Okay, let’s start with the negatives…this self-published book would have benefited greatly from the services of a good editor. There are numerous grammatical and typographical errors, no shortage of awkward sentences and clunky prose, and many instances of highly questionable punctuation. There were even a couple of sentences that seemed to say the opposite of what made sense in their context. These are not trivial points, as they interrupted the flow of the story and distracted the reader. All of these issues probably would have been pointed out and corrected if the author had worked with an editor.
That said, underneath all of those issues is a remarkably good thriller. The plot is sufficiently original to pique the reader’s interest, and the suspense builds slowly but steadily towards generally rewarding climax. On the surface, this is a police procedural that addresses the political corruption in a small community, but there is an element of the supernatural overlaid in a way that adds to the suspense and mystery, without overly stretching the plausibility of the story. While the characters are not the most deeply developed, they aren’t entirely two dimensional either, and they are generally sufficient to their roles in the story.
Over all, this is far from the worse self-promoted work of literature I’ve encountered, and in fact demonstrates the author’s potential as a story teller. Hopefully, his future efforts will benefit from the attention of an editor.