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Timeless #1
Timeless: A Sensual Time Travel Adventure
After dumping his intelligent but bland boyfriend, lonely scientist Marcus ventures into Earth’s prehistoric past to find the next big discovery. But instead of science, Marcus unearths passion courtesy of an exotic caveman who rescues him from danger and fulfills his deepest fantasies.
Around 3,300 words, this gay erotic short story is the perfect backdrop for any person’s (or couple’s) imagination.
Please be sure to check out the sequel " Pharaoh's Kiss," also available on Amazon.
This short story contains descriptions of gay sex acts and is intended for mature audiences.
Around 3,300 words, this gay erotic short story is the perfect backdrop for any person’s (or couple’s) imagination.
Please be sure to check out the sequel " Pharaoh's Kiss," also available on Amazon.
This short story contains descriptions of gay sex acts and is intended for mature audiences.
11 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 29, 2012
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About the author
Michael War
10 books31 followersMichael War is a Freelance Writer from Texas whose imagination knows no bounds. He has been writing all his life, but has only written professionally for a short time. Aside from gay themed stories, Michael also enjoys writing poetry and screenplays. For any questions or comments, you can email him at michaelwar77@gmail.com
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November 29, 2012
It’s all about the sex, darlings. There isn’t much story here. Mostly, it’s about how fast you can get hard, get sucked, get fucked, get off. There is no character development. Even though time travel is used as a device, there is no explanation of how it works or why they’re going somewhere. Everything takes place in the shallow end of the pool, so if you’re looking for something deep and meaningful, this isn’t it. *tosses red boa over her shoulder and gulps from the Cosmo*
In the first story, Marcus runs into prehistoric man… who is not small and stooped with his knuckles on the ground as NatGeo and science would have us believe. No! He’s gorgeous. And he can’t wait to fuck.
In the second story, Daniel meets an Egyptian slave, who of course can’t wait to fuck, and then he meets Pharaoh. Who can’t wait to fuck.
Obviously, these are fantasies because there is absolutely nothing factual here, move along, nothing to see.
One thing you all must know about me: I value editing. If that isn’t good, I start skimming. Find a beta or two, hire an editor, but do have it done because there is no writer alive, even the best of them, that can’t benefit from a judicious eye.
Sorry to say, my sweeties, I started skimming. This is never a good sign. I will allow as how some readers may enjoy masturbating to these stories. I believe that is why they were written. Go to it, with my blessings! I, however, will await a story.
Reviewed by: Red Licorice
In the first story, Marcus runs into prehistoric man… who is not small and stooped with his knuckles on the ground as NatGeo and science would have us believe. No! He’s gorgeous. And he can’t wait to fuck.
In the second story, Daniel meets an Egyptian slave, who of course can’t wait to fuck, and then he meets Pharaoh. Who can’t wait to fuck.
Obviously, these are fantasies because there is absolutely nothing factual here, move along, nothing to see.
One thing you all must know about me: I value editing. If that isn’t good, I start skimming. Find a beta or two, hire an editor, but do have it done because there is no writer alive, even the best of them, that can’t benefit from a judicious eye.
Sorry to say, my sweeties, I started skimming. This is never a good sign. I will allow as how some readers may enjoy masturbating to these stories. I believe that is why they were written. Go to it, with my blessings! I, however, will await a story.
Reviewed by: Red Licorice
November 26, 2022
A Bit Convoluted, But Not Bad
The idea was sound, and the writing was pretty good, but 'the one great night of sex' with his ex was never fully explained and didn't really go with the rest of the story. And the "wild man" suddenly went from feeding him water and trying to revive him, to shoving his clock down his throat in practically the same sentence?! I know it was only meant to be a short novella, but it seemed too rushed. The writer has potential to do better if they spend a bit more time with the details. A few more pages or even just paragraphs to explain things a little further and I would have probably given this 4 stars. I will say that this was a good effort and I will check out other works by the author.
The idea was sound, and the writing was pretty good, but 'the one great night of sex' with his ex was never fully explained and didn't really go with the rest of the story. And the "wild man" suddenly went from feeding him water and trying to revive him, to shoving his clock down his throat in practically the same sentence?! I know it was only meant to be a short novella, but it seemed too rushed. The writer has potential to do better if they spend a bit more time with the details. A few more pages or even just paragraphs to explain things a little further and I would have probably given this 4 stars. I will say that this was a good effort and I will check out other works by the author.
May 1, 2013
Strictly porn and the tinly veiled plot was not even close to believable. Save your money.
May 12, 2013
it was OK. Not enough for more stars.
December 29, 2013
It had potential but a lot is missing.
We jump from place to place and it was basically a jerk off story which I believe some might enjoy.
One star is more than what I would give this story.
We jump from place to place and it was basically a jerk off story which I believe some might enjoy.
One star is more than what I would give this story.
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