Everybody is talking about the lack of groveling in this book, but, In this case, I think the problem is more with the way they fell in love that with the groveling (that was insufficient anyway). I mean, there is no reeason why she would come to love him and viceversa. He is a total bastard to her every minute they spent together, there is no good and bad moments, only bad, and he thinks the worst of her till the very end, which is not likely to end in love feelings. The motions they display at the end of the book, come from nowhere and thats a recurrent problem in HQ books....... Women (sane ones at least) don't fall in love with men that call them whore, goldigger, thief or liar, Once a misunderstanding is cleared or the H lets it go, the h can start to love him, but a normal woman would nor wet her pants with love and desire for a man while he calls her all the insults in dictionary even if he is a sex god and a gift to women.