the beginning of this book didn’t make me want to read it at all. his mistress. going to a brothel. her language. its probably accurate English slang but it makes her sound illiterate and its annoying to read. it doesn’t sound good for a main character.
him making her his mistress. it was absolutely disgusting. I wanted to slam this thing down.
wondering if you slighted the girls mother says it all.
very handy his sister is the same size as Jocelyn.
she was too quick to get over her revenge.
oh that’s just even more handy. his dad was the viscount who turned her dad away!
I don’t like Jocelyn because she actually considered being his mistress. I mean, who does that? id rather be poor. she lost some big points on that one. &then is just okay with the proposition because she liked his kiss-“if that is the way it will be, I think I shall not mind so much.” &shes an idiot for saying it’s up to Brownie. what does he have to do with it?
annoying when he hoped that she at least found him a little bit attractive and then in the next line she says she finds him extremely handsome.
also annoying to have his sister say that he looked happier& lighter with Jocelyn. and that she hoped they were happy. she could be a prostitute for goodness sakes, who’s in your brothers house and wearing your clothes.
why would brownie agree to her being rayne’s mistress if he didn’t like the idea of them together?? she also lost major points when she said that she could afford to keep a child if she became pregnant, with all the money rayne was giving her.
‘maybe he should have paid a visit a visit to madame du mont’s, then he wouldn’t be so bloody tempted to rush things.’
it was very annoying when he asks if she’s slept with a man and she says yes, misunderstanding him. who is that stupid? its also annoying when she thought he stepped on a hairpin. and then asks if they’ll fit together because he’s so big.
there is nothing romantic about a guy spending a fortune on clothing, a home, and trips to the opera. &she just lets him. the whole business of a mistress and setting her up with a house &clothes is disgusting.
he acts like all those things are likeable.
some wording in here just sounds not good at all-‘upturned breasts.’ ‘still-unbreached maidenhead.’
“flippin’” sounds modern.
you’ve got her set up in a house as your mistress for your freakin pleasure and you keep saying comments like this-‘he should visit madam du mont’s, give his body some ease.”
‘in seconds she was surging through the silver foam, rising upward, upward, cresting the wave, letting it lift her, carryher on toward the distant horizon. she cried out rayne’s name, and the wave broke over her.’ oh come on!
‘made a leg.’ you mean bowed. why don’t you just say that?
it was stupid how she asked of a painting of the pond, and then the artist says she’s special. what’s special about that? that was a stupid request after rayne brought you there specifically to have your miniature painted.
‘maybe it was part of the reason for the fight that began that next day.’ that was not a fight and its seriously annoying that she didn’t believe rayne about her father.
“if you have not come to grips with this and set it away from you, then upon my return I shall carry you up to our rooms and make love to you until you have.” oh that’s great. force her into forgetting about it. boy, this is romantic.
him getting shot was the dumbest place to have that happen. the writing was bad there, too. ‘knowing his love had killed him.’
Alexandra doesn’t come off as reckless or daring at all.
if she was worried that brownie and tucker would be accused of shooting rayne then why in the world did she leave them behind???
how do you mistake a freakin silver tray for a gun?
‘looked waxy pale.’ what a beautifully written sentence.
taking someone elses beating. you’re no hero. you’re an idiot.
the silent I love him!’s are annoying.
‘a gentleman. not rayne.’ the guard said a hadnsome gentleman, and you say not rayne. wtf?
why would you tell his friend that rayne was dear to you and that you hoped he had warm feelings for her too? loser!
this author falls on clichés and overdone storylines. her trying to shoot him. her swearing to get vengeance over what she believes was a wrong done to her father. him making her his mistress. her ‘shooting him’ and him thinking she had actually done it. her thinking he lied about it.
im upset with both of him. him not realizing she didn’t have a gun in her hand. and her thinking he would actually lie about it. the author is trying to set the stage for this great betrayal on both of their parts, but all im seeing is stupidity.
back of the bk says she has ‘cascading raven curls’ but in the book she has short hair.
sometimes the way the author cuts the words with apostrophes makes it hard to understand the word-“fo’c’sle.”
rayne saves her in the nick of time. handy!
its freakin annoying how the girl cant hide her reaction, they have to react to his kiss even tough he’s doing it to her to make her react.
annoying how characters cant holdon to their anger. just because the “air too sweetly scented, the sky too pure a blue.” oh come on.
after all he’s done he had the nerve to say she didn’t find his touch loathsome back on the road when she jumped from the wagon without his help. grow up, you baby.
the shooting happened too soon in the book. they hadn’t had much of a relationship.
‘perhaps he should summon Dulcet to his quarters.’ ugh! stuff like that is so irritating.
you’re laughing about some woman wanting Rayne in her bed. idiot!
of course Chita would get with Paulo. foist the pregnant girl on the nice guy. its not right.
the book gets ridiculous. repetitive andboring.
shes heartbroken that rayne doesn’t want to hear the truth, but she wont simply tell him. she finally had the chance but says she shot him. why would you lie?? &all he can focus on is that she wants him. you think she tried to kill you. why would you care if she wants you?
I hate that these idiots cant just control themselves. I think they’re finally getting to the truth. but no. they’re overcome with desire again. this is freakin annoying. its incredibly frustrating to read.
‘tell me that I’ve got what you want and ill see that u get it.’ oh get over yourself!
it was so stupid when chita showed Paulo her backside.
stop playing matchmaker. Paulo needs to know shes pregnant.
of course she would get caught leaving. rayne is always there!
why r u saying that if Paulo rlly loves chita, he’ll accept her baby. that’s all wrong.
she says stuff in her mind that she should say out loud. like don’t buy me gifts.
im so sick of these ripoff storylines. think of something new for goodness sakes!
she wont marry him because she thinks hes doing it out of guilt. a million and one bks r like this. its gotten extremely old and annoying.
I get her not wanting to marry him because she has no rank but when she just sums it up to his being guilty I cant take it.
all these men being attracted to her. Stephen. Paulo. fletcher.
this author is trying too hard to make Jocelyn sound brave. “im sorry you had to see them. I wanted only to please you.” oh shut up and get a backbone.
you mean Stephen wasn’t mad about rayne taking his mistress. he was that rayne was with an innocent. ha! what a load!
he actually thanked rayne for getting rid of her.
of course they got to chita right in time.
‘the only softness she had ever seen in the girls green eyes came when she glanced at the feminine swell that was rayne’s child.’ if Alexandra thinks you’re guilty then why would she be happy about your child? its not just raynes child.
don’t have time for this crap. alex is wrong, thinks she’s right. Jocelyn wont simply tell her the truth that she didn’t shoot her brother.
the ton has forgiven them and now they’re really popular.
sometimes used language we didn’t know-“ye can bet a prune piece o’ scut on that. shes complained about him not loving her and he finally tells you and you say nothing. ‘her secret women’s place.’ ew.
bk just got really ridiculous. Jocelyn constantly saying she despaired he’d never learn the truth and trust her. then she’s stressing over rayne’s safety. then the fire. this books exhausting.
I thought the servants were really suspicious after the first time rayne had been shot. so hen she gets to his house after Jamaica and they’re all friendly I found it weird.
of course rayne was there for the fire. he always shows up in the nick of time. I cant handle this book anymore.
her believed to be dead dad just died for real this tiemin a fire and you say “the past is behind us now. once you’ve let go of it, we can go on.” how insensitive.
why would you wait til the very last page to tell us that peter had shot himself? and then say that alex wasn’t to blame? this character thinks her opinions are right-about paulo having to accept chita’s child and about alex not being to blame when she clearly somewhat led that guy on and then turned him down. now hes dead. if she led him on in any way, then yes she’s to blame.
this book wasn't terrible, but it wasn't good. and I don't think I could read this again. I didn't like the characters, or the storyline.