I have found each book in this series to be more annoying than the last one. Perhaps I’m being nit picky, but for an author I previously genuinely enjoyed, Ms. Mary is not doing it for me. I’ve always believed she was a better story teller than an author, but at this point, even her story telling is lack luster.
I’d like to point out a couple things Mary often does that add no literary value, and actually make the characters sound rather stupid and frankly, strange. First, everything has such an EXTREME reaction. For example, Annette will say something like, “I slammed the phone down so hard, my hand was numb for five minutes,” or, “I laughed so hard, I almost fainted,” and each time she says it, I’m just left wondering… what? And why? The exaggeration of doing something “so hard” (the same phrase she uses over and over), is just repetitive and overused.
She also uses the phrase, “she mouthed” or “I mouthed,” often. By definition, to mouth something is to form words with the lips without making any sound. In some circumstances, sure, a person can mouth words if they’re trying to say something without others hearing, but to mouth words on the phone is silly. Alternately, to mouth could mean “mouthing back” but Mary often uses the phrase when someone is feeling sad, embarrassed, defeated, etc. and would likely not be sassing back to the other party. Again, I recognize that paying attention to these details is nit picky, but the repetition and predictably in the writing is like a broken record.
One line in this book made me laugh out loud. Annette is talking about her husband going fishing and coming home, smelling like fish. She says something along the lines of, “Fish and pussy smell so similar, I couldn’t tell which he smelled like.” My jaw DROPPED and I couldn’t help but laugh because again… What?! Why?!
Lastly, Annette makes a comment about how men will pay attention to women who “don’t deserve it” and then follows up to describe the females who “don’t deserve” attention as large, plus sized women. I don’t know if that was Mary’s attempt at making Annette sound shallow, but it did not land well.
Ultimately, Annette’s stupidity and unwillingness to just ask questions and communicate rather than assume everything is played out and getting old. I’ll finish the series because I’m already over halfway through, but seriously, it’s just annoying at this point.