3.3 stars. hmm.... not sure what to make of this one. it had that cozy betty neels vibe but it wasn't among my faves. it wasn't boring either but I guess the tropes in this one just weren't for me:
1. he falls first but she doesnt trust love and is oblivious so he sets out to make her love him. this has worked well in other betty books, but here the overall lack of other real story tension/conflict made it a bit dull
2. when she realises she is in love with him, now we have a situ where they both love each other but think they must make the other fall in love. I find that setup isn't enough story tension for an angst lover like me either.
also, the book description says "He too had been hurt in the past" and that is untrue. he was not nursing a cynical/broken heart, which would have made the story more interesting. very annoying to be misled.
THE PLOT
Big beautiful Sophie (27?) is a nurse at a hospital. one day, RDD Rijk (a visiting consultant) sees her out of the hospital window getting jostled by a crowd. he goes down to the street and finds her shoe heel is stuck in a grate and she can't put her shopping down amongst this jostling crowd to unstick herself. he unlaces her shoe and unsticks it and ties it back up for her. (v sexy for a betty book!) she thanks him, but the mocking look he gives her uncertain and makes her dislike him a bit.
She discovers later that day that he is a consultant surgeon when they work together at hospital to help a patient. we get quite a lot of his POV in this book so we know he found out what ward she works in and he purposefully went there in hopes of seeing her again.
indeed, he even seeks her out at her flat and cajoles her into going out for a meal, saying he would like to be friends. he even insists on driving her home to the countryside to her parents for no reason, insisting it will give them a chance to get to know each other as friends. Sophie can't understand why. she has had her heart broken when she was 19, when the man she loved ditched her for a rich young widow, so now she doesn't believe in love. however, for a 27 year old woman she is far too naive for her confusion about this new friendship to be believable. she must be very stupid, but we know she is smart enough as a nurse, so stupidity doesnt fit either. her unbelievable level of naivety was another frustration in the book. how she keeps wondering why he is being friendly and telling herself he can't be interested in her and surely a big man would desire a petite skinny girl instead. I lost my patience with that a bit.
SPOILERS AHEAD
so anyway, we are soon made aware he is in love with her but he knows he needs to tread carefully with her. in fact, after going out of his way to become friends, he then asks her for a marriage based on friendship and she reveals to him she had her heart broken and doesn't trust passionate love anyway.
he is very patient about letting her make up her mind about if she wants to marry him, even arranging a trip to Holland so she can meet his family and see how he lives. he treats her with every courtesy, a bit like glass. some readers might lap it up, but it left me feeling a bit icky about the "she's so fragile and might run away from her feelings" trope. it made her seem insipid.
so anyway, she marries him at around 70% and shortly before the wedding, she realises she has fallen in love with him. now she resolves to hide her feelings because he only wanted a friendly marriage.
the rest of it is full of her becoming annoyed by his always being busy with work life and wishing he treated her as more than a friend, her frustrations and uncertainties, and then a bit of angst after she sees him with a beautiful woman who he is clearly very close to. then a spiteful visitor also hints that he has had a past relationship with the OW. she starts to believe the OW must be a widow and that he must have loved the OW for years but now that the OW is free, he is married, and surely he must regret it. worse, when she meets the OW, she discovers the OW is really nice, and the OW asks "you must surely know about us?" and says she is heartbroken and sad and can't talk about it. leaving Sophie very upset and shaken up
ENDING SPOILERS
anyway, instead of a runaway heartbroken h type of climax (my fave), we see Sophie angrily confront Rijk about being in love with the OW. he is furious that she thinks he would cheat on her and leaves for work in a fury. the OW turns up to visit Sophie and clarifies that her hubby had been secretly operated on by Rijk for a brain tumor but it's a big secret because he is head of a major corporation. OW says she and rijk have only ever been close friends and that the spiteful woman who implied anything is known to be a nasty troublemaker. so Sophie rushes to find Rijk at work to apologise. gets lost in thr backstreets. he comes to find her. they make up. love declarations. kisses. HEA.
OVERALL
it didn't have enough interesting story tension for me. others might enjoy this setup for a romance, but I prefer ones where the h falls first, and then for there to be loads of angst, or for the H to be cynical and cold and fighting his feelings etc. so this betty book wasn't quite right for me, alas.
good points were that it had all the cosy family scenes and all the beautiful cosy new home scenes etc, which are always enjoyable in betty books.plus it was not boring and the plot progressed fairly quickly.