Planchet is possibly dead, which is a shame. Alhana's appearance feels like fan service.
A decent start, a ferociously dull middle, and a somewhat OK last chapter.
What do I mean by dull?
1. A section of the story detailing how elves, a universally noble, magical, mystical fantasy race died by being bitten by swamp bugs... or mosquitoes or whatever mundane bullshit. Couldn't the authors thought up of something better?
2. A book where two groups of elves are basically doing the same thing; marching to location.
3. What is even the point of having fantasy races like elves when the magic in the Dragonlance world is so low?
4. Characters and creatures are frequently exhausted. The word means absolutely nothing when time and time again they're able to engage in intense physical and psychological feats of strength and skill after being so called "exhausted". It was even detailed how the griffons would be exhausted from their flight to rescue Gilthas' group. When they arrive, no mention of exertion was made, despite the fact they flew through a storm that killed a handful of them and journeyed hundreds of miles non-stop. Exactly how much disbelief are we supposed to suspend reading this tripe?
5. What the fuck is Breetan's thread all about? It was going absolutely nowhere.
6. Thompson and Cook's writing style is AGAIN dryer than a parched packet of cous cous with desiccants inside. In the Khurish desert. Under the sun.