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The Six Worlds #1
Ben the Dragonborn
Ben’s father has disappeared. He never knew his mother. There is no one to help fourteen year old Ben understand the memories that are surfacing through his dreams. The principal is about to expel Ben, but instead sends him through a portal to another world. Ben is chosen by the Guardian of the Six Worlds to stop a war between humans and mer. Ben’s only chance of success depends on discovering the secret of his own true self in a terrifying world where nightmares come to life.
144 pages, Paperback
First published November 20, 2013
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Dianne Astle
7 books216 followersDianne was once asked what kind of animal she would be, if she could be an animal. The person who asked the question was shocked when Dianne said she’d like to be a dragon. There are times in everyone’s life when being able to fly high and breathe fire sound very appealing. However, if you can’t be a dragon, or have a dragon as a pet, then the next best thing is to write books with dragons in them and get a dog. Dianne lives in the Pacific Northwest with her husband Doug, his three cats and her beloved dog Thomas. Thomas gets Dianne out walking almost every day, which is the next best thing to flying on dragon wing.
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September 23, 2014
Kids Hitch a Ride on an Emotional Roller-Coaster Fuelled by the Promise of Dragonborn Fire!
If you scroll down through the Amazon reviews of Ben the Dragonborn you'll see that there have already been many written, so my intention here is not to recap the story, rather to take readers on an emotional journey to Dragonhood. The beginning is so captivating that I found myself glued to the screen as the words scrolled past, wide-eyed and rapt. A lot of the things that happen to Ben are fairly obvious developments plotwise and I expected them, things like his fear of water playing out on a world that is mostly waterbound, and the obvious clue in the title could have ended no other way, but the ways in which these things happened filled me with childlike wonder and were pleasantly surprising. I didn't like some of the creatures the trio, Ben, Charla and Jared, met at various junctures, but I think that was rather the point: they represent character-building obstacles that stretch the three to breaking, and they come out fighting not for themselves but for each other, which was strangely humbling to read of such young people and produced a very warm glow in my heart. Everything ties off satisfyingly, with big emotional tugs at the heartstrings when both Charla and Jared are rewarded not only by their steep emotional learning curves on the journey, but also in the positions afforded them as a result of their bravery and heroism; and for Ben and his family on his return to his own planet. Needless to say, he is very keen to do well in subsequent swimming lessons, and I am very keen to know what he'll get thrown head first into in the next story, and what the other four planets have in store for him. If I lived closer to my 8-year-old grand-daughter I'd be reading it to her every chance I got, but I'll definitely be sending the Amazon UK link to my own grown-up baby so that he can buy it for her himself and read it to her.
If you scroll down through the Amazon reviews of Ben the Dragonborn you'll see that there have already been many written, so my intention here is not to recap the story, rather to take readers on an emotional journey to Dragonhood. The beginning is so captivating that I found myself glued to the screen as the words scrolled past, wide-eyed and rapt. A lot of the things that happen to Ben are fairly obvious developments plotwise and I expected them, things like his fear of water playing out on a world that is mostly waterbound, and the obvious clue in the title could have ended no other way, but the ways in which these things happened filled me with childlike wonder and were pleasantly surprising. I didn't like some of the creatures the trio, Ben, Charla and Jared, met at various junctures, but I think that was rather the point: they represent character-building obstacles that stretch the three to breaking, and they come out fighting not for themselves but for each other, which was strangely humbling to read of such young people and produced a very warm glow in my heart. Everything ties off satisfyingly, with big emotional tugs at the heartstrings when both Charla and Jared are rewarded not only by their steep emotional learning curves on the journey, but also in the positions afforded them as a result of their bravery and heroism; and for Ben and his family on his return to his own planet. Needless to say, he is very keen to do well in subsequent swimming lessons, and I am very keen to know what he'll get thrown head first into in the next story, and what the other four planets have in store for him. If I lived closer to my 8-year-old grand-daughter I'd be reading it to her every chance I got, but I'll definitely be sending the Amazon UK link to my own grown-up baby so that he can buy it for her himself and read it to her.
April 6, 2014
An enchanting children’s fantasy full of heartfelt sincerity and truth
Always seek the treasure of your own true self…
This beautiful book is an inspiring tale of courage, friendship and dreams that will dazzle and delight. Similarly to Harry Potter and other similar young adult fantasy stories, this story contains a strong heroic main protagonist who leads the way in an epic adventure. Ben is an ideal role model, whose compassion and heart is commendable in the face of adversity and danger. This impressive novel of substance builds bridges through the use of imagination and thought-provoking meaning, which instils a sense of adventure for the reader to search within themselves. Here is a story which reaches out to all readers in its truth for everyone who braves the hero’s quest.
Ben the Dragonborn is a ‘six worlds’ story about a young boy whose nightmares of two moons, fire-breathing winged beasts and giant claws are brought to life! Not all dreams are fiction and Ben’s life is suddenly turned upside down as he uncovers the shocking truth about his parents, his own powers and the secrets hidden in the office of the head mistress…
Wonderfully original and inspired this remarkable tale is one that takes fantasy fiction to new heights. Anyone with a vivid imagination and a love for Dragons, Myth & Magic will be whisked off on the most thrilling journey of a lifetime told through the eyes of a likeable character. I found this story utterly compelling to read, plus it was interesting to see the characters grow and develop as more secrets were revealed and the detailed plot unravelled. The striking cover of this book certainly helps it to catch your eye and stand out on the bookshelf, and I confidently predict it becoming a firm favourites for Middle grade / Young Adult readers.
The engaging narrative contains not only extensive, well-conceived world building but also a cast of colourful characters who keep you entertained. The entire concept of this novel is quite extraordinary and so I am really looking forward to seeing the author’s next work. *I would like to thank the author for providing me with a copy of her book to read and write an honest and non-biased review on. *
Always seek the treasure of your own true self…
This beautiful book is an inspiring tale of courage, friendship and dreams that will dazzle and delight. Similarly to Harry Potter and other similar young adult fantasy stories, this story contains a strong heroic main protagonist who leads the way in an epic adventure. Ben is an ideal role model, whose compassion and heart is commendable in the face of adversity and danger. This impressive novel of substance builds bridges through the use of imagination and thought-provoking meaning, which instils a sense of adventure for the reader to search within themselves. Here is a story which reaches out to all readers in its truth for everyone who braves the hero’s quest.
Ben the Dragonborn is a ‘six worlds’ story about a young boy whose nightmares of two moons, fire-breathing winged beasts and giant claws are brought to life! Not all dreams are fiction and Ben’s life is suddenly turned upside down as he uncovers the shocking truth about his parents, his own powers and the secrets hidden in the office of the head mistress…
Wonderfully original and inspired this remarkable tale is one that takes fantasy fiction to new heights. Anyone with a vivid imagination and a love for Dragons, Myth & Magic will be whisked off on the most thrilling journey of a lifetime told through the eyes of a likeable character. I found this story utterly compelling to read, plus it was interesting to see the characters grow and develop as more secrets were revealed and the detailed plot unravelled. The striking cover of this book certainly helps it to catch your eye and stand out on the bookshelf, and I confidently predict it becoming a firm favourites for Middle grade / Young Adult readers.
The engaging narrative contains not only extensive, well-conceived world building but also a cast of colourful characters who keep you entertained. The entire concept of this novel is quite extraordinary and so I am really looking forward to seeing the author’s next work. *I would like to thank the author for providing me with a copy of her book to read and write an honest and non-biased review on. *
August 3, 2016
"Ben the Dragonborn" is a delightful book, especially for Middle-Grade students. The storyline is well-written and the characters have some flaws, which kids today need to realize. Regardless of our abilities, life is going to hand us situations that require far more courage than we ever dreamed we possessed. That is the message Dianne Astle's book provides to the reader, and it is quite possibly the most important lesson any of us have to learn. The fantasy world was believable as were the various creatures which inhabited it.
The other lesson readers will learn is to maintain your persistence to accomplish a task, regardless of your previous experience with the problem. These are critical lessons for Middle-graders to learn.
The other lesson readers will learn is to maintain your persistence to accomplish a task, regardless of your previous experience with the problem. These are critical lessons for Middle-graders to learn.
June 9, 2014
As the book cover implies, Ben's mother is from a world of dragons, but he doesn't yet know that he's half dragon or that there are other worlds. He's been raised on earth by his father. He attends a private school that trains "special" students who are chosen to travel between worlds and help when there is trouble. These students are also blessed with 3 gifts that they can use on their quest. Ben finds out he is one of these chosen ones but has a hard time accepting it.
Ben is a young man I could relate to. He has an unexplainable fear of water. But that doesn't make it any less of a problem. He can't swim. People have tried to teach him, but no matter how hard he tries or flogs around, he sinks like a stone. So when he is chosen to go to Lushaka to help restore peace between the Mer-people and humans - (a watery world where only small islands of land exist) - he is instantly thrust into his worst nightmare. He doesn't believe he could possibly be the right choice for the task at hand and most others agree with him.
Despite Ben's fear and lack of confidence, he ends up finding the courage to go. Ben's story is filled with adventure, danger, and suspense. The young hero is joined by two others on his journey. A Lushakan human and a Mermaid. Arch enemies. They must put aside their prejudices and learn to work together to fight against all the dangerous creatures along their journey in order restore the Mer King's crown that was stolen and avert war between their people. Unhappily, the island where they are headed is more dangerous than the much larger ocean Ben is so afraid of. There are enough scary monsters and poisonous creatures to fill up Australia:)
Ben the Dragonborn is the 1st in the Six Worlds series, so I look forward to learning about the other worlds and following Ben's adventures as he explores his gifts further and learns more about his dragon heritage. I'm confident middle graders and up will enjoy and get caught up in this thrilling new young adult adventure.
Ben is a young man I could relate to. He has an unexplainable fear of water. But that doesn't make it any less of a problem. He can't swim. People have tried to teach him, but no matter how hard he tries or flogs around, he sinks like a stone. So when he is chosen to go to Lushaka to help restore peace between the Mer-people and humans - (a watery world where only small islands of land exist) - he is instantly thrust into his worst nightmare. He doesn't believe he could possibly be the right choice for the task at hand and most others agree with him.
Despite Ben's fear and lack of confidence, he ends up finding the courage to go. Ben's story is filled with adventure, danger, and suspense. The young hero is joined by two others on his journey. A Lushakan human and a Mermaid. Arch enemies. They must put aside their prejudices and learn to work together to fight against all the dangerous creatures along their journey in order restore the Mer King's crown that was stolen and avert war between their people. Unhappily, the island where they are headed is more dangerous than the much larger ocean Ben is so afraid of. There are enough scary monsters and poisonous creatures to fill up Australia:)
Ben the Dragonborn is the 1st in the Six Worlds series, so I look forward to learning about the other worlds and following Ben's adventures as he explores his gifts further and learns more about his dragon heritage. I'm confident middle graders and up will enjoy and get caught up in this thrilling new young adult adventure.
January 24, 2014
Ben the Dragonborn (Six Worlds, #1) by Dianne Astle
Ben the Dragonborn (Six Worlds, #1) by Dianne Astle is a great book for boys ages 8-12, but older people will enjoy it as well. The book is very easy to follow because of the author’s fantastic writing. Astle’s writing draws the reader in and before you know it, you are finished a remarkable book. The author has given its readers a book that is fresh, fun and interesting. Ben the Dragonborn is a book that can hold the attention of its reader; not only because of the writing but because of the content.
In Ben the Dragonborn we are introduced to Ben, who attends Fairhaven ( a special school that trains their students and sends them to other worlds to help solve problems). Ben has a problem with water and is unable to learn how to swim and gets sent to the Principals office.
During his time in the office, the Principal and the Guardian chose him to go to Lushaka to help disperse the war that is brewing between the mer people and humans. Up until his meeting with the Principal, Ben knew nothing about the real reason for the school and how the students aided others on different planets.
Ben, along with Charla (mermaid), Brina (merman), and Jared go off to find the crown that was stolen and return it to the King so there would not be a war between the mer people and the humans on Lushaka. During their adventure they encounter strange fantastical beasts that try to stop them. Ben’s third gift manifests during his quest and is able to help get the crown back.
This story was a wonderful fresh story that any adventure seeking reader would love. I would highly recommend this book.
4.3 Stars
*I won this book through Goodreads First Reads giveaway. In no way has this influenced my rating or opinion of this book.*
Ben the Dragonborn (Six Worlds, #1) by Dianne Astle is a great book for boys ages 8-12, but older people will enjoy it as well. The book is very easy to follow because of the author’s fantastic writing. Astle’s writing draws the reader in and before you know it, you are finished a remarkable book. The author has given its readers a book that is fresh, fun and interesting. Ben the Dragonborn is a book that can hold the attention of its reader; not only because of the writing but because of the content.
In Ben the Dragonborn we are introduced to Ben, who attends Fairhaven ( a special school that trains their students and sends them to other worlds to help solve problems). Ben has a problem with water and is unable to learn how to swim and gets sent to the Principals office.
During his time in the office, the Principal and the Guardian chose him to go to Lushaka to help disperse the war that is brewing between the mer people and humans. Up until his meeting with the Principal, Ben knew nothing about the real reason for the school and how the students aided others on different planets.
Ben, along with Charla (mermaid), Brina (merman), and Jared go off to find the crown that was stolen and return it to the King so there would not be a war between the mer people and the humans on Lushaka. During their adventure they encounter strange fantastical beasts that try to stop them. Ben’s third gift manifests during his quest and is able to help get the crown back.
This story was a wonderful fresh story that any adventure seeking reader would love. I would highly recommend this book.
4.3 Stars
*I won this book through Goodreads First Reads giveaway. In no way has this influenced my rating or opinion of this book.*
February 20, 2014
I received a copy of this book through the Goodreads a First Reads program.
Ten Second Synopsis:
Teenager with a fear of water unexpectedly finds himself cast int he role of world-saving hero.
This was an engaging story with the elements of fantasy woven neatly into the coming-of-age/discovering your identity theme. This would appeal to those who like new and different fantasy worlds that feature a range of familiar and created mythical creatures. The creation of the six worlds and the rules around the Chosens' travel between them was a unique plot device, which is always good to see in a genre in which certain elements have been done to death.
I had a bit of trouble with the writing - there's a lot of explanatory detail which could have been better written as dialogue or action to prevent the story from dragging in places. Also, I didn't really believe that a physically-able teenager taking one-on-one lessons would be utterly and completely unable to learn to swim, at least in a rudimentary way, so that part of the story didn't quite ring true for me.
Overall though, fantasy buffs should enjoy this take on between world travel and mythology.
Ten Second Synopsis:
Teenager with a fear of water unexpectedly finds himself cast int he role of world-saving hero.
This was an engaging story with the elements of fantasy woven neatly into the coming-of-age/discovering your identity theme. This would appeal to those who like new and different fantasy worlds that feature a range of familiar and created mythical creatures. The creation of the six worlds and the rules around the Chosens' travel between them was a unique plot device, which is always good to see in a genre in which certain elements have been done to death.
I had a bit of trouble with the writing - there's a lot of explanatory detail which could have been better written as dialogue or action to prevent the story from dragging in places. Also, I didn't really believe that a physically-able teenager taking one-on-one lessons would be utterly and completely unable to learn to swim, at least in a rudimentary way, so that part of the story didn't quite ring true for me.
Overall though, fantasy buffs should enjoy this take on between world travel and mythology.
April 12, 2015
Love, love, love this book. The fantasy genre is hugely popular with children, tweens, and teens (ages 8-15). As a teacher, I read a lot of books that fall into this genre. I am always on the lookout for books that are worth recommending to my students. Dianne Astle has delivered a fast paced, well written story that young readers will enjoy reading over and over again. To avoid spoiling the plot, I’ll just mention a few reasons that this book is now a part of my classroom library. Ben Taylor, the reluctant hero, gets caught up in something bigger than himself and has to dig deep to find the strength and courage he needs to complete his unasked for mission—two character traits he has no idea that he possesses until he has to draw on them. Ben's journey is one of self-discovery (on many levels) that draws the reader into his adventure. The message is positive--the only way to fail is to give up. The subplots are skillfully woven into the story so they enhance the main plot line rather than distract from it. I could go on and one, but really, I said everything that future readers need to know in the first sentence: Love, love, love this book.
February 18, 2014
A rope with three strands is not easily broken.
In Ben the Dragonborn (The Six Worlds) by Dianne Astle, we have three unlikely strands that bind together to make up a very strong rope indeed.
First, there’s Benjamin Taylor, chosen of the Guradian for reasons no one can fathom. He can’t swim and he’s plopped into the middle of an ocean on a world called Lushaka, where he nearly drowns before his quest even began.
Next there’s Charla, a mermaid with a sharp tongue and an even shaper attitude who sneaks away on the quest, determined to show the Watcher she’s ready to be chosen. That is until the dangers before her become almost too much to face and she quickly realizes she’s not the super mermaid she thought she was.
And finally, Jared is a human who is determined to find his brother. Oh, there’s a slight problem. Humans are oath bound to kill any mermaid they find.
This is an enjoyable story for children ages 8 and up. The themes of friendship, teamwork, and overcoming entrenched prejudice explored here are universal.
In Ben the Dragonborn (The Six Worlds) by Dianne Astle, we have three unlikely strands that bind together to make up a very strong rope indeed.
First, there’s Benjamin Taylor, chosen of the Guradian for reasons no one can fathom. He can’t swim and he’s plopped into the middle of an ocean on a world called Lushaka, where he nearly drowns before his quest even began.
Next there’s Charla, a mermaid with a sharp tongue and an even shaper attitude who sneaks away on the quest, determined to show the Watcher she’s ready to be chosen. That is until the dangers before her become almost too much to face and she quickly realizes she’s not the super mermaid she thought she was.
And finally, Jared is a human who is determined to find his brother. Oh, there’s a slight problem. Humans are oath bound to kill any mermaid they find.
This is an enjoyable story for children ages 8 and up. The themes of friendship, teamwork, and overcoming entrenched prejudice explored here are universal.
March 15, 2015
A Very Enjoyable Youth Book
Ben is just a normal kid at an abnormal boarding school! His interview by the principal, to decide if he should leave the school, takes an unexpected turn and Ben finds himself going through a portal to another world...one covered with water. Unfortunately, Ben can't swim! He is rescued by a disparaging mermaid, sent off on a mission across the ocean, attacked by weird (and scary!) creatures, discovers some very unexpected relatives, makes a few fast friends, and successfully gets home again! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in book 2 of The Six Worlds. Excellent fun and very readable!
Ben is just a normal kid at an abnormal boarding school! His interview by the principal, to decide if he should leave the school, takes an unexpected turn and Ben finds himself going through a portal to another world...one covered with water. Unfortunately, Ben can't swim! He is rescued by a disparaging mermaid, sent off on a mission across the ocean, attacked by weird (and scary!) creatures, discovers some very unexpected relatives, makes a few fast friends, and successfully gets home again! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in book 2 of The Six Worlds. Excellent fun and very readable!
October 3, 2014
I took some time reading Ben the Dragonborn, but only because I thoroughly enjoyed reading it to my nine year old daughter!
We both loved it and it made bedtime a special time to cuddle down and see how Ben was going to cope with the realization that he was not just a normal boy, fantastic!
Very well written and totally engaging for both of us, I commend Dianne Astle as a top story teller with a really original story that touches on some important 'coming of age' concepts, we are both looking forward to the next book!
We both loved it and it made bedtime a special time to cuddle down and see how Ben was going to cope with the realization that he was not just a normal boy, fantastic!
Very well written and totally engaging for both of us, I commend Dianne Astle as a top story teller with a really original story that touches on some important 'coming of age' concepts, we are both looking forward to the next book!
March 5, 2016
Readers will enjoy following this adventure where Ben Taylor, a student at the private school of Fairhaven is going to find out some extraordinary things when he is sent through a portal into the land of Lushaken, one of six related worlds. As Bens' adventure begins e is at first completely overwhelmed by this new world, but as secrets are revealed, Ben finds more about himself and his past and is ready to learn and maybe to head out on that next adventure. Good story I think Young adults will enjoy with its right amount of adventure, fun and mystery.
October 19, 2018
I enjoyed this adventure very much. I truly can't say anything about how good it is without spoilers so you will just have to read the book to find out for yourself. I highly recommend it to anyone that breathes.
March 31, 2015
Delightful!
September 28, 2020
"Ben the Dragonborn" by Dianne E. Astle, is a delightful story about a boy who overcomes his fears, and makes his world a better place. Enrolled by his father in a school for children with special talents, Ben is forced to confront not only his personal fears, but a force which threatens to upset the universe. Unprepared, Ben learns to rely on two others who are doubtful about his story, and who are also enemies of each other. Together, they prove their value and work together to overcome the obstacles they face. A fun read, with more tales to follow. I felt that I was in a combination of X-Men, Hogwarts, and the allure of dragons, which is very cool. I enjoyed this YA story and I think you will, too.
April 8, 2020
I had a lot of fun reading this book. There were serious moments, but a lot of light-hearted ones too.
My main complaint would be that several narrative turns happened coincidentally instead of causally, but given that the story takes place in a world where mermaids exist, people can turn into dragons, and adults seem fine sending kids off to save the world, I can handwave it.
The strongest parts of this story are the outspoken characters and quirky worldbuilding. I think middle grade audiences will definitely delight in following Ben's adventures as things get crazier and crazier all the way through to the dramatic finish.
My main complaint would be that several narrative turns happened coincidentally instead of causally, but given that the story takes place in a world where mermaids exist, people can turn into dragons, and adults seem fine sending kids off to save the world, I can handwave it.
The strongest parts of this story are the outspoken characters and quirky worldbuilding. I think middle grade audiences will definitely delight in following Ben's adventures as things get crazier and crazier all the way through to the dramatic finish.
March 11, 2020
This story is filled with action and likable characters. The main guy, Ben, is so endearing, I wanted to make him my friend. I was cheering for him right from the beginning. The introduction to other worlds was one of the parts that make this exciting. It was designed to confound and challenge Ben, but he rises to meet each time he is tested with courage. I liked him very much.
I wanted to read more of Ben's adventures, but the book ended just as it came to a turning point. I hope there will be more of Ben's adventures coming.
I wanted to read more of Ben's adventures, but the book ended just as it came to a turning point. I hope there will be more of Ben's adventures coming.
October 13, 2019
If you love a wholesome Fantasy this book is for you!
Simple read, would be a good read for youth that enjoy fantasies. Mermaids, a bit of magic, and yes dragons are all an adventure away.
Simple read, would be a good read for youth that enjoy fantasies. Mermaids, a bit of magic, and yes dragons are all an adventure away.
January 13, 2018
Intriguing story
Full of adventure. I didn’t want to put this book down. I’m looking forward to the next books in this series.
Full of adventure. I didn’t want to put this book down. I’m looking forward to the next books in this series.
September 4, 2016
A received a copy of Ben the Dragonborn in exchange for an honest review.
This was an unexpected find, and quite a delightful and fun adventure to read!
The story has an interesting premise that is sure to capture the interest of the age group it is aimed at. It’s full of colourful characters and intriguing places, and is threaded with important messages, including self-acceptance, the dangers of discrimination, and the strength of teamwork and friendship.
There were a few issues with the writing though. In places there was a lot of unnecessary ‘telling’, when actions or dialogue would have done a much better job. Some awkward sentencing unfortunately jarred me out of the story a couple of times. E.g (sentence taken from the book) “Ben slapped at them as he hunched down over the evil smelling animal excrement or in other words pile of poop.” Um, yeah, a few weirdly phrased sentences like that occurred, which did not flow with the general style of writing.
There were a few formatting errors as well. Some chapter headings were in full caps, other were not. There were a lot of missing quotation marks from both the back and front of dialogue sections. Using “O.K” in places instead of “Okay”. Using the term “spider” from the POV of a character who initially did not even know what a spider was. A few niggling things like that. Nothing really to detract from the story itself, but it does detract from the presentation and quality of the book.
I think the things that annoyed me the most were the haphazard POV jumps. The story generally follows Ben’s POV but numerous times jumps to others’ POV, sometimes within the same paragraph. A few times it worked, but most of the time it did not–at least not for me. But younger readers may not find this too distracting.
I also had a big problem with the fact that
And then there’s the fact that I think here the author was trying to be mysterious, but it didn’t work for me.
As a side note, I love the Celtic symbol on the front cover of the book. But the dragon??? Nope. It’s a poorly blended mash-up of a snake, a lizard, an insect, and I’m not sure what else. It looks nothing like the dragons described in the story.
And yet, despite my grievances, I still really enjoyed this story, which says a lot for its natural appeal. It was an easy read, fun, adventurous and at times surprisingly clever. What Ben the Dragonborn needed to truly shine was a better plot-assessment, copy-edit and formatting. Otherwise, this is a great little story, which will appeal to many young fantasy-lovers! I actually wouldn't mind reading the next book, when it comes out.
This was an unexpected find, and quite a delightful and fun adventure to read!
The story has an interesting premise that is sure to capture the interest of the age group it is aimed at. It’s full of colourful characters and intriguing places, and is threaded with important messages, including self-acceptance, the dangers of discrimination, and the strength of teamwork and friendship.
There were a few issues with the writing though. In places there was a lot of unnecessary ‘telling’, when actions or dialogue would have done a much better job. Some awkward sentencing unfortunately jarred me out of the story a couple of times. E.g (sentence taken from the book) “Ben slapped at them as he hunched down over the evil smelling animal excrement or in other words pile of poop.” Um, yeah, a few weirdly phrased sentences like that occurred, which did not flow with the general style of writing.
There were a few formatting errors as well. Some chapter headings were in full caps, other were not. There were a lot of missing quotation marks from both the back and front of dialogue sections. Using “O.K” in places instead of “Okay”. Using the term “spider” from the POV of a character who initially did not even know what a spider was. A few niggling things like that. Nothing really to detract from the story itself, but it does detract from the presentation and quality of the book.
I think the things that annoyed me the most were the haphazard POV jumps. The story generally follows Ben’s POV but numerous times jumps to others’ POV, sometimes within the same paragraph. A few times it worked, but most of the time it did not–at least not for me. But younger readers may not find this too distracting.
I also had a big problem with the fact that
And then there’s the fact that I think here the author was trying to be mysterious, but it didn’t work for me.
As a side note, I love the Celtic symbol on the front cover of the book. But the dragon??? Nope. It’s a poorly blended mash-up of a snake, a lizard, an insect, and I’m not sure what else. It looks nothing like the dragons described in the story.
And yet, despite my grievances, I still really enjoyed this story, which says a lot for its natural appeal. It was an easy read, fun, adventurous and at times surprisingly clever. What Ben the Dragonborn needed to truly shine was a better plot-assessment, copy-edit and formatting. Otherwise, this is a great little story, which will appeal to many young fantasy-lovers! I actually wouldn't mind reading the next book, when it comes out.
February 17, 2020
Prejudice can be overcome
This is an excellent book, one of differing worlds and peoples. There are transformations and lessons to learn in order to overcome adversity.
It is also a good way to show prejudice and adversity are none too easy to overcome.
A brilliant read for all who love Sci-Fi and new places.
This is an excellent book, one of differing worlds and peoples. There are transformations and lessons to learn in order to overcome adversity.
It is also a good way to show prejudice and adversity are none too easy to overcome.
A brilliant read for all who love Sci-Fi and new places.
January 25, 2014
Interview with Diane Astle: http://zero2fiction.wordpress.com/201...
The Quick Review:
Boys between 8 and 12 will absolutely love this book; it is written perfectly for this age group. Ben the Dragonborn is a fun and exciting read that fiction-fantasy fans of any age will be able to get into. The story reads very quickly and is easy to follow. This is the kind of story you will want your children to read if you want to show them that reading can be fun; and not like all the awful books teachers make you read in grade school.
The Longer Review:
Ben the Dragon born is a great new fantasy series. The book has a recipe of successful concepts and ideas that are familiar to a YA fantasy reader, but in no way does this book seem like a copy. It is unique and original in every way.
Portals to unknown worlds; gifted children chosen for quests; an array of imaginative creatures; and a school that is magical and secretive. Fans of the 100 Cupboards series, Fablehaven, Percy Jackson, and Harry Potter will find something to love in this book.
The Story:
Ben is a regular student at a not so regular school. He knows the school is different, but he and his friend cannot figure out why. A meeting with his principle turns into a quest to another world. Ben has to decide if all this is real, and if he really has what it takes to save another world from a disaster that the natives cannot fix themselves.
The Writing:
Astle’s writing is very easy to read and follow. Her story is not bogged down with too much detail or unnecessary back-story. Ben the Dragon born felt like a fun, bight adventure that is perfectly suited for the “Juvenile Fiction” genre.
The story reads very quickly, and the characters move very fast through the story. My only critique is a budding romance between 2 characters. They go from despising each other to putting up with each other in a few chapters. Then you turn the page and one is saying she loves the other. This happened over the course of a day, maybe two, in the story. It was just way too fast for those feelings to develop like that. That said it did not detract from or get in the way of the story, and is probably a believable progression of feeling for a very young reader.
The Characters:
The story follows the POV of Ben, a student at Fairhaven. He goes through most of the story with 2 companions around his age, Jared and Charla. Ben and Jared seem very average, no over the top emotions or character flaws. It is nice to see main characters who are normal, rather than super nerdy or over defiant. Charla is over confident and a little arrogant, which plays well into the adventure.
Conclusion:
This is a must read for boys. Books like this are what get you into reading at a young age. I wish I had more stories like this when I was in grade school. It is an exciting story, full of adventure, and easy to read. I look forward to the next one.
The Quick Review:
Boys between 8 and 12 will absolutely love this book; it is written perfectly for this age group. Ben the Dragonborn is a fun and exciting read that fiction-fantasy fans of any age will be able to get into. The story reads very quickly and is easy to follow. This is the kind of story you will want your children to read if you want to show them that reading can be fun; and not like all the awful books teachers make you read in grade school.
The Longer Review:
Ben the Dragon born is a great new fantasy series. The book has a recipe of successful concepts and ideas that are familiar to a YA fantasy reader, but in no way does this book seem like a copy. It is unique and original in every way.
Portals to unknown worlds; gifted children chosen for quests; an array of imaginative creatures; and a school that is magical and secretive. Fans of the 100 Cupboards series, Fablehaven, Percy Jackson, and Harry Potter will find something to love in this book.
The Story:
Ben is a regular student at a not so regular school. He knows the school is different, but he and his friend cannot figure out why. A meeting with his principle turns into a quest to another world. Ben has to decide if all this is real, and if he really has what it takes to save another world from a disaster that the natives cannot fix themselves.
The Writing:
Astle’s writing is very easy to read and follow. Her story is not bogged down with too much detail or unnecessary back-story. Ben the Dragon born felt like a fun, bight adventure that is perfectly suited for the “Juvenile Fiction” genre.
The story reads very quickly, and the characters move very fast through the story. My only critique is a budding romance between 2 characters. They go from despising each other to putting up with each other in a few chapters. Then you turn the page and one is saying she loves the other. This happened over the course of a day, maybe two, in the story. It was just way too fast for those feelings to develop like that. That said it did not detract from or get in the way of the story, and is probably a believable progression of feeling for a very young reader.
The Characters:
The story follows the POV of Ben, a student at Fairhaven. He goes through most of the story with 2 companions around his age, Jared and Charla. Ben and Jared seem very average, no over the top emotions or character flaws. It is nice to see main characters who are normal, rather than super nerdy or over defiant. Charla is over confident and a little arrogant, which plays well into the adventure.
Conclusion:
This is a must read for boys. Books like this are what get you into reading at a young age. I wish I had more stories like this when I was in grade school. It is an exciting story, full of adventure, and easy to read. I look forward to the next one.
June 29, 2014
It seems that I forgot how captivating and incredible it is to read middle grade books, until I read and thoroughly enjoyed Ben the Dragonborn. I loved how the worlds are painted, how the characters are bright and so nice to get to know. I adored how much friendship, bravery and teamwork is important and have such a huge role inside the story. It really is a cute and sweet read.
When we meet Ben, we quickly realize he is far from the perfect hero everyone expects to save the day. This boy is clueless to what he is capable of since he has been kept in shadows by the very own special school that trains heroes the Guardian chooses to protect other worlds. When the guardian unexpectedly picks him to go to another world where he has to deal, among other things, with his personal nightmare, no one truly expects for him to accomplish it. However, Ben, packed with two new gifts and a mysterious one possibly on the way, lunges bravely (after the initial shock) to this difficult task.
Ben is absolutely terrified of water. He is the worst swimmer ever, so it's highly unfortunate for him to be sent into a strange world where 90% of it is water and none of his gifts are of any use to keep himself from drowning. That's where mermaids and sea creatures come into action, and the whole story becomes one exciting adventure.
I couldn't stop smiling throughout the whole book, I think it's really good and it made me feel lighter as I read it. It's nice to change reading preferences once in a while, YA books sometimes wear me down with the love angst characters usually make me go through and because of this, I can't focus on the whole adventure. But not with Ben. This book is all for the adventure and forming great bonds of trust and friendship. I'm excited to meet the other worlds that Ben will surely get to travel someday, and most importantly, how he fares with his super cool and born with third gift. I bet you can guess which one it is.
Thanks to the author for the copy in exchange for an honest review. Read this also at The Reader and the Chef.
When we meet Ben, we quickly realize he is far from the perfect hero everyone expects to save the day. This boy is clueless to what he is capable of since he has been kept in shadows by the very own special school that trains heroes the Guardian chooses to protect other worlds. When the guardian unexpectedly picks him to go to another world where he has to deal, among other things, with his personal nightmare, no one truly expects for him to accomplish it. However, Ben, packed with two new gifts and a mysterious one possibly on the way, lunges bravely (after the initial shock) to this difficult task.
Ben is absolutely terrified of water. He is the worst swimmer ever, so it's highly unfortunate for him to be sent into a strange world where 90% of it is water and none of his gifts are of any use to keep himself from drowning. That's where mermaids and sea creatures come into action, and the whole story becomes one exciting adventure.
I couldn't stop smiling throughout the whole book, I think it's really good and it made me feel lighter as I read it. It's nice to change reading preferences once in a while, YA books sometimes wear me down with the love angst characters usually make me go through and because of this, I can't focus on the whole adventure. But not with Ben. This book is all for the adventure and forming great bonds of trust and friendship. I'm excited to meet the other worlds that Ben will surely get to travel someday, and most importantly, how he fares with his super cool and born with third gift. I bet you can guess which one it is.
Thanks to the author for the copy in exchange for an honest review. Read this also at The Reader and the Chef.
December 26, 2014
I received a copy from Goodreads' First Reads program in exchange for an honest review
What a great story! It's great to keep in mind that this is intended for a younger audience, or the writing style could get old fast. It's that style that clearly shows it's for a younger reader, where everything is simplified and explained. You know what, though? That's okay. I really enjoyed it, and the imagery was wonderful. I love the idea of the different worlds helping each other in times of need, and I really hope we get to see the other worlds in future installments. I think what I would have loved more was to have descriptions of what Charla saw underwater. The underwater world is so beautiful, it's like a whole other planet, and here we have and underwater world on another planet. I just think it was a missed opportunity for some wonderful images. What we did have was great. Little cannibalistic spider crabs, hungry for anything that touches the sand. Giant birds that will pick up and devour anything it can get its talons onto. Merpeople and changelings, dragons and giant spiders, never a dull moment in the 144 pages.
I love Ben's character. He's chosen as a hero, but is one of the least heroic choices that could be made. What I call the "Big Reveal" of his character was a bit obvious , but I love that he had to struggle on a world made of water while he couldn't swim. He had wonderful flaws that he had to overcome, and he had to help the people of this new world, that he'd only learned about hours before, stop fighting and work together to put an end to a war no one wants to fight in.
A great hero's journey filled with courage, friendship, and mythical creatures, anyone looking for a quick read should give this a shot.
What a great story! It's great to keep in mind that this is intended for a younger audience, or the writing style could get old fast. It's that style that clearly shows it's for a younger reader, where everything is simplified and explained. You know what, though? That's okay. I really enjoyed it, and the imagery was wonderful. I love the idea of the different worlds helping each other in times of need, and I really hope we get to see the other worlds in future installments. I think what I would have loved more was to have descriptions of what Charla saw underwater. The underwater world is so beautiful, it's like a whole other planet, and here we have and underwater world on another planet. I just think it was a missed opportunity for some wonderful images. What we did have was great. Little cannibalistic spider crabs, hungry for anything that touches the sand. Giant birds that will pick up and devour anything it can get its talons onto. Merpeople and changelings, dragons and giant spiders, never a dull moment in the 144 pages.
I love Ben's character. He's chosen as a hero, but is one of the least heroic choices that could be made. What I call the "Big Reveal" of his character was a bit obvious , but I love that he had to struggle on a world made of water while he couldn't swim. He had wonderful flaws that he had to overcome, and he had to help the people of this new world, that he'd only learned about hours before, stop fighting and work together to put an end to a war no one wants to fight in.
A great hero's journey filled with courage, friendship, and mythical creatures, anyone looking for a quick read should give this a shot.
June 30, 2014
The characters in Ben the Dragonborn were fully fleshed out and likeable.
While I'm most definitely not afraid of the water, having swam in pools, lakes, rivers, and two oceans, I completely understood Ben's terror. Rather than getting annoyed at his intense fear, however, I sympathized with him, and yearned that he would overcome it. I owned his fear, briefly claiming it as my own. Me!
That was awesome.
Not only did this story do a spectacular job of making the reader understand fears, but it also showed the dangers and heartbreak that can result if those fears aren't faced. It showed how easy it is for fear and ignorance to create hatred.
But it also showed that hatred brought about by ignorance can be overcome.
The world that Ben entered was populated by both humans and mer-people, and they were about to go to war with each other. Tensions were high, and each race of people saw the other as inferior and vile. This was largely due to the fact that there was little to no communication between the two groups.
Ben and his traveling companions were forced into a situation where people from both groups had to deal with those differences and learn to trust each other.
That is, unless they'd rather die horribly due to natural hazards and wildlife...
Not much of a choice there, right?
Well, I assume you can guess which choice was made. This is book one, after all! The characters all learned to think rather than make quick judgements. I enjoyed that immensely.
While I'm most definitely not afraid of the water, having swam in pools, lakes, rivers, and two oceans, I completely understood Ben's terror. Rather than getting annoyed at his intense fear, however, I sympathized with him, and yearned that he would overcome it. I owned his fear, briefly claiming it as my own. Me!
That was awesome.
Not only did this story do a spectacular job of making the reader understand fears, but it also showed the dangers and heartbreak that can result if those fears aren't faced. It showed how easy it is for fear and ignorance to create hatred.
But it also showed that hatred brought about by ignorance can be overcome.
The world that Ben entered was populated by both humans and mer-people, and they were about to go to war with each other. Tensions were high, and each race of people saw the other as inferior and vile. This was largely due to the fact that there was little to no communication between the two groups.
Ben and his traveling companions were forced into a situation where people from both groups had to deal with those differences and learn to trust each other.
That is, unless they'd rather die horribly due to natural hazards and wildlife...
Not much of a choice there, right?
Well, I assume you can guess which choice was made. This is book one, after all! The characters all learned to think rather than make quick judgements. I enjoyed that immensely.
March 8, 2014
Ben the Dragonborn (Six Worlds, #1) by Dianne Astle
is a book for ages 8-12 but older people will find it interesting, too. Dianne Astle has written an intriguing book that young readers will love and easily read. Boys will especially love it!
In Ben the Dragonborn we find Ben who attends Fairhaven (a special school that you are invited to attend.) and is in swim class but is so afraid of water, he made excuses to take part in the class and is finally sent to the Principal's office.
Once in the office, the Principal runs tests on him and he is suddenly sent to a world to help end a war that is brewing between the mer (mermaids and mermen) people and humans. Up until his meeting with the Principal, Ben knew nothing about the real reason for the school and how the students would be helping people in different worlds.
Suddenly Ben is on a journey as a Chosen One trying to fight off obstacles, meeting people from other worlds, being forced into waters, and trying to make peace within two worlds. Is Ben up to this adventure? Can he help save the two worlds from war even though he does not feel like a leader at all? Will he fail as the Chosen One? Will he ever make it back to Earth?
This is a wonderfully written story that any adventure seeking reader would love.
is a book for ages 8-12 but older people will find it interesting, too. Dianne Astle has written an intriguing book that young readers will love and easily read. Boys will especially love it!
In Ben the Dragonborn we find Ben who attends Fairhaven (a special school that you are invited to attend.) and is in swim class but is so afraid of water, he made excuses to take part in the class and is finally sent to the Principal's office.
Once in the office, the Principal runs tests on him and he is suddenly sent to a world to help end a war that is brewing between the mer (mermaids and mermen) people and humans. Up until his meeting with the Principal, Ben knew nothing about the real reason for the school and how the students would be helping people in different worlds.
Suddenly Ben is on a journey as a Chosen One trying to fight off obstacles, meeting people from other worlds, being forced into waters, and trying to make peace within two worlds. Is Ben up to this adventure? Can he help save the two worlds from war even though he does not feel like a leader at all? Will he fail as the Chosen One? Will he ever make it back to Earth?
This is a wonderfully written story that any adventure seeking reader would love.
November 27, 2013
I really enjoyed this book. At first I was concerned that it would be a little bit derivative (of the Harry Potter books), but it quickly became clear that this story, while being a fantasy written for youth and, therefore, having some recognizable elements: a young male protagonist with special powers, a school, a couple of companions (one male, one female), the tale is original, creative, and engaging. Any lover of the Potter books would likely enjoy this story immensely but won't be left with a sense of "Haven't I read this before?"
I particularly liked the character of Charla, who is a strong but stubborn female. It's clear there will be future books about Ben--4 or 5 others, I'm guessing. If you read the book, you will see why I make this supposition. It's less clear whether Charla will appear in them, but I would not be sorry to meet her again.
Ben learned of his true nature and parentage at the end of this novel. It will be interesting to see how he grows into his destiny in future novels.
I definitely recommend this book to adults and kids alike, as long as they enjoy fantasy and a ripping good story.
I particularly liked the character of Charla, who is a strong but stubborn female. It's clear there will be future books about Ben--4 or 5 others, I'm guessing. If you read the book, you will see why I make this supposition. It's less clear whether Charla will appear in them, but I would not be sorry to meet her again.
Ben learned of his true nature and parentage at the end of this novel. It will be interesting to see how he grows into his destiny in future novels.
I definitely recommend this book to adults and kids alike, as long as they enjoy fantasy and a ripping good story.
May 22, 2014
Overall, I think this is a great story for children, and I would recommend it if you are looking for a book for one!
I received a copy of Ben the Dragonborn through goodreads first reads, and admittedly it has taken me a while to finish. The book is written for a younger audience and I sometimes found that the short and simple sentences pulled me out of the story. However, once I picked up the book again I found the second half much more engrossing, so I should have stuck with it!
The above criticism aside, the story is a good one. I found the character progression satisfying, and I love the background of the six worlds. The idea behind the series is interesting, and I would love to see how the story will continue in further books. The book has finished with me wondering what will happen next, which is always a good sign!
I received a copy of Ben the Dragonborn through goodreads first reads, and admittedly it has taken me a while to finish. The book is written for a younger audience and I sometimes found that the short and simple sentences pulled me out of the story. However, once I picked up the book again I found the second half much more engrossing, so I should have stuck with it!
The above criticism aside, the story is a good one. I found the character progression satisfying, and I love the background of the six worlds. The idea behind the series is interesting, and I would love to see how the story will continue in further books. The book has finished with me wondering what will happen next, which is always a good sign!
May 31, 2015
This was a fun read! I don't read too much middle-grade fiction, but the story proved engaging and well told. Appropriate for the intended age range, the suspense and conflict were moderate, but present. The story presented a great lesson on diversity and prejudice.
The characters were likable and believable (at least as would be expected in the fantastical world created by the author). The use of an omniscient POV (point of view) keeps the reader from engaging as deeply as could have been the case. I would have preferred the author use a stronger POV to avoid the, at time jarring, head-hopping.
Though I would have preferred a bit more development to the climax of the main storyline (perhaps more the age target than the writing), this book provided a creative glimpse into a world, or worlds, which I hope to read much more of in the future. Looking forward to book two.
The characters were likable and believable (at least as would be expected in the fantastical world created by the author). The use of an omniscient POV (point of view) keeps the reader from engaging as deeply as could have been the case. I would have preferred the author use a stronger POV to avoid the, at time jarring, head-hopping.
Though I would have preferred a bit more development to the climax of the main storyline (perhaps more the age target than the writing), this book provided a creative glimpse into a world, or worlds, which I hope to read much more of in the future. Looking forward to book two.
August 19, 2015
I confess I wanted to read this book because I love dragons (and there are some cool ones; just be patient), but Ben's fear of water sucked me in from the beginning. The strong connection between the reader and Ben keeps one turning the pages, and even faster once he's sent to a water world where all his nightmares keep coming true. Wow, there are some creepy creatures and dangers everywhere Ben turns! This fantasy adventure story resonates with solid themes of friendship, overcoming prejudice, and finding inner strength in learning who you really are.
October 27, 2014
Yes, I really enjoyed this story despite it being for a younger generation. It was well written and filled with delicious fantasy where Ben, a boy from the six worlds is pushed into his first quest.
I don't give spoilers but will say that this first story of the series is a wonderful introduction into the unusual life of Ben and the promise of further adventures. There are some clever and origional ideas and themes such as the importance of friendships and the dangers of prejudice.
Altogether a very good fantasy tale.
I don't give spoilers but will say that this first story of the series is a wonderful introduction into the unusual life of Ben and the promise of further adventures. There are some clever and origional ideas and themes such as the importance of friendships and the dangers of prejudice.
Altogether a very good fantasy tale.
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