Following the tragic death of her parents, Rachel King remained with her grandparents and younger sister in Pennsylvania while her two older sisters forged new lives for themselves in Maine and Missouri. Although she longs to settle down and marry, she doesn’t feel comfortable attending singings and courting local Amish men when she can’t shake the memories of the fire that took her parents’ lives. In desperate need of a change of location, Rachel sets out to visit a Mennonite relative in Kentucky. Although she tells her family she doesn’t plan to stay long, secretly she hopes she can start over in Kentucky and begin her life anew. Her cousin, Sarah, is grateful for the help around her chicken farm, but Rachel has never been a big fan of chickens. She soon secures a part-time job giving tours at a local English horse farm. Since she was a young girl, she’s adored horses, but she may have bitten off more than she can chew when it comes to the owner’s son.
Jake Brady has high ambitions for his family’s horse farm, but he knows his plans will cost them a lot of money. Although his family trusts his good judgement and business skills, he still doesn’t feel entirely satisfied with the risks he’s making in order to create the most profitable race horse. With his sister returning to university and his mother being forced to put in more hours at her pharmacy, Jake doesn’t see how they can keep the regular tours on the farm going. He doesn’t expect his sister to hire a visiting Amish girl, nor does he anticipate falling head over heels for her. But as much as they come to care for each other, Jake doesn’t know if their relationship will work out. Although he’s attended church his whole life, Rachel’s understanding of God and her faith is a mystery to him. And it may well be the stumbling block that keeps them apart...
I started this book with high hopes, as I’ve yet to read anything written by Mary Ellis that I haven’t adored. While A Little Bit of Charm didn’t steal my heart quite as much as the previous two books in the New Beginnings series, it was just as sweet and nearly as unconventional as its predecessors.
My main worry when approaching this book was simply that the sections about horse farming would bore me. Unlike most women, I never had that “horse phase” that preteen girls go through, even though there was a riding stable on the edge of my village. I was pleased that the details about Rachel’s job were woven realistically into the story and easy to understand, even for those of us who aren’t horse fans. It was actually pretty interesting to learn about the work that goes into running a farm that not only stables horses, but trains them for races and runs tours and events. It’s definitely an all-family affair, and I enjoyed getting to know Jake’s family, especially his sisters. They may not be Amish, but this family was pretty close-knit.
One of the main appeals of the New Beginnings series is that each book takes place in a different state, and not one typically associated with the Amish. After reading so many books set in Pennsylvania and Ohio, it’s been a pleasant change to visit Maine, Missouri and now Kentucky. Another unique aspect of this novel was the community in which Rachel resided, which is Old Order Mennonite. Although we aren’t given a lecture on how different the Amish and Mennonites are, it was interesting to see the details between their lifestyles. For example, Rachel’s cousin, Sarah, has electricity in her home, but she still prefers to dry her clothing outside, and they don’t drive a car. I will admit that I struggled to warm up to Sarah. I know that she only wanted to protect Rachel from harm, but she was very overbearing and judgemental at times, especially considering that Rachel was an adult who she could have trusted to be make responsible decisions. The fact that the Amish and Mennonites don’t seem to respect a grown woman as being an adult until she marries is something I don’t think will ever sit well with me.
A Little Bit of Charm isn’t just a romance novel. I think I’d also describe it as a “coming of age” story, as a large part of Rachel’s struggle is in discovering where she belongs in the world, now that her parents are gone and her family is scattered across the country. I think this is a storyline that will speak to a lot of young people, especially Rachel’s struggle to decide if she needs to follow the ways of her family (Amish or Mennonite) or if she can retain her faith and values without staying Plain.
Although Rachel’s struggles were touching, they weren’t quite as compelling or heart-wrenching as those in the previous novels in the series. I praised Living in Harmony for telling the story of what happens after the Happily Ever After, and Love Comes to Paradise for dealing with the topic of God’s wrath and mercy, as well as it’s realistic depiction of an Amish woman’s struggle to remain pure. Rachel’s journey of self-discovery is probably one a lot of readers can relate to, but it’s definitely one that’s been done before.
There’s no doubt that the romance between Jake and Rachel is sweet, but I do wish it had developed a little slower. Although Rachel is in her rumspringe at the start of the book, I still didn’t completely buy that she’d spend time alone with Jake and consider dating him so soon after they met. As the novel progressed, I did warm up to their romance. It might not be the most remarkable one I’ve encountered, but it was encouraging to see the way that Rachel and Jake helped each other with their struggles. There’s also a sub-plot about Jake’s spiritual struggles. It was a nice change to read about someone who had grown up in a Christian family but never developed their own personal faith. So many Christian novels deal with people who tragically lose their faith, or never believed in God but suddenly see the light. Jake’s story is probably typical of a lot of young men and women who just haven’t made that step in forming their own personal relationship with Jesus, even if they believe in Him.
This book has a lot in it, and I realise that I’ve yet to touch on the sub-plot about the Plain community not believing in vaccinating their children against Polio, or Jake’s desire to create a champion race horse, or even the other Plain boys who attempt to court Rachel. All of these sub-plots were interesting, but perhaps this book tried to cover a little too much ground. As fascinating as it was to learn about Sarah’s community’s objections to vaccinations, sometimes the switch from a romantic scene to one about vaccinations and then on to one about horse-racing was a little confusing.
Although A Little Bit of Charm wasn’t quite as unconventional as the previous books in the series, the ending certainly was. There were genuinely moments where I wasn’t sure if Rachel and Jake could make their relationship work—even though, yes, it’s a romance novel and it must have a happy ending—and it was this uncertainty that kept me turning the pages. Even if I didn’t absolutely love this book, it was certainly compelling and contained many unique aspects. I’m hoping this won’t be the last book in the New Beginnings series. Perhaps the youngest sister, Beth, is due for a story of her own?
Review title provided by Harvest House.