The McCaffertys: Randi

The McCaffertys #4

by Lisa Jackson

First published in 2004, a fan-favorite from #1 New York Times bestselling author Lisa Jackson.Was hiding the identity of her child's father worthrisking her life? Randi McCafferty seemed to believeso, and investigator Kurt Striker was hell-bent onchanging her mind. Hired by her well-meaning butoverbearing brothers to keep Randi and her son safe,Kurt knew the only way to eliminate the danger wasto reveal Randi's darkest secret…any way he could.But in uncovering her guarded past, Kurt was forcedto confront his own well-hidden he wantedthe very woman he'd been entrusted to protect. YetKurt feared having Randi in his bed would leavethem both vulnerable to a force neither had everimagined….

Genres: Romance, Contemporary, Fiction, Mystery, Audiobook, Contemporary Romance, Romantic Suspense

224 pages, Kindle Edition

First published January 1, 2004

About the author

Lisa Jackson is the number-one New York Times bestselling author of over ninety-five novels, including the Rick Bentz and Reuben Montoya Series, the Pescoli and Alvarez Series, the Savannah series, and numerous stand alone novels. She also is the co-author of One Last Breath, Last Girl Standing, and the Colony Series, written with her sister and bestselling author Nancy Bush, as well as the collaborative novels Sinister and Ominous, written with Nancy Bush and Rosalind Noonan. There are over thirty million copies of her novels in print and her writing has been translated into twenty languages.

Before she became a nationally bestselling author, she was a mother struggling to keep food on the table by writing novels, hoping against hope that someone would pay her for them. Today, neck deep in murder, her books appear on The New York Times, USA Today, and Publishers Weekly national bestseller lists.

With dozens of bestsellers to her name, Lisa Jackson is a master of taking readers to the edge of sanity—and back—in novels that buzz with dangerous secrets and deadly passions. She continues to be fascinated by the minds and motives of both her killers and their pursuers—the personal, the professional, and the downright twisted. As she builds the puzzle of relationships, actions, clues, lies, and personal histories that haunt her protagonists, she must also confront the fear and terror faced by her victims and the harsh and enduring truth that, in the real world, terror and madness touch far too many lives and families.

Visit http://www.LisaJackson.com where you can find a Media Kit with photos and more information.

Reviews

[Lisa · Rating 1 out of 5]

I read this book in an anthology with Slade's story and that was a mistake for a couple of reasons. 1) The books are extremely repetitive with regards to Randi and her situation. It's said dozens of times throughout Slade's book that someone is trying to kill Randi and that she's refusing to name the man who fathered her child, etc. It was very frustrating to read the statement "someone is trying to kill you" over and over and over. So then when I got to Randi's book, and the author started in again with all the repetitive explanations it had me ripping my hair out. 2) Randi was such a reckless, self-centered, idiotic brat all through Slade's book that I went into this one pretty much hating her guts. And nothing about this book changed my mind on that score.


Randi is a complete brat with no regard for other people. As we were ENDLESSLY told throughout both books, someone is trying to kill her. She is very, very aware of this fact since everyone keeps bringing it up. She should also be aware that this puts her baby, her brothers, their wives and their children at risk should the stalker try again. And, in point of fact, both Thorne and Slade are nearly killed by the stalker. And yet she refuses to answer the questions that might help them figure out who is behind it all. And she does this FOR ABSOLUTELY NO REASON.

All throughout Slade's book they demand Randi reveal who fathered her baby because that's one possible avenue they can pursue to determine who is after her. And Randi repeatedly refuses to give his name. She pretends to have amnesia whenever anyone asks but halfway through Slade's book she reveals to the reader that she knows perfectly well who the man is but that she'll take that knowledge to her grave. That makes it sound like she's got some legitimate reason for keeping it a secret. That by giving his name it'll actually put everyone in even greater danger. I was trying to imagine what scenario the author would come up with to justify this behavior. Maybe the father was actually some mafia kingpin whose enemies would chase them endlessly if they knew he'd fathered a child. Maybe he was the crowned prince of some foreign country. I mean, surely there has to be some really serious justification for her to endanger herself, her baby and her family by not giving the man's name, right? Nope! The real reason? He's a philandering jerk and she's embarrassed that she fell for his crap. That's IT. That's the whole reason she kept his name a secret for months and months, even after her brothers were nearly burned alive by the stalker. That makes her the most selfish, self-centered, idiotic brat I've ever read about. And the father's identity was key in determining who the stalker was so she really was solely responsible for prolonging the danger.

And she was pretty bratty everywhere else in the book too. I really hate it when authors confuse "strong" with "stubborn and b*tchy". Randi's brothers hire Kurt Stryker to act as her bodyguard. This is something she clearly needs since, as they keep endlessly reminding us, someone is trying to kill her and they don't have a clue who it is because bratty Randi won't talk. But Randi acts all put out about having Stryker around. She complains about needing her privacy and that her half-brothers can't run her life, etc. Seriously? Your privacy is more important than your life? Nearly everyone in this series does more to help catch this stalker than Randi does herself. Her brothers hire a private investigator and then shell out $25,000 for a bodyguard, her former-cop sister-in-law is calling in favors with the local P.D. and chasing down leads on the car that ran Randi off the road. And Stryker has his entire team working on tracking down the men Randi has been involved with, in case one of them is the father/stalker. Meanwhile, Randi stonewalls and runs away from everyone trying to help and protect her....so that she can get back to her job as an advice columnist. Wow. Yeah, this girl's really got her priorities in order....

I have a soft spot in my heart for romance novels that feature a bodyguard and his charge succumbing to passion while they fight for their lives, but ONLY when the woman isn't a TSTL brat who constantly complains about having her life protected. I can't stand heroines who act like it's really just too much of an inconvenience to have this incredibly handsome man hanging around and keeping them safe from the maniac trying to kill them. And as you've probably already guessed, Randi is just such a TSTL bratty woman. Despite all the things that have happened and the endless talking about how she's in danger, she repeatedly runs away from Stryker, forcing him to chase after her to keep her alive. And she runs away for no reason. She does it just to be a stubborn brat protesting the fact that she's being protected. She repeatedly says "I can take care of myself" when it's been amply demonstrated that she can't. And what's more, she's not even TRYING to protect herself. She's keeping information from the cops that could help solve the case and she's hanging out in her apartment and place of business just like always. She's not altering her routine, carrying pepper spray, changing her locks, staying some place she's unknown, taking self-defense class, or anything else that could possibly help. She literally does nothing to try to resolve the situation and yet gets mad at everyone who does try. Quite frankly, Randi is a idiot and it would have served her right if the stalker had succeeded in killing her.

Which is why it's hard to understand just what Stryker sees in her. Aside from the fact that she's beautiful, there's absolutely nothing appealing about her. He, on the other hand, seems like a perfectly great, normal guy. Why on earth would he want to shackle himself to this harpy? It's pretty standard in the bodyguard romances for the couple to spend some time alone in a secluded safe-house so that their passion can take place. And while that did happen in this book, it was actually the opposite of romantic for many reasons. First of all, their first sexual encounter happens off camera. Somewhere between Slade's book and Randi's, apparently Stryker and Randi just went ahead and had sex one night when the mood struck them. We find out at the start of this book that they've already done the deed and they both claim to regret it. That starts the whole situation off on the wrong foot because we miss out on the buildup of sexual tension and seeing them finally succumbing. It's already happened so the first time they have sex on-screen, it's not that big of a deal. Second of all, when they DO have on-screen sex, it's pity sex. Randi is in one of her typical bratty moods and she demands that Stryker tell her "what makes him tick" because she'd finally revealed her "big secret" (the baby's father's name) and feels that means Stryker owes her something. (Right, because clearly she deserves some kind of payment for finally being forced to participate in her own protection. Grr, she's such a terrible heroine) She says a lot of callous things about how whatever deep dark secret he's keeping can't possibly be any more embarrassing than her falling for the baby daddy's lies so he needs to just spill his guts already.

After much bugging, Stryker finally reveals that he had a daughter once but she drown in a boating accident. Five years later, he's still really torn up about the event, particularly because he blames himself for failing to prevent it, and having to relive it for Randi just reopens the wound. Randi, feeling guilty for having pushed him and for believing that her petty issues were the worst thing that could happen to anyone, decides that the thing to do is to force Stryker into bed. She starts kissing him and he tells her to leave him alone. That he doesn't want her pity. She keeps making sexual advances and he keeps protesting that he doesn't want the death of his child to be the catalyst for sex, but Randi won't stop. This isn't about him, it's about what she wants and right now she wants him. Eventually Randi wears him down and they do the deed. Ick. Could it be any less romantic? And third, after this they apparently continue to have sex all night, every night that they're in the safe-house......the safe-house that the author was very careful to establish has no running water, electricity or indoor plumbing. Gross. How nasty and smelly were these two getting after a few days in these conditions with nights spent exchanging fluids.

So basically the romance didn't work for me on any level, and I was so sick of Randi's crap and hearing about the stalker that by the end of the book I was seriously hoping Randi would be killed. The resolution of the stalker felt very rushed. After all the time spent repeatedly discussing it over multiple books, the actual villain got almost no screen time and the revelation of who it was was pretty weak. I won't say who the stalker turned out to be but I will say that it was very obvious to me that it would turn out to be a woman. Whenever an author goes to great pains to avoid using any pronouns that would denote gender 99 times out of 100 the villain is a woman. And sure enough, this book was not the 1/100 to buck that trend. Plus I couldn't believe that neither Stryker nor any of the other allegedly super-skilled detectives in this book thought to investigate this person sooner. It was a pretty obvious avenue of investigation. And when Stryker did finally figure it out, it was very contrived. It wasn't like some new piece of evidence came up that gave him the clue he needed. It just sort of randomly popped into his head when the plot required it.

The final climax was weak because just when I thought we were getting into the meat of the encounter, the scene ended and next thing we know, Randi is waking up in the hospital and everything is fine. Neither Stryker nor Randi actually defeat the villain or even interact with her. After 4 books worth of build up the police show up and save the day - off screen. What a let down. It definitely would have been better to cut out some of the earlier repetitive brattiness in favor of giving us a longer, more exciting showdown between Randi and her stalker. Not to mention that the climax was in and of itself a repeat. The stalker tried to run them off the road again. Been there, done that, and have been talking about it for hundreds of pages. How about a different method of attack this time?

In summary we've got a bratty, TSTL heroine, a repetitive narrative, a faceless villain and a complete let-down of a final climax. Don't waste your time on this one.

[L Cherry · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was the more exciting of the 4 part series. The build up to who was after Randi started in book 1 so there was excitement building in each story, which was the best part of the entire series for me. The romance was nice in each part and the characters were nice enough to read through, but it was not as stimulating as I prefer.

[Marie Christensen · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great book,I enjoyed all 4 McCafferty stories

[Dasha · Rating 1 out of 5]

No me ha gustado nada este libro. Su protagonista me ha sacado de los nervios. Una cosa es ser independiente y otra es ser estúpida y creer que lo sabes todo. Por otro lado, este libro se parece demasiado al anterior en ciertas circunstancias del protagonista masculino. Me he imaginado quién estaba intentando matarla en los primeros capítulos. Si la parte de suspense hubiese sido mejor, habría puntuado mejor esta lectura.
Leeré los primeros libros a ver qué tal.

[BECKY S. HEATH · Rating 5 out of 5]

Good Book

This was a quick read but a very enjoyable. I have enjoyed every Lisa Jackson book that I have read.

[Mary Baker · Rating 3 out of 5]

This is the fourth in a series by Lisa Jackson. I didn't enjoy it as much as I did the other books in the series because it seemed as if the development of the plot was too hurried and the characters weren't well developed. After wondering through three previous books who was threatening the McCafferty's, the climax wasn't very satisfying.

[Linda Svoboda · Rating 5 out of 5]

great series

This book answered all the questions that were raised in the other books. I recommend the whole series highly. Doesn’t really matter what order you read, but I would leave this one for the last.

[Bernie · Rating 5 out of 5]

Randi is the fourth book in The McCaffertys series written by author Lisa Jackson.

[Lisa · Rating 2 out of 5]

A nice little romance: two stubborn adults, a baby, a crazy lady, and overbearing step-brothers make up this story.

[Bev · Rating 5 out of 5]

Loved the series

[Linn Rivera · Rating 5 out of 5]

Me encantó la saga

[Pam A · Rating 3 out of 5]

Alot of intimate romance, some suspense, sort read. Rich girl finds out who is trying to kill her and why. And falls in love with her bodyguard. A rather silly plot, but, whatever.

[Emily · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great ending to a amazing series.

[Mrs. Garen L. Herd · Rating 5 out of 5]

Good read

Sex, more mystery than the others, and a little humor. Her and her son's lives are in danger and he can keep them safe....or can he. Throw a little romance into the mix and you have a really good combination. Highly recommend.

[Kate Taylor · Rating 2 out of 5]

disappointing. After all that lead up from three previous books, i expected the person who wanted to kill Randi to be slightly less obvious... and the fact that Kurt didn't guess was ridiculous and then the epiphany when he suddenly did, her brothers did also was just disappointing. The romance was the only decent thing about the book... the end anti-climatic in the result from the would be killer to how Kurt and Randi got together.

However disappointing, the series was a fun read overall. I am interested to read Lisa Jackson's more recent books in hopes that her development as a writer has just gotten better over the years.

[Charlotte Massey · Rating 4 out of 5]

It jumped around a little bit,but it delivered a happy ending and I really like her writing, I like it that the culprit was not so readily apparent, I would recommend her books for the joy of reading for enjoyment.

Need to decrease the amount of words required we're not writer's we only read,and that's enough said.okay okay okay.stop.stop.stop it.

[Sherry · Rating 4 out of 5]

Lisa Jackson ends her McCafferty series with Best-Kept Lies, also issued under the title Randi, it has been a while since I've read such a good series under Harlequin moniker. Well worth the time and effort to track this series down to purchase or look for in book sales, pbk swap or bookmooch.

[Emily Higgins · Rating 4 out of 5]

Someone is stalking the McCafferty's little sister, Randi. Her brothers have hired Kurt Stryker to be her bodyguard to keep her from further harm. Kurt's team of investigators is trying to find the person responsible. Meanwhile Randi and Kurt find themselves falling in love. Good story.

[Shirley Alvarez · Rating 5 out of 5]

THE McCAFFERTY'S

A great series! I usually don't read continue stories but this one was good especially since I read back to back. Under have all Lisa Jackson and really enjoyed this series.

[Elisa Vangelisti · Rating 3 out of 5]

il finale è un po' brusco, ma la storia è carina. si può leggere.

[Linda Donald · Rating 3 out of 5]

It was ok, but definitely a rushed story.

[Geri · Rating 3 out of 5]

It was the end of a good series, but the resolution of the mystery was very abrupt.

[Jennifer Barrett · Rating 4 out of 5]

Least favorite of the 4 books

[Ann Torrey]

Very good book kept you guessing and wondering to the end who could be the criminal.

[Debi · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was a fast read. Light and enjoyable. Not the best or the worst I've read.

[Barbara Gard]

harlequin!

[Cynthia · Rating 3 out of 5]

I enjoyed this final book of the series, but I was not a lover of Randi's character so didn't enjoy it as much as the others.

[Nancy · Rating 3 out of 5]

Mystery solved. Not a favorite.

[Lori Feldpausch · Rating 4 out of 5]

Very good read and a good finish to the series.

[Vicky Bartz · Rating 4 out of 5]

Awesome

This was a great series,some love,romance,mystery and a lot of tense moments.love was found in all the right places.very good read.