Having read the Moorehouse Legacy series, which I ravenously devoured in a matter of days, and the first (and so far only) O’Banyon Brothers book which I loved, I had some pretty high expectations for An Unforgettable Lady which might be part of my problem with the book. Don’t get me wrong, I enjoyed it, but I didn’t LOVE it as I did the other Jessica Bird books that I’ve read.
Important Message : This book has been re-released and included a nice note from the author explaining the evolution of her stories and writing style. The only part I’ll mention here, because I feel that it’s most important and speaks volumes to her growth as a writer is that she’s stopped allowing her Rice Krispies to decide the direction her stories will take. She still allows them some input, but she’s much more disciplined a writer now, and she – not her breakfast cereal – has the final say. Whew! And praise the Scribe Virgin for that because comparing this book with what I find to be her more professional, polished work found in the Black Dagger Brotherhood series written under the name, J. R. Ward, I have to say that I’m not sure the BDB would have the same intensity if Snahp, Crahckle and Pohp were calling the shots. Can you imagine what the Brothers names might be like? Fibher, Whohle Grahain, Mihlk, Nutrishous, Delishous... Yeah, see… those just don’t have the same feel, nor would they strike the same level of terror into the Lessers as names like Tohrment, Zsadist, Phury, Wrath, Tehrror, Vishous, Muhrder or even Bloodletter do.
But I digress….
The first half moved a bit slowly for my taste and there was an exorbitant amount of internal dialog which sounded a lot like this: John Smith: I want her, but I can’t have her. She deserves better. My job is dangerous, she’d never be safe. She’s just a job. When this is over, I’m walking away. I have to say, that got really, really old, really, really fast. And from Grace Hall we got a whole lot of: So what if I’m a trjillionaire socialite and he a bodyguard—that shouldn’t matter to him one bit. Why does he care if I’m a Countess, it’s by marriage only… and speaking of marriage, why should it matter that I’m a married woman – we’re getting a divorce! So yeah, spending ½ a book inside their heads like that just didn’t “do it” for me.
Then we get to the 2nd half and things finally start taking off. People are being gruesomely killed by a neat freak who rips their throats out and then tidies up their clothing, a chef who is 2 eggs shy of a 3 egg omelet trying to singlehandedly take over the catering needs of most of New York City, and a disgruntled employee who is trying to overthrow the Hall Foundation’s hierarchy. Those things made for some interesting reading.
One thing that bugged me was Grace’s incessant griping about not needing a body guard when clearly she did – she was on the list of women featured in the newspaper article which was also the killer’s checklist for who was next on his hit list. Well, she wanted a body guard, but didn’t want to have to alter her lifestyle at all. Not exactly the brightest bulb in the box, if you ask me. I didn’t feel anything special for her or about her, and didn’t feel that she was deserving of John as her happily ever after.
Now John Smith… *sigh* Wow. What a man! He was angsty, sexy, demanding, scarred, sexy, intelligent, intense, sexy… whether writing as J.R. Ward or Jessica Bird, this author knows how to put together one incredible hunk of male. Did I mention he’s one sexy guy who can guard my body any day?
And speaking of sexy, the sexual intensity was quite high, but there wasn’t much of the act itself. They wanted each other, they knew they did, but kept talking each other out of it. I was like, WTH? I mean, when Grace finally gave John the green light and he was getting into it, she throws on the brakes. Then later, he’s all hot and bothered, she’s like “oh, yeah,” then HE puts a stop to it. It worked for awhile, but then seriously, it went from being exciting sexual tension to frustration and overkill.
Overall, after looking past the slow start to the story and Grace’s TSTL (Too Stupid To Live) moments, it was an enjoyable read. I can’t say I’ll add it to my “keepers” shelf, but I am glad I read it, and I’m looking forward to An Irresistible Bachelor.