📚ARC REVIEW📚
Dead to Rights by Jasmine Webb
Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️/5
Spice level: 0/3
Genres: humorous fiction, cozy mystery
Tropes: small town, bookstore owner, incompetent police, unfamiliar setting
Mackenzie receives a letter saying her estranged father has passed, and left her a house and bookstore in England. Having just been fired from her marketing job in New York, she takes this as a sign and packs up her belongings and moves to Cornwall, England.
Things do not go as planned when she finds out that she is only half owner of both the bookstore and the house; her grandmother (the mother of the father she never met) owns the other halves. To make matters worse, she finds a dead body inside the bookstore when she opens it the first time (making her and her grandmother the prime suspects).
Mackenzie and her grandmother decide to solve the case (they don’t have much faith in the police), but Mackenzie quickly realizes she has become the new target for the killer.
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This was a cute, quick, cozy mystery. Definitely a fun book for the beginning of fall!
I appreciated all of the descriptions of the scenery and the town. It sounds super pretty and picturesque; makes me want to take a trip there.
The relationship that blooms between Mackenzie and her grandmother (Maggie) is really wholesome. They’re both pretty snarky/sarcastic, which makes for a pretty cute and funny dynamic between them. It doesn’t take long before Mackenzie (and the reader) can start to see the resemblance between the two.
Mackenzie finds a cat later in the book, and there is discussion of the “universal cat distribution system” and I appreciate that reference.
I do have a few issues. The dialogue is meant to be funny, but it feels so over the top in places that it ends up being more cringey than funny. Some of the analogies that were used are so obscure/out of pocket that I couldn’t even understand what I was supposed to be picturing. Overall, these both caused the humor to feel a bit forced in places.
I’m not sure how much of this is due to England law being different, but there were a lot of crime related things that made very little sense. They say the police are incompetent, but I don’t think that is a strong enough excuse for some of the things that happen. Especially since they brought in a detective from a (bigger) neighboring city.
The topic of gambling is prevalent in this story before it is relative to the murder motive, but the amount it is talked about feels weird. Each suspect they talk to goes through a monologue of how they ended up in $2k-$15k in debt from gambling, and it almost feels like an anti-gambling advertisement or a “get help for your addiction” commercial.
A lot of the reactions of the characters to things going on do not seem realistic. Mackenzie finds a dead body, but does not seem fazed at all. Same with when she was almost killed, she was not nearly as concerned as she should be. It just felt kind of unbelievable.
Overall, I think this was a very cute read. If you like cozy mysteries, definitely give this one a try.
Thank you to The Nerd Fam and the author for a copy of this to read ✨
‼️‼️book specific notes, may contain spoilers ‼️‼️
-mack and Maggie are worried that the police will come to the false conclusion that they killed the guy. But they have alibis? How would that even hold up in court? It would be so easy to dispute. Is England law that bad?
-them using that as a reason for coming to the conclusion that they need to solve the murder feels like a stretch
-they just let mack back into the bookstore less than 24 hrs after the murder happened, and didn’t even clean up the blood? I don’t think that’s how it works
-Mack and Maggie break into the apartment of the murdered person (without gloves!) before the police have even investigated it. They’re the prime suspects; do they not realize that it’ll be way worse for them if some sort of trace or DNA is found?
-Mack is supposed to be pretty smart but is convinced that the PI is the murderer. She believes that just because he seems cocky, he would break in to the apartment of the victim and also return to the scene after Mack is almost killed. I feel like that is such an unrealistic conclusion to jump to
-so Greg (the murder victim) screwed the local bank out of $100k. The bank employee he bamboozled didn’t even lose his job, and Greg just got to go free and live in the same town? Why would the bank not go after Greg for the fraudulent documents he used?
-the dynamic in this town is super weird. Maggie is just able to point blank ask people if they murdered Greg and they answer her? I feel like the logical response would be “GTFO of here, I’m not talking to you”