I'm really torn on this book. I'm not great at writing reviews, but I know what I like and what I don't. In this case, unlike the first 3 of this series, I am struggling with a positive review. I normally refrain from giving a review if my review is not positive but in this case it is my hope that my review will allow the authors to make improvements before releasing the next book. I hope the authors will forgive me for the following somewhat harsh review, but I feel it should be said.
Edit: I have added one more star because the formatting error has been fixed. The rest of my review still stands. I would prefer to give this book 3.5 stars, but since 3 is too low with the formatting fixed I gave a 4.
To be clear, I still LOVE the story and I do still plan to read future installments. YA sometimes throws me off because there is not much that an adult can relate to, something that was far less of a problem in the first 3 books of this series. I really, really love the story and the characters...but...
What really ruined everything for me was the writing itself. I remember the writing style from the first 3 being a little simplistic, but this one seemed downright childish. I get that as a YA title this is intended for a younger audience, but even my 11 year old noticed the very plain almost child-like writing style in this book. I read this while my daughter was coming out of anesthesia in the hospital (just this past Monday) and SHE read some while not only still recovering from anesthesia, but loopy on painkillers and she still had zero trouble comprehending what she was reading and commenting on how simple it seemed for "something you would read mom." At times, especially during dialog it felt like I was reading a 5th grade essay rather than a young adult novel. The whole thing feels rushed. Written in a rush, edited in a rush, released in a rush. You know the feeling in Jr. High when you have a 1000 word essay due, but you only have 900 words so you pick through and add in extra words and flip things around to get exactly 1000 words? I feel like the authors/editors of this book did the exact opposite. At times I felt like words were removed and things condensed down for some reason I cannot quite fathom. I found myself wondering if releasing a kindle edition book on kindle is priced by the number of words and a lot of words were removed to keep publishing costs low. I felt like this book could have easily been longer and contained more detail and not felt so rushed and cut short. It felt like every sentence was cut short, like a kid reducing how much he has to write. I felt like the descriptions given in most of the book were inadequate making it difficult to paint a picture in my head for many of the scenes.
So in closing I want to repeat that I STILL love the story and I can't wait for more, but I really hope that when more comes the story will be again aimed towards the young ADULT rather than the pre-teen.