The Substitute

by Molly Prude

Kinky Mom, Part 1.
(Read Part 4: Maid Service, here on amazon!)

Molly likes being a Kinky Mom...
a new town, a new job, three grown daughters still living at home...
something has to help Molly get through the day...

When a teaching position opens up across state, Molly gambles everything on a move. Packing up her unruly brood, she heads for the little town of Serenade Springs.

But Serenade Springs is a strange little town: if the locals showing up on her doorstep with a welcome basket full sex toys wasn't strange enough, the televisions tune nothing but channel after channel of porn and even the local library only stocks smut.

And even though the women of the town are all young and beautiful, Molly's beginning to feel strangely old beyond her years...

Yes, Serenade Springs is strange little town.

Just the kind of place for a Kinky Mom like Molly.

Genres: Erotica

55 pages, Kindle Edition

First published April 29, 2013

Reviews

[james · Rating 4 out of 5]

With some editing, this could be a 5-star. Most issues are minor (grammar and spelling here and there) and the questionable age gap (lack of) between Molly and her elder daughters. Personally, I would have liked a less pun-like name of 'Prude' however, it works in this rather fanciful town.

I enjoyed this near 5 star story. The setting of this mysteriously odd down leaves me wondering what other secrets will be unveiled in future chapters. The characters were fun and given enough background to begin making each feel critical to the series. The experiences of Molly and each daughter seem to span a wide spread of sexual tastes and kinks; a little something for everyone.

Some of those areas may be more offensive to some readers so be forewarned. But just because some don't like it hardly calls for wrecking the rankings. I would suggest the author perhaps add a topical warning in the forward to ward off those that may have a strong revulsion to an element of the story.

As for me, I will be looking forward to reading the next installment of this series. Engaging, unique setup, a bit of mystery, and the variety of short sex descriptions work for this story.

[Ben Jackson · Rating 4 out of 5]

Has a pretty good start

So far, I enjoyed it. It has a unique setup. The characters are interesting (some more than other in various ways). It’s interesting to have the author self-insert herself into the story as the main protagonist. That’s really a unique idea. The sex scenes are brief, though they still give you your jollies. They can be a bit much at times in terms of the scenarios.

I notice there’re some typos here and there. Not a lot but noticeable nonetheless.

Otherwise, this was a nice read. I look forward to reading the sequels. If you want a short read that’ll turn you on, I’d say check this out.

[John Picha · Rating 5 out of 5]

50 Shades of Peyton Place

Molly Prude, a victim of the economic crisis, is forced to pack up her three beautiful daughters and move to Serenade Springs in search of a job. On the surface it looks like Sleepy-Town USA, but though the keyholes, many unsavory secrets of this naughtily little locale are revealed.

As they settle in, Molly becomes a "Peeping Thomasina" by circumstance, but soon acquires a voyeuristic taste, which leads her on a path to self-discovery in a hedonist haven. Eventually she applies for a job as substitute teacher, in a school with a bureaucratic twist, a carnal curriculum and an unconventional application process.

This story struck me as contemporary re-telling of a Peyton type of Place, but hotter. There is also a fun "what's wrong with this town", "Village of the Damned" vibe. This tale is told with slow-burn erotic imagery, that's sure to make you sweat. Make no mistake, this is adult material, and If you're curious for a peak, download the free preview. If it you like what you see, keep going. It won't bite very hard.

Welcome to Serenade Springs.

[Aussiescribbler Aussiescribbler · Rating 5 out of 5]

A widowed mom takes a job as substitute teacher in a town called Serenade Springs and moves there with her three grown daughters. The house which goes with the job seems far too luxurious, and the residents of the town seem a little strange. The first sign of this is that a couple of the neighbourhood women bring over a welcome basket full of sex toys.

Molly Prude (although the book is in the third person the author uses her main character's name as her pseudonym) knows how to really draw you in and keep you intrigued with this story which is reminiscent of both Ira Levin's The Stepford Wives (which gets mentioned) and Ray Bradbury's Something Wicked This Way Comes. But, unlike those stories, the Kinky Mom series also delivers wildly hot and kinky sex.

If you read this story, I bet you won't be able to stop until you've read them all. And then you may re-run the highlights in your mind for some time to come.

[Tuskers · Rating 5 out of 5]

Lovely concept

The story wasn't what I was expecting from the title. The author has a way with words that kept me going. Might just hit buy on the rest of the series to find out what happens in Serenade Springs.

[Melody · Rating 3 out of 5]

very strange story

[Jenn · Rating 2 out of 5]

Free on kindle

I wanted to like this. It had a very likable angle, even with its typos.

I was just a little disgusted with the peeping tom mom who actually was turned on when she caught her daughters in their intimate moments. And the idea of shared toys... yuck!

Furthermore, I cant stand the word C#**. Which is used excessively.

Also, mama dearest is 40. Oldest daughter is 25... Mama was pregnant at 14? Married only 20 years.
Also, oldest daughter apparently got her law degree at 21. At 25, after practicing law for 4 years, she decides it isn't for her...