pg 37/590
Haven't quite grasped all the different realms and worlds. I think there are 3- these guys' realm, and two others who are fighting over some land, and encroaching onto theirs. (pg38: savages vs mechanized army) One are lizard-riders, the others are jeep riders (kindda), who've run out of fuel and bullets for their guns (seems like our world).
But...
old man’s lack of faith in his younger son’s martial spirit. Too, there had been Crassmor’s adolescent irresponsibility, with a period of fairly frequent peccadilloes and predisposition toward sins of the flesh.
*sigh* and I thought in a YA fantasy (supposedly well-written), I'd get away from the whorish heroes. my mistake.
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pg71
And now we have some tribe of Coyotes... of which there is a 'Coyote'... and Sandur is talking to Saynday about Pecos, White Man's son (?), also called Bill (grrh... this is just too hard to follow)
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pg161, Ch7
Story has picked up; makes a little more sense. Oh, and Sandur (the H's elder brother) is dead. I liked the fact that the other king is depicted... as having honor.
Not sure I like Ironwicca (the good guys' king) as much. lol. (Is he modeled on Richard the Lionheart?)
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Ch10: about to start.
So... before leaving for the Beyonds, Willow comes to see off Crassmoor, and they do it under a tree (no descriptions). Okie. And then Ch9 we see our H having lascivious thoughts about Alanna (a girl who has just walked into the bar). Then we find that if he's appealed to as a knight, and refuses aid, he can be drummed out of the order and will have to take vows of sth sth. BAsically, become a priest. "Celibacy, sobriety, and, no doubt, the cold silence of a praying cell—he began to sweat just thinking about it." Sobriety and cold silence he's been doing without. I'm guessing he hasn't exactly been celibate either. bleh.
Alanna turned to Crassmor, who, when not worrying about his cousin Bint, divided his time between unhappiness at going into danger and disgruntlement with his own failure to seduce Alanna
Although Willow still held his heart without qualification, he saw no reason to lead the life of a Klybesian, given a willing companion
DNF. I'm sure his adventures are amazing, and worth reading, but ...
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okay, so I skimmed to the end. Last chapter, the H is in the bar (from Ch 9), there's Alanna (he's apparently had to leave Willow, again.) and some stuff happens (a recreate of the scene from ch 9?) and... i think it's supposed to be funny. What a waste of time.
It's as if this book couldn't make up it's mind what it's supposed to be. I should've made up my mind to not read it!