This was an even paced and steady story, with no extreme story lines or character actions. There were parts of this story where I thought I knew what was going to happen, but ended up being surprised by the author’s choice (and not in a bad way either). There were also parts where the story played out just as I imagined. As much as this story was entertaining, I did have a couple of issues, one with the writing and one with the story itself.
There were a couple of times while reading this book that I was confused as to whom was being referenced at the time because the pronouns seemed to be misplaced. In the prologue, during the scene where Keir is helping Lachlan, who has been pinned under his horse:
“‘No, it’s just me,’ Keir said with a cheerful grin. He unfastened Lachlan’s leg armor, tossing the cuisse, knee plate, and greave aside. Then he ran his long fingers gently down the length of Lachlan’s breeches, feeling with care for shattered bones.
‘Nothing’s broken,’ he assured his older brother as he lifted him to his feet.”
Then I read down a few lines:
“Clasping his younger brother around the waist, Lachlan hooked his thumbs in Keir’s belt.”
And got thrown out of the story. From the first paragraph, I thought Keir was the elder, but apparently it is Lachlan who is the eldest. I thought maybe I had read too fast and misunderstood (it happens) who was talking. I moved on, forgiving my mistake, but then it happened again. And then another time. One time, it’s my fault, more than two and there’s something wrong. It happened often enough that I knew it couldn’t be the product of reading too fast.
The second issue I had was the flights into fancy or randomness the story visited that didn’t fit in with the overall tone of the book. Francine persisted in this delusion, based on superstition and an fueled by an old friend, that Lachlan was really a sorcerer. She was afraid of his supposedly shape-changing capability and the way he could mesmerize people (i.e. her) into acting and feeling things they weren’t supposed to. Even in the epilogue, after she had married and settled into domestic life, she insisted on believing Lachlan had extraordinary powers over her. Now, I can see this a brief moments of comic relief, but after a while it got old.
Despite these issues, I finished the story feeling pleasantly satisfied, if not excited. It ended with everyone together that was supposed to be together, the bad guy vanquished, and with the basis for another book. Fans of Sue-Ellen Welfonder and her ilk will definitely find a new read in this story.
Also, as the cover mentions, this book is part of the Highland Lairds trilogy, book two in fact, but reads as a stand alone quite well. There were mentions of the characters from the first book, The Maclean Groom, but they were brought into this story in such a way as to whet your appetite for the first book and still enjoy this story.
*review copy provided by publisher via Edelweiss