite has been dead for several years, Dorothy is still a true believer -- while Justine finds herself embroiled in an increasingly dangerous sexual relationship. The S&M sections are gnarly and emphatically in violation of The Rules, so to speak. When the article on Definitism is published, Dorothy reads it, and she isn't happy. Her final encounter with Justine comprises the fever-pitched conclusion to the book. Of that, I won't say any more.
There was a lot I liked here. Despite the explicitness of the coming-of-age section, and its absurd length, I can't think of too many books that have really poked that deep into the heart of adolescent anger and barbarism. If this doesn't look like how you remember junior high and high school, congratulations on having a much better adjusted childhood than I did. Gaitskill shows the ease in which kids, in search of their identity and seeking a step up in the pecking order, fall easily into prejudice, bullying, conformity, and close-mindedness. It wasn't pretty, but I didn't find it lurid or unrealistic, either.
The place where it really falls down is connecting this to the rest of the book. The Definitism article Justine writes is comedically histrionic -- what paper would allow a part-time freelancer with few credits to her name to write a full-length expose of a major political movement more or less unsupervised? The sections we read over Dorothy's shoulder have the marks of an amateur hack, going for easy comparison's like "an encapsulation of the right-wing id gone mad." I mean, fair enough, but where's the *craft*? It doesn't ring true, unless it's meant to be a half-assed expose. As for the resolution, I was surprised at how sudden it was. After the elongated explanations throughout the book, all the development of motives and shared histories, the last 15 pages have the feel of "five minutes until pencils down, class." It just lands with a wet thud. It doesn't belong as the cap to such an otherwise potent, if uneven, narrative. The writing is tremendous (and even funny, on occasion) everywhere but at the very end.
I can't say I entirely enjoyed this (and I don't expect I'll ever read it again), but I admired an awful lot of it, even if I did so with fingers half over my eyes. It's a rough go, but its biggest sin is that it doesn't really do all that much with all the atrocity. We had a lot to discuss at our book club (including W's great tagline: "At last, the book the answers the age-old question, 'What Kind of Sick Fuck Reads Ayn Rand?'"), but nobody really came away feeling very good about the whole thing.