This book is written with a very funky structure that leaves you in nothing short of confusion.
The transitions are not smooth and really do not adequately explain anything in a way that you can recall actions later and see how they connected. It's very rocky. And definitely feels rushed.
You never get a chance to really fall for the story because you are too busy trying to figure out what exactly the author is trying to tell you.
Every character talks the same way. So, unfortunately, there is no true distinction between them. And over all, there really isn't much in the way for character development. The focus is definitely spent on the world building.
That being said, the world building was pretty good. You get a good idea of what you're supposed to be seeing most of the time. However, Fischer has a very limited descriptive vocabulary. This led to everything being not unlike everything before it. In this way, the writing felt stiff.
I had a hard time sitting down and reading this book. I often found myself bored and not really absorbing anything I read. I put it down, sometimes for days at a time, and when I picked it back up again, I couldn't figure out which perspective I was supposed to be in, and what the relevance was to everything happening in the story.
By the end of the book, you become aware of the connection in one manner but not the others. I was okay with the who but I am not at all impressed with the how or why. As for the where, Nevaeh, really? That really cheapened the read. I'm all for the religious sides of things, but that is almost a mockery, in my eyes.
As for the creep factor, I thought it was done well. I only think there should have been more.
I don't think I will read any further because I just had a really hard time even finishing this one.