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Crystal Lake #2

A Soldier's Promise

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Reeling from a broken engagement that resulted in a small town scandal, ER nurse Julie Crain just wants to be left alone over the Fourth of July Holiday weekend. But when single dad, Derek Ryerson and his young daughter need a place to stay to recuperate from a car accident, Julie can't ignore their plight. She knows she needs to protect her heart, but little Lexi needs love and support. But soon she realizes the former soldier has a secret that could tear them apart forever.

156 pages, ebook

First published May 25, 2013

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Laura Scott

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2,657 reviews1,227 followers
May 21, 2017
Nurse Julie takes in a man and his daughter who have no place to go, not knowing he's running from something. What starts as Derek and Lexie staying in the apartment she owns next to her (as he waits for the insurance to replace the car someone plowed into) turns into him helping with her remodel and staying a while.
But with his secret and her being burned by a guy recently, both are leery of each other. But little Lexie has grabbed ahold of her heart in a big way.

Timeframe: Current day, around the 4th of July.

Location: A lake village in Wisconsin

Romance...yes, sort of. Lots of caution because pain will come when he leaves. A surprise kiss, then later deepening feelings, but always unsure of each other.

Sexual content, none other than the mention of Derek not being married to Lexie's mother.

Language, none.

Fascinating story? Not exceptionally. Super short read.
Target audience? I'd say it's a teen or young adult book. A little too young for my taste.
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218 reviews45 followers
July 5, 2021
i just want to make it clear that i did not read this out of my own free will
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Author 6 books89 followers
May 11, 2025
Derek Ryerson, an ex-soldier comes into the ER with his young daughter after being hit by a drunk driver. Julie Crain, ER nurse offers the other half of her duplex to Derek and Lexi when they are stuck in Crystal Lake on a holiday weekend even though she is getting over a bad relationship with another man. A Soldier's Promise is a Christian romance where Julie sticks to her faith and Derek finds his again and they both develop a loving relationship.
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Author 27 books59 followers
March 19, 2018
Just a delightful read. Read it quickly too.

I can recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys sweet love stories.
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983 reviews14 followers
April 25, 2023
Quick read. Christian romance with HEA ending.
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314 reviews6 followers
August 5, 2016
A Soldier’s Promise
By: Laura Scott

I loved this romance! Julie and Derek must learn to let go of their past and trust God to help them make the right decisions. Can they open their hearts and trust each other?

Julie Crain is a nurse at Hope County Hospital in Crystal Lake. She was engaged and then found out he was having an affair. She wants the truth and can’t handle someone lying to her. When she finds out Derek hasn’t told her the whole truth, will she give him the benefit of the doubt, or will she close her heart to love?

Derek Ryerson and his daughter Lexi have been in an accident and are brought to the hospital. His past has drawn him away from God. He is a soldier, found out his wife had been diagnosed with cancer, but he gets home a month after she dies. His in-laws have determined he isn’t capable of taking care of his daughter so they are going to take custody. He is on the run with his daughter when he gets in the accident.

Julie takes Derek and Lexi in. Can he trust Julie with the truth or will she turn him in, causing him to lose his daughter to his in-laws? Julie feels she must protect her heart, but she is drawn to Lexi and Derek.

Derek feels like God has turned his back on him. Can Julie help him see that Derek gave up on Him? Derek’s in-laws put out a warrant for his arrest. With Julie’s help, can he go back and face them and fight for his daughter?

Pick up this great book today!
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Author 5 books259 followers
August 23, 2017
This was a good, not too long, read. It was a free ebook, the title caught my interest, so I got it...and started it...and soon found myself dragged into the story!! :) Julie is a single nurse working in the ER, where she meets mysterious, veteran and single dad Derek and his young, quiet daughter, Lexi. Julie is dealing with some grief and other things, and offers Derek and his daughter a place to stay. Derek is hiding something which eventually comes to light and thickens the storyline. ;)

Although it's not a favorite, this was a good book and I enjoyed it. However, there were a few things I disagreed with – that being the cause of the lower rating.

1) Derek was never married to Lexi's mother. This is shown in a bad way and he regrets his mistakes now.
2) The kissing. Really?? You've known each other like two days!!! >_< So, yeah. That was a bit much. There was three or so such scenes. *gag*

I've read books that were listed as Christian fiction and turned out to mention God once or twice, and then only in a vague/distant way. The faith, prayer parts of the book were definitely there, and they were really good and 'real'. But they could have been deeper. This, too, affected the rating I gave this book.

(By the way, the cover on Goodreads is much pretty than the one on the ebook. xD)
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42 reviews1 follower
March 31, 2022
The book is formulaic Christian fiction which is nice every once in a while. However, I had some issues with several parts of the book. Unlike other Christian authors she did not really show Derek’s moment where he turned to God. I also didn’t like how Julie promised Lexi that her mom was an Angel in Heaven. First, people don’t turn into angels. We are distinct beings created for different purposes. Two, no one can promise if someone else is going to go to Heaven. That is between them and God. The issue with Derek and Lexi’s grandparents was not very accurate. Missouri is very much a parent’s rights state so I was confused as to why he was worried about losing her. He mentioned being her legal guardian. His rights had never been terminated and it sounded like there were no substantiated reports of abuse/neglect. I don’t know a lot about the code of ethics for a nurse but I wouldn’t think letting a patient stay with her would be allowed.
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Author 4 books25 followers
July 21, 2023
(3.5 / 5)

Derek wants nothing more than to be a father to his recently motherless daughter Lexi, but there are some seemingly insurmountable obstacles to that dream. As he tries to outrun some of those obstacles, he's in a car accident that forces him to stop his flight in Crystal Lake. There, he and his daughter are helped by ER nurse Julie, who has her own burdens to shake off. Will these three find what they're looking for in each other?

This story is about a novella-length, about twice the length of the previous one. And it did have more substance than the previous book, even allowing for a fairly serious storyline to be tied up. Unfortunately, even with the shorter format, there's a good deal of repetitiveness in the narration, especially involving the main characters' inner turmoil about their individual situations (as well as their joint situation). I appreciated Derek's characterization, but felt Julie left a lot to be desired, regarding having much of a personality.

Most likely because the story is so short, it has the unfortunate common situation where two characters who have only just met develop feelings for each other very quickly. This particular relationship moved to kissing more quickly than I prefer, especially for a Christian read. And so much of the romance we see them develop revolves around them admiring each others' looks.

I appreciated that Julie wanted to share her faith with Derek, and by extension, with Lexi. I don't recall it being wrapped up in the story, but it certainly wouldn't have to be, realistically speaking. I think there was a good foundation there for the future, though (their fictitious future that won't likely be in any future books, of course). There was one theology point I didn't agree with, but I won't mention it here.

As the second book in a series of similar stories, and both being decent, but not stand-out reads, I don't plan to move on in this series. However, if you are interested in a short, sweet, clean romance, this book can easily be read as a standalone in the series. I thought we might get a bit more of a glimpse of the characters (as a pair) from the first book than we did, since they all work in the same hospital. Please be sure to check out other reviews, as there are plenty who liked it more than I did.
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132 reviews
May 23, 2019
There are a zillion books in this genre available these days, and this one is actually quite readable. You can float through it in little more than an hour, and the two main characters are appealing, as is the child.
The dilemma is always the same though: there’s just SO VERY LITTLE going on! The story is told from his-and-her perspectives, and that’s kind of a problem. All the way through, we’re aware of her inner dialogue, which isn’t much more than: He’s so handsome! That chin! Is he going to kiss me? Oh! He DID kiss me! Should I have let him kiss me? No, that was a mistake! Um, now what?
On the other side, he’s thinking exactly the same thing. “What a cute girl! Those dimples! I should kiss her! Oh, wait, I just did. Oops. Should I have kissed her? Why is she frowning at me? I’ve blown it!” There’s page after page that isn’t much more than this, and meanwhile the story has stalled.
I commented to my wife (and yes, my being a male reader and reviewer is something to take into account): “It’s all decently interesting, but the emotions are ramped up to 10 and 11 at all times. Every upturned eyebrow or silent moment is a crisis of the most hand-writing sort.”
One element that’s a definite plus is that the Christian element is nicely tuned: gracious, believable, not stuffy. More writers these days are doing that part quite well, and I salute this franchise for handling that aspect admirably. Although one other reviewer correctly pointed out that people do NOT die and immediately float up to heaven and turn into angels!
I’m confident that this writer, Laura Scott, could come up with a much more plausible and engaging plot, where there’s a heightened level of mystery about how it will all turn out.
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1,330 reviews17 followers
July 8, 2018
Derek Ryerson, on the flight with his young daughter Lexie from a custody battle with the child's grandparents, finds refuge with ER Nurse Julie, who offers shelter to them after they had been involved in an accident. Although sparks fly between the two adults, Julie is still too cautious after a relationship that broke her heart, and Derek does not trust anyone with his secret.
All in all, a heartwarming story, with very likeable characters, good storytelling and a good plot, and in the character of Julie, the spirit of Christianity at its best.
However, there were a few inconsistencies, or rather, not so plausible events in the story (for example, without spoiling the story I hope, why the custody battle in the first place if Derek is in fact the legal guardian?) At the end, the changes in mannerisms, opinions and actions of some of the characters happened a bit quickly considering the rest of the story and the reasons given for Derek's and Julie's behaviours. We'll just put it down to divine intervention, shall we? ;=)
However, the little glitches did not at all interfer with the enjoyment of reading this story, and I would like to get my hands on the next sequence in this series.
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100 reviews1 follower
April 22, 2020
What I liked:
- Realistic elements (seeing Lexi reminds others of the loss of their 6-year-old niece/daughter).
- The ending
- Quick read

What I did not like:
- Accidental kiss. I'd prefer to read about characters who show more restraint.
- Julie got too involved with a patient... again.
- Julie pretty much ran off, giving up entirely the possibility of a relationship with Derek (and Lexi) without even talking to him. Maybe they couldn't make it work, but she should have promised to call or something so they could at least end things neatly. They eventually talked, by Derek's prompting, but I wanted to see more growth and maturity in Julie.
- Too much repetition of the custody issues. Whenever more information was shared with the readers, everything we already knew was rehashed, again and again... and yet again.
2,115 reviews8 followers
June 11, 2020
Julie Crain is the ER nurse on duty when Derek Ryerson and his his daughter Lexi are brought into the ER on July 4th weekend. The ex-soldier is injured quite badly in a car accident, but is more concerned about Lexi, who's fine. When he's stranded in town, she offers to let him stay in a duplex she's renovating. Derek is running from his daughter's grandparents who want custody of the little girl, whose mother recently passed away. With no job, and few funds, Derek takes off with her rather than fight the legal battle. Lexi starts to open up to Julie and her badly damaged heart after her fiance left her, begins to heal. She helps him make amends with Lexi's grandparents, and eventually they get a HEA. Christian but not terribly preachy.
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Author 49 books342 followers
May 9, 2024
This story had a solid premise and intriguing initial incident/meeting (I'm a sucker for a wounded man!). However, I immediately ran into disbelief that she would offer up her (unlocked) townhome to a complete stranger from out of town.As the story progressed, I felt it lacked emotion and depth (lots of fodder for that given his Army service and ) and was a bit repetitive and things were too easily resolved (e.g., with the grandparents). I would have liked to see him struggle with faith a bit more based on his background and stated feelings about being unworthy. Also, it seemed to hint at a developmental disability for Lexi (perhaps Asbergers?) but it was very vague. Also, the entire relationship developed over only 5(?) days, which is a bit fast.
910 reviews5 followers
April 22, 2022
Protecting his daughter

Julie has grown up in a small town that’s known for its beautiful lake. Working in the local hospital ER, she’s met people from out of town. One night, a call comes in that a father and his daughter are enroute to the hospital after being hit by a drunk driver. Her heart hurts at just hearing that a child might be in danger; it’s only been a few months since her little niece’s death from leukemia.
A sweet story of God using difficult circumstances to bring about good. A wonderful read.
181 reviews
April 12, 2023
Have Faith in God

A fantastic ER nurse was on duty when a father and daughter was brought in after suffering injuries after their car was hit by a drunk driver. Being the compassionate nurse that she is, Julie takes Derek and his daughter, Lexi, to stay in the empty side of her duplex. While there Julie takes care of Derek and his injuries. Julie not falls in love with Lexi, but also her father. Will his secret turn her away from him, or will God give her strength to help him deal with what he's facing?

MG
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392 reviews2 followers
June 3, 2020
A great read

This story was such a good read, I could hardly put it down. The story of Julie and Derek was so heartwarming. I was sad for Derek that he had to run from his child’s grandparents and he had lost his faith in God. Thanks to Julie for being the vessel and allowing God to use her in this time. Another happy ending when love wasn’t on the couple’s agenda.
Thanks for another great story Laura!
784 reviews9 followers
May 14, 2021
A well written story that begins with an accident and ends with God's loving grace showing them the way. I enjoyed the main characters and the author did a good job of bringing them alive on the pages. Lexi was quite the child as she struggled to keep up with the disarray that was surrounding her little six year old life. Well done story by Laura Scott, that offers a second chance to these 3 sweet characters.

VICKI FROM WYOMING
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7 reviews
December 23, 2021
I absolutely love this author and her books. I just love how she takes the other secondary characters from a series and gives them their on series plus mentions some of the main characters from the series these ones first appeared in. I will stay up well into the night just to finish one of Laura Scott’s books because that is how hard it is to put her books down. This book is just one of the many that I couldn’t put down until I finished. I Loved this book and this series .
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Author 3 books30 followers
April 11, 2023
A dedicated father, a sweet, sensitive, young girl, and an ER nurse committed to their care. A romance with a suspenseful twist, the plot develops naturally along with the attraction between Julie Craine and Derek Ryerson. The author slowly reveals why Derek is on the run with his daughter, Lexi. Julie steps in to help them when their lives are at a low point. There's a strong faith element, and a child's love is a catalyst for family reconciliation.
228 reviews
September 17, 2023
A great read!

This is how a book with a prequel and sequel should be written! Great story line, realistic characters and an ending that doesn't leave you hanging! This was a delightful story of a man's determination to provide the kind of life for his daughter where she could best thrive. Along comes Nurse Julie to help him sort out just what that life should look like and bring him back to the faith he had once had. A great read!
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3,201 reviews99 followers
February 7, 2017
Beautiful

A accident brings them together. But a little girls helps bring them closer. A wonderful continuation of the series. Derek & his little girl are hurt in accident and Julie gets assigned to work on dad in the ER. His friends girl is scared. But Julie helps calm the little girl but ends up helping them as much as they help her.
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143 reviews
February 15, 2018
This book was a lot better than the first in the series. It had more depth and the characters were more believable and relatable. Also the story wasn't rushed like the first. I think it was the perfect length to the short story. I am really enjoying the Christian aspect of the books and I smile when God is mentioned. Its a nice change.
140 reviews2 followers
March 24, 2018
Short and sweet.

Glad there are more books from Crystal Lake. Sweet and short but Laura that is the only reason for the four stars. Love a book of faith and you never laid it on too thick, and I liked that you addressed that our soldiers aren't prepared for "normal" society after serving their time in terrible situations. Thank you.
918 reviews3 followers
April 27, 2018
Unusual Take on Theme

I thought I knew what was going to happen in this well-written book, but it surprised me. Besides its unusual twist, this book had likeable, multidimensional characters, interesting action, and a sense of place. Another plus was that secrets didn't fester too long, a tactic lesser authors use to increase the word count. Well worth reading.
292 reviews3 followers
February 7, 2019
Enjoyable

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73 reviews1 follower
February 27, 2019
Sweet romance

It's hard to believe a romance can happen in just a few days but this author makes it work. It was a delight to read. It was nice to just get lost in this fast pace book. I was a little surprised how fast Derek's ribs healed. As he didn't seem to hurt towards the end of the book, when he held his daughter. Just saying.
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136 reviews3 followers
May 9, 2020
Gone But Not Forgetton

A nice novel of a soldiers great love for his country, his acceptance of a life full of fortitude, finding himself is situation of living a child he gathered and loved, with death, a trial of faith in God and forgiveness. A good clean read will hold your interest.
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765 reviews11 followers
May 15, 2020
Quick read

3.5 Cute, Christian love story. I wish the editing had been a little bit better for this book. I also wish Derek had said a little more each time at the beginning of the book instead of just saying he had to get away. It took quite awhile before we learned more of Derek’s story.
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