Okay, so these. Four years ago I may have said "Oh my goodness!! YAASSSS!!!" But now, it's more like, "meh." Don't get me wrong, I do really like this series, but now I love it purely for the story, but the writing is, well, meh.
I really think the "modern" thinking should have either been 100% done away with or should have evolved into more mature thinking. "Dude," "peeps," "preggers" - all got to be way too annoying and made me think that the girls were more shallow then they really were. If anything, find some synonyms for these words to hold back on the repetition.
This is the first time in the series where the author decides to change perspective of the characters. It's not my favorite, in any book, mostly because I get so attached to the first character given - regardless of how good or bad the book is written. This time around it wasn't terrible, but the characters sounded way too similar. Yes, Gabi and Lia are sisters, they will have some similarities but they shouldn't sound exactly the same. Unfortunately, that is the case.
My biggest issue with the entire series was the language used during the thoughts. They were filled with modern jargon and yet the jargon, I feel, was not 100% accurate to how young kids speak. Yes, some of them do use "dude" and "peeps" a lot, but in a book, there really is no need in a book to be over the top with the speech. I really hold to the belief that their thoughts would have molded more to their speech patterns.
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