DNF @ pg 99. And it took a LOT to push myself that far.
I actually had to take a break from the series and come back to it, because the last one made me so angry. ((I highly recommend 'Love, Inspired' author Carrie Lighte, by the way...)) I hadn't heard of Lissa Manley, so I was *hoping* that when I returned, it would be to something better... silly me. Hoping is always a stupid thing to do...
Allison grew up in Bygones, left when ♥Sam♥ - the guy she crushed on in High School - left for college, and hates her parents for putting the farm before the family. She pretty much raised her sisters (when she wasn't in school... or at her best friend Lori's... or at sport events... or at church... which basically equates to "she didn't raise her sisters, and the author is full of it".)
Anyhow, now she's back, and took a grant in order to open a bookstore in a failing town. Because the first thing *everyone* does is goes out and spends $17 a visit on paperbacks in a downturned economy. She doesn't have a ton of revenue because things are slow (duh)... but she works SO HARD to make a go of this... like, she's even, like, there until MIDNIGHT most nights, according to the book. Except... why? If things are slow...?
And then *HE* walks in. ♥SAM♥. Mr. Basketball Center from high school that she luvluvluvluvved as a girl. He's divorced and has two three-year old twins that he's pitted against each other. "My fry is the longest! I have more sand, you can't have as much! I want to be first! I'm faster! I want to stay. I want more. I want to race! I want! I want-I want-I want - Me! Me! Me!" Which of course the author thinks is absolutely adorable, and they're both moon-eyed at each other over the heads of the little screaming, fighting brats. Because awesome... and ♥Sam♥.
But Alison's got a business to focus on. But she luvluvluvluvvs the kids...! But she's got to make her store successful, and doesn't have room in her life for a relationship. But she sooooooo wishes those twin squallers were hers...! But she can't lose focus. But dreamy high school crush...!!! But she's got goals... But ♥Sam!♥... and on. And on. AND on it goes.
And the storytelling is abysmal. On pg 21 she tells Nicky everyone who behaves gets to flip a page during Story Time. Except on pg 22, only Nicky and another little girl get to flip pages. ((!!!)) On top of that, when Nicky and Rosie come in the store, Alison *G.U.S.H.E.S* over them, and oh, hey, there are other kids on the carpet, so let's go read a story. ((She plays seriously UGLY favorites, throughout the whole book. No wonder she has few customers.))
Then Miss Caroline comes in and says, "Wow, Sam, you must be SO busy what with twins!" to which he replies "Well, and I teach all day, do after-school tutoring, and coach basketball, so actually I don't *HAVE* time for the kids, but thanks for asking. Wanna watch 'em for me?" ((I'm being sarcastic, but with THAT much on his plate as a single father? Is *ANYONE* buying this?))
Then ♥Sam♥ gets a phone call in the middle of the next Story Time, and Alison *WALKS AWAY FROM THE KIDS* there for the reading to go nose in as to what his call is about, and then offers to watch his kids cuz he's gotta leave , and then goes back to the Story Time, but he has to re-interrupt everyone to give kissie-kissies to the twins, and... THEN she follows him up to the front of the store because *WHAT* Story Time? There's only ♥Sam♥...!!!
Moving on, ♥Sam♥ wants to get two kids on his B-ball team to go to Alison's Creative Writing Workshop. Except he is stuck with the twins, and he has to coach B-ball, but Alison can watch the three-year old twins *AND* teach the workshop, because ♥Sam♥... who comes in afterwards with the B-ball guys who C.A.N.T. attend the workshop, because practice. Only she STILL gives them homework. On top of their school homework. Which on top of their practice is TOTALLY going to help them out. ((As in, wouldn't after-school tutoring be a MUCH better idea?)) But we have to make the bookstore relevant somehow...
And the writing. GAH...
--- "Teresa (his ex) - a city girl - hated living in Bygones, and blamed Sam for keeping hem there - but Sam had been willing to tough it out and stay together for the kids' sakes." WHAT. IS. THAT?! What does one have to do with the other? That's crap writing, right there.
--- ♥Sam♥ comes in with Rory and Scott. "Wow, you boys are tall - even taller than Sam!" Alison says. "What do your parents feed you?" Rory answers, "Anything, as long as there's plenty of it. He wasn't quite as tall as Sam, the story says, then. (((BUT YOU JUST SAID THEY BOTH WERE!!!)))
But my favorite part is on Pg 41, where it says "In order for her to have the life she wanted, she was going to keep Sam in the 'father' department and focus strictly on herself... and Happy Endings (← bookstore), of course." So... she's all about herself and her store. While lying about ♥Sam♥. And screwing over the Lord God Almighty. Nice. Real nice.
I'm... out. I have too many other books to go any further with this.