I absolutely LOVE Susan's stories. And because I truly respect Susan, I won't hide my true feelings on why I can only give this one only "3" stars. (Well, I actually ALWAYS tell the truth when I write my reviews. But I didn't want to write this review because I didn't want to offend her. But, I know she would appreciate this honesty. I hope. lol) There were a few things that caused me to be confused and filling a little empty with some holes from the story. Not to mention a few times the typos threw me way off the story to the point I had to reread a few areas over to try to understand what was really meant.
Here are the things that made it difficult:
* This should have been the first book released in the SW series. OR It should be a Prequel, OR there should be a little blurb stating this is a flash back for someone OR just simply stating this is an earlier story. It is plain to see that this is definitely not in order of the series and it is quite confusing at first. I had to start reading it all over when I finally figured it out.
***SPOILER ALERT*** (I "hate" doing these things but feel it it necessary at this point.)
* I found it quite difficult to believe or be comfortable with someone demanding their boss to "order" someone to have sex with them. (Maybe it's just me, and that's okay too.)
* There should have been a little bit more information on the history behind Lilly and her attackers to help explain why they disliked each other. Also, a little bit more explanation on her attacker in general because Monroe had stated that her attack wasn't personal and yet King stated he "scented anger directed at Lilly" where she was attacked. Why was he so angry? Was he actually aiming for her? Did he think she was a Walker or someone protecting Walkers and therefore needed to be punished? Etc..
***END OF SPOILER ALERT***
* I normally don't really care if there are typos, but a few times I had to literally stop and reread some areas to try and understand what Susan was trying to say. (Example: There is a part where Lilly was supposedly talking but Jenny's name was there instead. There are a couple of areas where it said "he" instead of "she" and vice versa. Etc..) Like I said, normally no big deal, but it took me out of the story too many times. If you are a picky grammatical type of reader, you will probably not like reading it for that reason alone, but I will stress this - It is STILL a good story!!
I hope those reasons I have of only putting "3" stars don't come across as nit picking. Because like I mentioned earlier, I didn't want to write this review, but felt I owed it to Susan and other readers to explain.
With THAT said, I do want to stress that even though there a things that disappointed me in this one, it still was an overall good story and I am still looking forward to all the rest in this series!! You still have your normal Susan yummy dominant, ego carrying, sexy as all Hell Walker who wants his Angel. But doesn't "really" want her. You also have your female who is in denial and fights against him. You have a little action, suspense, sex scenes, some humor and more. So, you won't be disappointed with any of that!
I still recommend this read. IF you haven't started reading this series, start with this one then go on to the so called 1st one released. If you have read the others in this series, you will still appreciate this one. I am sooooo looking forward to seeing what happens with Cindy and Redknife!! Also, Shy and York. HELL! I can't wait for all of them to come out. So, start-a-typing Susan! You have a large order to fill. :-)