Immortal

by Angelia Almos

A fantasy short story. Arianna seeks help from rogue adventurer, the Hawk, to save her criminal brother from the gallows. If her brother is hanged her entire family will be exposed as immortals when he doesn’t die. But is she willing to pay the price the Hawk asks in exchange for his assistance?

22 pages, Kindle Edition

First published February 14, 2012

About the author

Writing Young Adult, Space Opera, and Horsey Nonfiction as Angelia Almos. Writing Steamy Paranormal Romance and Romantic Suspense as Angie Derek.

Reviews

[angela · Rating 3 out of 5]

Ok

This was very short and I didn't get into it at all. I was hoping it would be more entertaining, more detailed, more interesting. I think it's really hard to catch most people's attention in such a short story.

[Lisa Filipe · Rating 3 out of 5]

Immortal is a great short story that pulls you in and leaves you in anticipation for MORE!! I hope Angelia plans to write more on these characters, because I know I would love to know what happens next!

[Patti · Rating 1 out of 5]

Amazingly short

Intriguing story but almost like a first chapter rather than a complete short story. Would be intrigued to see where this goes but disappointed that this was described as a short story rather than a sneak peek.

[OldBird]

A seriously intriguing idea - immortal beings existing in secret, and a girl desperate enough to want to hide that secret and protect her brother no matter what - but the story feels a bit too short to do everything. As-is I found it a bit too rushed, but this would make a really great longer tale like a novella; I would so love to read that because the writing and idea behind it was good.

[Jaye Shields · Rating 5 out of 5]

I gave 5 stars because it was really great. I almost gave 3 stars because I was pissed that it was over so soon. I want more! Warning: The characters and incredible world will pull you in immediately. However, it is a short story, and will leave you wanting-no, CRAVING, more. This is a great intro to check out the author's other books.

[Courtney Rene · Rating 5 out of 5]

Quick entertaining read. The author sets up the characters and the issues promptly and then takes off from there. The characters have depth. The descriptions are deep and full. I know this story is just the beginning and I can't wait to see where it goes.