A Story About the Story of How to Write A Story
Of the literally hundreds of self published, Kindle freebie, and kindleunlimited books I've read, skimmed and commented on, this is one of the most interesting, entertaining and satisfying finds to date.
The premise struck me at first as a bit twee and too clever for its own good. Irving awakens at the Questing Academy. He is a character being developed by an author. He exists as a "smudge" and only comes into focus, bit by bit, as his author writes him. Everyone at the Academy is in the same boat, and they sit around waiting to find out who or what they will become and what their story will be. They come into focus physically, but they also learn their own backstory, in the form of memories and knowledge that just pops into their heads, as they are further developed by their author.
And this set up works on multiple levels. You can read it, of course, as an extended metaphor for growing up in general, but you can put that rather obvious angle aside and just enjoy the story, craft and writing. You can also read this as meta-meta-meta fiction, since it's a story about a writer writing a story about how stories are written. Feel free to go into that rabbit hole as deeply as you like. But you don't have to do any of that if you don't care to.
Because get this. Our hero Irving, (and everyone at the Academy knows he is destined to be a hero and not just some supporting character), is funny, interesting, sensitive, observant, resourceful and vulnerable. He is a great character as a smudge, never mind what he's going to be when fully developed. His fellows at the Academy are equally appealing. There are at least six other smudges, (gal pal, grumpy sidekick, really grumpy sidekick, nasty villain in development, possible second gal pal, mysterious/intriguing passing characters), who each add a fresh and unique voice to the proceedings. Then there are the characters - the director of the Academy and so on - who add more wry, funny, idiosyncratic voices to the project. The upshot is that you get a complete mashup of just about every kids book character imaginable all lumped together in this antic half-way house.
This all sounds a bit confusing, but it doesn't play out that way. The idea of the Questing Academy is clearly developed at the outset. By following Irving's development we are brought along as the tale unfolds. Irving is given a tour of the Academy and attends "Orientation", so we get a lot of seamless exposition to get us grounded. Then, once the premise has been fully fleshed out, and the main characters have been introduced, Irving's actual adventures at the Academy can begin. It all builds naturally and clearly, for even the youngest reader.
Early on the chapters alternate between what is happening to Irving and what is going on in the head of his author. At first this struck me as rather indulgent, since the author is not especially interesting and his process isn't exactly fascinating. If it doesn't appeal you can skim the "writing!" parts in order to get back to Irving; if you are interested in the process, then this will be rewarding.
Just as an added pleasure, on top of all this, the book is sharp and witty. There are all sorts of jokes and puns and references to other books tucked into the story. Dialogue is crisp. Characters have loads of attitude and personalities that jump off the page. The pace is brisk and the energy level is high. Sometimes these high-concept books can feel like a bit of a slog, (I felt that way during parts of books like "Inkheart"), but this one is generally pretty light and nimble. It helps that all of the characters know that they are characters, so practically every line is delivered ironically and works on multiple levels.
So, to me this was a refreshing change of pace, a true entertainment, and a happy find. Enjoy.