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The River
“The River is a story that will transform how you see yourself and the world.” —Andy Andrews, New York Times best-selling author of The Noticer, The Traveler’s Gift, and How Do You Kill 11 Million People?
“You were made for The River . . .”
Gabriel Clarke is mysteriously drawn to The River, a ribbon of frothy white water carving its way through steep canyons high in the Colorado Rockies. The rushing waters beckon him to experience freedom and adventure.
But something holds him back—the memory of the terrible event he witnessed on The River when he was just five years old—something no child should ever see.
Chains of fear and resentment imprison Gabriel, keeping him from discovering the treasures of The River. He remains trapped, afraid to take hold of the life awaiting him.
When he returns to The River after years away, his heart knows he is finally home. His destiny is within reach. Claiming that destiny will be the hardest—and bravest—thing he has ever done.
“You were made for The River . . .”
Gabriel Clarke is mysteriously drawn to The River, a ribbon of frothy white water carving its way through steep canyons high in the Colorado Rockies. The rushing waters beckon him to experience freedom and adventure.
But something holds him back—the memory of the terrible event he witnessed on The River when he was just five years old—something no child should ever see.
Chains of fear and resentment imprison Gabriel, keeping him from discovering the treasures of The River. He remains trapped, afraid to take hold of the life awaiting him.
When he returns to The River after years away, his heart knows he is finally home. His destiny is within reach. Claiming that destiny will be the hardest—and bravest—thing he has ever done.
296 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 20, 2011
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About the author
Michael Neale
31 books20 followersGifted writer, performer, and masterful storyteller are all phrases used to describe Michael Neale.
With the highly anticipated September 2012 release of his first novel The River, as well as a second book, Your Great Name, which releases in October 2012, Michael is finding more and more ways to share his gift of storytelling as an author.
As a Dove Award-Winning songwriter, his songs have been recorded by artists such as Michael W. Smith (“Rise Above”), Natalie Grant (“Your Great Name,” Worship Song of the Year in 2012), Rebecca St. James (“In A Moment”), Todd Agnew (“I Need No Other”), and Phillips, Craig and Dean (“Saved the Day”), to name a few.
Michael divides his time among leading worship in churches, songwriting, and being a featured leader and teacher at conferences around the country. In between his travels, Michael serves on the team of Worship Leaders at Christ Fellowship Church in Palm Beach Gardens, FL, where he lives with his wife Leah, and their three children Micah, Maisie, and Wyatt.
With the highly anticipated September 2012 release of his first novel The River, as well as a second book, Your Great Name, which releases in October 2012, Michael is finding more and more ways to share his gift of storytelling as an author.
As a Dove Award-Winning songwriter, his songs have been recorded by artists such as Michael W. Smith (“Rise Above”), Natalie Grant (“Your Great Name,” Worship Song of the Year in 2012), Rebecca St. James (“In A Moment”), Todd Agnew (“I Need No Other”), and Phillips, Craig and Dean (“Saved the Day”), to name a few.
Michael divides his time among leading worship in churches, songwriting, and being a featured leader and teacher at conferences around the country. In between his travels, Michael serves on the team of Worship Leaders at Christ Fellowship Church in Palm Beach Gardens, FL, where he lives with his wife Leah, and their three children Micah, Maisie, and Wyatt.
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July 23, 2016
I read this book as part of the Book Club that I am in. Having said that, it is not a book I would have read otherwise. The story is one dimensional and the writing is elementary to say the least. I am not sure who the target market was for this book originally. I would guess Fifth Grade…? This book falls under Christian worship, yet the characters in the story are not very religious. They worship a river. There is even a letter written by the main characters' father that might be construed as a suicide note – it mentions how life is not worth living. And for all reasons he said his customers were not appreciative. I found the letter odd and not inspiring to anyone. Does not try to make the best of a bad situation. And what was the Dads bad situation anyway? His inability to please the public?
The character himself has no growth, just a ho-hum type person who is afraid a lot. The plot is elementary and could be the subject for a students’ English assignment. It is very “See Spot run.” For example the main character, Gabriel says 'Whoa, that was fun. Can we do it again? I think I would like to go down the river again.' This is a very predictable story.
Once enough for this disappointing tale.
The character himself has no growth, just a ho-hum type person who is afraid a lot. The plot is elementary and could be the subject for a students’ English assignment. It is very “See Spot run.” For example the main character, Gabriel says 'Whoa, that was fun. Can we do it again? I think I would like to go down the river again.' This is a very predictable story.
Once enough for this disappointing tale.
September 25, 2012
For a first novel, this one is well done; to a point. Michael Neale's format is that of a biography, and he certainly convinced me. In fact, I had to (repeatedly) refer back to the tagline on the cover: The River: A Novel.
The story begins with our narrator stuck, for 3½ hours, at the Denver airport. He's hoping to kill that time with a book and his iPod in the nearly-empty boarding area. Instead, a character "out of a Discovery Channel documentary" sits down next to him.
And, in sharing his story, changes our narrator's life.
Gabriel Clarke's story begins, and life as he knows it ends, on a September day in 1956. A bright and energetic blond-haired, blue-eyed 5-year-old, Gabe and his father live at the Big Water Adventure Camp in Corley Falls, Colorado. With the summer season over and looking forward to a well-deserved day off, Gabe and his dad hike to The River's Firewater gorge.
But before Gabe can even get his feet wet, two kayakers run into trouble - and their accident turns the young boy's life upside down.
From there, we follow Gabriel as he moves to Kansas to live with his mother and loses himself in grief. Dark, dark days where he crawls inside himself, unable or unwilling to interact with the world around him. It seems as though he has blocked the details of that day in September, even as emotion and fear of the water cripple him.
Time passes and Gabriel grows older. He begins to move outside his grief; to feel the pull of The River. Eventually, through an interesting set of circumstances, Gabe returns to his roots and is given a chance to finally, and fully heal.
*****
The characters and plot of The River are well-developed and well-written. Until the end which, I have to say, feels incomplete / half-finished.
In the interview with Andy Andrews, included in the back of the book, Mr. Neale tells us that The River (always capitalized) is supposed to symbolize some sort of spiritual journey to find our true purpose and to lead a full life. But, and perhaps it is only me, Gabriel comes off as rather selfish and uncaring at the end.
His mother is struggling financially, the elderly couple's health is failing, and his dog is (it appears) dying. Yet, this young man - on whom everyone depends - just takes off. Not to mention, we spend several chapters following Gabe's budding romance with Tabitha, only to never find out what happens with the young couple.
The epilogue does have Gabe inviting our narrator to find him, run The River, and learn the rest of the story. So, hopefully, this means that a sequel is in the works. Otherwise, it's simply a disappointing finish to an interesting novel.
Disclosure of Material Connection: I received this book free from the publisher through the BookSneeze®.com [...] book review bloggers program. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own.
The story begins with our narrator stuck, for 3½ hours, at the Denver airport. He's hoping to kill that time with a book and his iPod in the nearly-empty boarding area. Instead, a character "out of a Discovery Channel documentary" sits down next to him.
And, in sharing his story, changes our narrator's life.
Gabriel Clarke's story begins, and life as he knows it ends, on a September day in 1956. A bright and energetic blond-haired, blue-eyed 5-year-old, Gabe and his father live at the Big Water Adventure Camp in Corley Falls, Colorado. With the summer season over and looking forward to a well-deserved day off, Gabe and his dad hike to The River's Firewater gorge.
But before Gabe can even get his feet wet, two kayakers run into trouble - and their accident turns the young boy's life upside down.
From there, we follow Gabriel as he moves to Kansas to live with his mother and loses himself in grief. Dark, dark days where he crawls inside himself, unable or unwilling to interact with the world around him. It seems as though he has blocked the details of that day in September, even as emotion and fear of the water cripple him.
Time passes and Gabriel grows older. He begins to move outside his grief; to feel the pull of The River. Eventually, through an interesting set of circumstances, Gabe returns to his roots and is given a chance to finally, and fully heal.
*****
The characters and plot of The River are well-developed and well-written. Until the end which, I have to say, feels incomplete / half-finished.
In the interview with Andy Andrews, included in the back of the book, Mr. Neale tells us that The River (always capitalized) is supposed to symbolize some sort of spiritual journey to find our true purpose and to lead a full life. But, and perhaps it is only me, Gabriel comes off as rather selfish and uncaring at the end.
His mother is struggling financially, the elderly couple's health is failing, and his dog is (it appears) dying. Yet, this young man - on whom everyone depends - just takes off. Not to mention, we spend several chapters following Gabe's budding romance with Tabitha, only to never find out what happens with the young couple.
The epilogue does have Gabe inviting our narrator to find him, run The River, and learn the rest of the story. So, hopefully, this means that a sequel is in the works. Otherwise, it's simply a disappointing finish to an interesting novel.
Disclosure of Material Connection: I received this book free from the publisher through the BookSneeze®.com [...] book review bloggers program. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own.
September 25, 2012
First off, I could not put The River down. I loved it! Gabriel Clarke is such an endearing main character and I feel like we all struggle with the same feelings of fear, resentment and anxiety that Gabriel struggles with, even if not to the same degree.
I do want to say, however, that if you decide to read this book, get the paperback! While the story would be just as good in any format, an e-reader cannot give you the same feeling in your hands that the paperback does. This particular book is bound in such a way that it feels like an old journal in your hands and really makes the story a tactile experience. When I was reading this book, I felt like I was holding the journal that Gabriel's family had treasured for so many years in my hands. It's worth the paperback, people.
As for the story itself...
Amazing. Michael Neale (the Dove Award-winning songwriter behind Your Great Name ) is able to draw parallels between The River and God that are almost subconscious. I knew that I was seeing the mighty power of God in the story of The River, but it was never laid out that way, if that makes any sense. I somehow now want to go whitewater rafting, though. It was actually so well-written that I forgot I was reading a story and somewhat convinced myself that Gabriel Clarke was a real man with a real story.
I do want to say, however, that if you decide to read this book, get the paperback! While the story would be just as good in any format, an e-reader cannot give you the same feeling in your hands that the paperback does. This particular book is bound in such a way that it feels like an old journal in your hands and really makes the story a tactile experience. When I was reading this book, I felt like I was holding the journal that Gabriel's family had treasured for so many years in my hands. It's worth the paperback, people.
As for the story itself...
Amazing. Michael Neale (the Dove Award-winning songwriter behind Your Great Name ) is able to draw parallels between The River and God that are almost subconscious. I knew that I was seeing the mighty power of God in the story of The River, but it was never laid out that way, if that makes any sense. I somehow now want to go whitewater rafting, though. It was actually so well-written that I forgot I was reading a story and somewhat convinced myself that Gabriel Clarke was a real man with a real story.
February 25, 2013
I am uncomfortable writing negative reviews, because authors are real people who have generally poured their hearts and souls into their work. However, I also see value in honest dialogue.
That said, I am amazed by the reports of people being deeply impacted by this book. I am very glad to hear that, but I personally found this novel to be one of the worst books I have read in a long time. The writing was elementary, the plot very predictable, the character development shallow, and the relational development unrealistic.
I understand that Christian publishing houses are experimenting with keeping direct mentions of God out of some of their books, but I found the single reference to God out of place and perhaps even more harmful than helpful in this book: "The Cartwrights weren't very religious, but they never missed thanking the good Lord for his bounty and provision whenever they sat down together for a meal."
The symbolism with The River was obvious, but perhaps it was the lack of subtlety that created a sense of "river worship" that I found creepy.
So if you decide to read this book and find it powerful, that's great. But if you choose to skip it entirely, I think that would be wise.
That said, I am amazed by the reports of people being deeply impacted by this book. I am very glad to hear that, but I personally found this novel to be one of the worst books I have read in a long time. The writing was elementary, the plot very predictable, the character development shallow, and the relational development unrealistic.
I understand that Christian publishing houses are experimenting with keeping direct mentions of God out of some of their books, but I found the single reference to God out of place and perhaps even more harmful than helpful in this book: "The Cartwrights weren't very religious, but they never missed thanking the good Lord for his bounty and provision whenever they sat down together for a meal."
The symbolism with The River was obvious, but perhaps it was the lack of subtlety that created a sense of "river worship" that I found creepy.
So if you decide to read this book and find it powerful, that's great. But if you choose to skip it entirely, I think that would be wise.
November 4, 2012
Every once in awhile you come across a book that really makes a difference in your life. One that makes an impact; one that makes a difference in how you move forward in your life. Such is the case in the inspirational fictional novel from Michael Neale, The River. I first saw an ad for this book and it was highly recommended by some of my favorite authors, one being Andy Andrews, who I have most of his books in my personal library. This one will definitely be joining them.
In the book, The River, it chronicles an encounter Michael Neale had with a mountain hiker he had met in a Denver airport when his plane was delayed. During a conversation, this man, Gabriel Clarke, shared with Michael his life story and in the end, this is the contents of that man's life and how he arrived to their chance encounter at the airport. It is nothing less than awe-inspiring and truly moving. You will not be the same after reading this.
The adventure begins with the love of a river guide, John Clarke, Gabriel's father as they are planning a hiking trip when he was only 5-years-old, but well beyond those years on the inside. Gabriel looked up to his father like most, and truly saw only the hero in his father's eyes. When a tragic circumstance that Gabriel witnesses, his life is forever changed in a way that no one should ever have to face. Now left alone and facing his worst fears as he grows up, Gabriel often retreats inside himself to help cope on his bad days. It takes much encouragement from his mom, to get him to even attend a swimming trip to the local pond, in which one more Gabriel will be left feeling responsible. As the man grows, he knows he must come face to face with the tragedy and fear that has changed him, if he ever expects to be half the man his father knew he could be. It will only take the calling of the River and a return to a place where we must all face our greatest fears.
I received, The River by Michael Neale compliments of Thomas Nelson Publishers for my honest review and was captivated by the story. It truly does keep the reader engaged from beginning to end and like most great inspirational books, it leaves you looking at your own life in introspect. Dark times in life are inescapable. They feel like a turn life wasn't supposed to take. It may be grief, shame and illness - financial, relational, or otherwise. We all have those times...it's part of the fabric of being broken people, living in a broken world. The good news is...it is not forever. The beauty and power of this story is not that The River pulled Gabriel out of the dark times forever and ever. It's that The River called to him and joined him in those hurtful dark places, much like God does in our own lives. I encourage you to pick up a copy of this amazing book and see if it doesn't inspire you in your own battles with fear. I rate this one a 5 out of 5 stars.
In the book, The River, it chronicles an encounter Michael Neale had with a mountain hiker he had met in a Denver airport when his plane was delayed. During a conversation, this man, Gabriel Clarke, shared with Michael his life story and in the end, this is the contents of that man's life and how he arrived to their chance encounter at the airport. It is nothing less than awe-inspiring and truly moving. You will not be the same after reading this.
The adventure begins with the love of a river guide, John Clarke, Gabriel's father as they are planning a hiking trip when he was only 5-years-old, but well beyond those years on the inside. Gabriel looked up to his father like most, and truly saw only the hero in his father's eyes. When a tragic circumstance that Gabriel witnesses, his life is forever changed in a way that no one should ever have to face. Now left alone and facing his worst fears as he grows up, Gabriel often retreats inside himself to help cope on his bad days. It takes much encouragement from his mom, to get him to even attend a swimming trip to the local pond, in which one more Gabriel will be left feeling responsible. As the man grows, he knows he must come face to face with the tragedy and fear that has changed him, if he ever expects to be half the man his father knew he could be. It will only take the calling of the River and a return to a place where we must all face our greatest fears.
I received, The River by Michael Neale compliments of Thomas Nelson Publishers for my honest review and was captivated by the story. It truly does keep the reader engaged from beginning to end and like most great inspirational books, it leaves you looking at your own life in introspect. Dark times in life are inescapable. They feel like a turn life wasn't supposed to take. It may be grief, shame and illness - financial, relational, or otherwise. We all have those times...it's part of the fabric of being broken people, living in a broken world. The good news is...it is not forever. The beauty and power of this story is not that The River pulled Gabriel out of the dark times forever and ever. It's that The River called to him and joined him in those hurtful dark places, much like God does in our own lives. I encourage you to pick up a copy of this amazing book and see if it doesn't inspire you in your own battles with fear. I rate this one a 5 out of 5 stars.
December 18, 2012
In "The River" Gabriel Clarke is telling us his life story. It's pretty amazing to read this story and recognize things of his life in my own life. It's a timeless story of God's love and care for us and growing in faith.
You can read this story like a great adventure book, or you can read this story as a spiritual read and imagine The River is God.
Michael Neale is writing an amazing story that - I believe - will change lives.
Gabriel Clarke is a 5 year old boy when his father - John Clarke - gave his life rescuing another man who tried to run a dangerous part of The River. The man fell from a dangerous waterfall with his kayak and turned upside down in the water. John tried to get the kayak turned back while he slipped and disappeared into The River forever. Gabriel was watching the whole scene and the image of it will never leave his mind.
Gabriel gets to live with his mother in Kansas, but he never feels at home there. He's a frightened kid who is afraid to make new friends. The memories of his father's drowning are always in his mind and especially the first years are really tough.
There are a few people in his life who are looking after him - his mother, his teacher and the older couple at the farm where he lives.
He has one good friend--Jimmy--who was always kind and patient with him. He knows about Gabriel's past. When he's about 20 years old Jimmy asks Gabriel to go out camping at The River with some friends. First he is afraid to go back to The River that took his father's life, but in the end he's glad he went.
At The River he has some life changing experiences. The River is showing him things he didn't know, he is learning to love The River and can't get enough of it. He is also meeting a nice girl--Tabitha--who has grown up with The River. She knows a lot about The River and she's teaching Gabriel the things she thinks he should know about The River.
In the summer Gabriel is going to work for Big Water Adventures. There he will meet new people and make good friends. Finally he feels like he has come home, but then he's meeting the man who was saved by his dad. Can he forgive that man for surving while his own father died that day?
This book is an amazing and emotional ride. I could not put it down. It's a book to savor and read again. I highly recommend The River!
You can read this story like a great adventure book, or you can read this story as a spiritual read and imagine The River is God.
Michael Neale is writing an amazing story that - I believe - will change lives.
Gabriel Clarke is a 5 year old boy when his father - John Clarke - gave his life rescuing another man who tried to run a dangerous part of The River. The man fell from a dangerous waterfall with his kayak and turned upside down in the water. John tried to get the kayak turned back while he slipped and disappeared into The River forever. Gabriel was watching the whole scene and the image of it will never leave his mind.
Gabriel gets to live with his mother in Kansas, but he never feels at home there. He's a frightened kid who is afraid to make new friends. The memories of his father's drowning are always in his mind and especially the first years are really tough.
There are a few people in his life who are looking after him - his mother, his teacher and the older couple at the farm where he lives.
He has one good friend--Jimmy--who was always kind and patient with him. He knows about Gabriel's past. When he's about 20 years old Jimmy asks Gabriel to go out camping at The River with some friends. First he is afraid to go back to The River that took his father's life, but in the end he's glad he went.
At The River he has some life changing experiences. The River is showing him things he didn't know, he is learning to love The River and can't get enough of it. He is also meeting a nice girl--Tabitha--who has grown up with The River. She knows a lot about The River and she's teaching Gabriel the things she thinks he should know about The River.
In the summer Gabriel is going to work for Big Water Adventures. There he will meet new people and make good friends. Finally he feels like he has come home, but then he's meeting the man who was saved by his dad. Can he forgive that man for surving while his own father died that day?
This book is an amazing and emotional ride. I could not put it down. It's a book to savor and read again. I highly recommend The River!
October 25, 2012
The River by Michael Neale is the story of a young man who finds healing, forgiveness, and purpose.
Gabriel Clarke is mysteriously drawn to The River, a ribbon of frothy white water carving its way through steep canyons high in the Colorado Rockies. The rushing waters beckon him to experience freedom and adventure. The memory of the terrible event he witnessed on The River holds him back. When he returns to The River after years away, his heart knows he is finally home. His destiny is within reach. Claiming that destiny will be the hardest—and bravest—thing he has ever done.
Gabriel’s journey through life brings him back to the river and he encounters the river as he was not able to as a five year old boy watching his father drown. He experiences love, release, learns to forgive and find life once more – a life connected to the river. This is a beautiful story about family, purpose, forgiveness, and The River that binds them together.
Although this story is an easy read, the dialogue was too childish; relationships went too fast, getting over the fear of the water, too fast. The story was cheated out of the depth it could have, if the story was developed more. With the noted misgiving I would recommend reading the short story for an easy afternoon.
I received eBook from Thomas Nelson in their Booksneeze program for my review.
Gabriel Clarke is mysteriously drawn to The River, a ribbon of frothy white water carving its way through steep canyons high in the Colorado Rockies. The rushing waters beckon him to experience freedom and adventure. The memory of the terrible event he witnessed on The River holds him back. When he returns to The River after years away, his heart knows he is finally home. His destiny is within reach. Claiming that destiny will be the hardest—and bravest—thing he has ever done.
Gabriel’s journey through life brings him back to the river and he encounters the river as he was not able to as a five year old boy watching his father drown. He experiences love, release, learns to forgive and find life once more – a life connected to the river. This is a beautiful story about family, purpose, forgiveness, and The River that binds them together.
Although this story is an easy read, the dialogue was too childish; relationships went too fast, getting over the fear of the water, too fast. The story was cheated out of the depth it could have, if the story was developed more. With the noted misgiving I would recommend reading the short story for an easy afternoon.
I received eBook from Thomas Nelson in their Booksneeze program for my review.
March 24, 2019
I went into this book with high expectations. I'm not exactly sure why but I expected it to be more than it was. The beginning was interesting and held my attention but the further the story went along, I just couldn't become invested in the development or in the characters. The writing seemed like it was targeted for a younger reader and just didn't do it for me. The synopsis of the book seemed - at least in my eyes - seemed to promise some thrill, some suspense and I just didn't get that. I'm honestly disappointed that I couldn't enjoy this book more but I'm happy that others seemed to get out of it what they were looking for. This one just wasn't for me.
February 25, 2020
One of my favorite quotes was "The water called out to me." This story is based on a real man who went through loss, fear, heart break and sorrow only to find peace, happiness and a new outlook on life, he also learned or forgiveness and the true meaning of finding yourself.
I loved this book because I could relate to the author and how he had some hard times in his life. The author met Gabriel Clarke in an airport waiting for his plane. What started out of a leave me alone conversation ended with a story of a life time. This is another book that I just feel in love with. It just goes to show even with the lose of a father at a young age you can overcome and be happy
I loved this book because I could relate to the author and how he had some hard times in his life. The author met Gabriel Clarke in an airport waiting for his plane. What started out of a leave me alone conversation ended with a story of a life time. This is another book that I just feel in love with. It just goes to show even with the lose of a father at a young age you can overcome and be happy
January 31, 2024
Yes, the writing is much simpler than other novels. However, there is something amazing to be said about a first-time novelist who is driven to create a 2-part piece of work and tell a wonderful, thought-provoking story throughout.
I found the story to be very charming, engaging, and touching. I loved the characters, of course... Ezra and Rio were my favorite. I even appreciated Jimmy Bly... I could have definitely used a friend like him growing up. I enjoyed how Blake was the actual recipient of the storytelling and messages of love, forgiveness, and the journey of self-discovery. Great job, Neale.
I found the story to be very charming, engaging, and touching. I loved the characters, of course... Ezra and Rio were my favorite. I even appreciated Jimmy Bly... I could have definitely used a friend like him growing up. I enjoyed how Blake was the actual recipient of the storytelling and messages of love, forgiveness, and the journey of self-discovery. Great job, Neale.
February 20, 2025
This book is not something that n I would normally read, it was passed on to me. The book started out a little slow but as I continued to read on, Gabriel captured me and I wanted to see where he would go. I was left somewhat confused as to what the author was trying to say.
August 13, 2021
A heartwarming story and a super easy, page turning read about adventure, overcoming fear, and living life to the fullest. I really enjoyed this one!
April 12, 2023
Amazingly inspirational
November 24, 2012
This is the story of Gabriel, whose life--at the age of five--is dramatically changed by the death of his father. The little boy's life is completely altered when he is uprooted from his home by a beautiful river in the mountains of Colorado, to the flat, hot plains of Kansas. The rest of Gabriel's childhood, followed by his teen years, are extremely difficult because of the significant losses and changes in his life.
It is especially important that the sections "from an entry in a journal" and "prologue" be read before reading the book. The author cleverly starts the story here and, besides being very interesting and well-written, these sections add a lot to the coming story.
Geographically, there are some mistakes concerning the setting of the boy's Kansas home, and its location to other big cities, especially St. Louis, MO. Whether Gabriel's hometown was real or fictitious, no place in Kansas would have St. Louis as its closest big city, or KMOX as its strongest radio station.
There are some really odd occurrences that were dropped into the story-line. These events really don't make sense, and were never explained as the story went on. The last event was especially odd, and had a paranormal feel to it. Hopefully, God was supposed to be at the center of these events, but they were confusing, and it is basically anybody's guess.
A big part of the Gabriel's life is spent trying to recover from the sudden shock of his father's absence in his life. The book goes into great detail about how difficult this was for Gabriel to try to live through, and how painful it was for his loved ones to watch Gabriel carry this burden. As the boy grew, it was a mystery to Gabriel why he couldn't get rid of the burden--especially since he didn't like that about himself. Sadly, Gabriel didn't know how to change the situation.
As a Christian, I would hope God would be seen as the answer to all this unhappiness. But despite the story being set in a small Kansas town in the 1950's, God is never acknowledged as a solution. In fact, God is really not mentioned in the book other than table grace said at mealtime, and once when a character sort of looks up and says, "thank you". Since the book has a Christian publisher, God's absence in this story is even more disappointing.
This is a clean story, although it is marred with at least one mild profanity. I would not call it Christian fiction. The author's descriptions are well done. I could almost feel the hot, dusty Kansas plains, as well as, the cool beauty of the mountains, forests and river in Colorado. I love the forests and mountains, so a book that includes part of its story in that area appeals to me.
I give this book a 3 star rating. The story needs to be smoothed out. If a reader has hung in there with Gabriel's story, suffering through all the drama and angst, the reader deserves a few more crumbs of Gabriel's life at the end. For instance, did he get married, if so, to whom? The strange occurrences need more explanation, and the mistakes in geography need to be fixed. Getting past that, the story has interesting characters, an appealing chronicle of Gabriel's family and life, along with good descriptions of the outdoors.
The publisher has provided me with a complimentary copy of this book through Thomas Nelson Publishing for the purpose of review. All opinions expressed are my own, and I have not been compensated in any other manner. Despite my receiving the book free, it has not influenced my judgment, and I have given an honest opinion.
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It is especially important that the sections "from an entry in a journal" and "prologue" be read before reading the book. The author cleverly starts the story here and, besides being very interesting and well-written, these sections add a lot to the coming story.
Geographically, there are some mistakes concerning the setting of the boy's Kansas home, and its location to other big cities, especially St. Louis, MO. Whether Gabriel's hometown was real or fictitious, no place in Kansas would have St. Louis as its closest big city, or KMOX as its strongest radio station.
There are some really odd occurrences that were dropped into the story-line. These events really don't make sense, and were never explained as the story went on. The last event was especially odd, and had a paranormal feel to it. Hopefully, God was supposed to be at the center of these events, but they were confusing, and it is basically anybody's guess.
A big part of the Gabriel's life is spent trying to recover from the sudden shock of his father's absence in his life. The book goes into great detail about how difficult this was for Gabriel to try to live through, and how painful it was for his loved ones to watch Gabriel carry this burden. As the boy grew, it was a mystery to Gabriel why he couldn't get rid of the burden--especially since he didn't like that about himself. Sadly, Gabriel didn't know how to change the situation.
As a Christian, I would hope God would be seen as the answer to all this unhappiness. But despite the story being set in a small Kansas town in the 1950's, God is never acknowledged as a solution. In fact, God is really not mentioned in the book other than table grace said at mealtime, and once when a character sort of looks up and says, "thank you". Since the book has a Christian publisher, God's absence in this story is even more disappointing.
This is a clean story, although it is marred with at least one mild profanity. I would not call it Christian fiction. The author's descriptions are well done. I could almost feel the hot, dusty Kansas plains, as well as, the cool beauty of the mountains, forests and river in Colorado. I love the forests and mountains, so a book that includes part of its story in that area appeals to me.
I give this book a 3 star rating. The story needs to be smoothed out. If a reader has hung in there with Gabriel's story, suffering through all the drama and angst, the reader deserves a few more crumbs of Gabriel's life at the end. For instance, did he get married, if so, to whom? The strange occurrences need more explanation, and the mistakes in geography need to be fixed. Getting past that, the story has interesting characters, an appealing chronicle of Gabriel's family and life, along with good descriptions of the outdoors.
The publisher has provided me with a complimentary copy of this book through Thomas Nelson Publishing for the purpose of review. All opinions expressed are my own, and I have not been compensated in any other manner. Despite my receiving the book free, it has not influenced my judgment, and I have given an honest opinion.
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August 30, 2012
The River is not a river. In this story perhaps it is, but one man's River is another man's Mountain, or Ocean, Flying, Biking, or Running. It is what makes a person who he is, a one word, oversimplified but equally complicated analogy that defines a life. In The River, the debut novel by Michael Neale, it is a river in a Colorado canyon that defines not just one man, but three generations of men.
The story begins with a hike in the woods. Father John Clarke and his five year old son Gabriel take a long hike to a beautiful view over the canyon and the river below it and engage in an intense game of marbles. While playing, they hear two kayakers in trouble, headed for an un-navigable section of the river that would certainly result in their deaths. In the process of rescuing the men John Clarke loses his life before young Gabriel's eyes. Gabriel, his little life shattered, finds himself living with his mother on a Kansas farm. He grows up, still haunted by the loss of his father, and becoming a young man who is quiet, reserved, frustrated, unable to really live. When his best friend calls one day and invites him on a camping trip to Colorado, he reluctantly agrees, facing his demons hoping to find himself were he was lost so many years before.
Instead of finding himself in Colorado, he finds The River. It seems to call to him, speak to him, and draw him near. He becomes friends with Tabitha, a girl he meets on the trip, and she invites him to Colorado for the summer to work at her father's white water rafting camp. He agrees, after being drawn both to Tabitha and The River, and the trip changes his life forever. Gabriel finds himself, but also finds his home.
The River is a nice story about a boy fighting his demons, over powering them, and becoming a man. I enjoyed reading it; freshman author Michael Neale is a good storyteller. Although I liked the book, I feel Mr. Neale tried too hard to make his point about the role of The River in the story. For example, he capitalizes The River at every mention, uses the words The River more often than would be natural, and includes scenes where dreams and reality are confused. All of this was unnecessary, the spiritual and metaphorical significance of the river was well made without it, and it could be argued that overdoing it in that sense detracted from what someone else's metaphorical River could be.
There are also several other relationships in the book that had great potential and could have been much further developed. Gabriel and the farmer with whom he and his mother lived; Gabriel and Tabitha; Gabriel and his mother. All had potential, but left me wanting more.
Despite the criticisms above, The River is a great story of a boy becoming a man, overcoming his demons, growing strong and confident, facing his fears, and finding success despite the serious blows and set-backs. That story is always empowering for me.
The story begins with a hike in the woods. Father John Clarke and his five year old son Gabriel take a long hike to a beautiful view over the canyon and the river below it and engage in an intense game of marbles. While playing, they hear two kayakers in trouble, headed for an un-navigable section of the river that would certainly result in their deaths. In the process of rescuing the men John Clarke loses his life before young Gabriel's eyes. Gabriel, his little life shattered, finds himself living with his mother on a Kansas farm. He grows up, still haunted by the loss of his father, and becoming a young man who is quiet, reserved, frustrated, unable to really live. When his best friend calls one day and invites him on a camping trip to Colorado, he reluctantly agrees, facing his demons hoping to find himself were he was lost so many years before.
Instead of finding himself in Colorado, he finds The River. It seems to call to him, speak to him, and draw him near. He becomes friends with Tabitha, a girl he meets on the trip, and she invites him to Colorado for the summer to work at her father's white water rafting camp. He agrees, after being drawn both to Tabitha and The River, and the trip changes his life forever. Gabriel finds himself, but also finds his home.
The River is a nice story about a boy fighting his demons, over powering them, and becoming a man. I enjoyed reading it; freshman author Michael Neale is a good storyteller. Although I liked the book, I feel Mr. Neale tried too hard to make his point about the role of The River in the story. For example, he capitalizes The River at every mention, uses the words The River more often than would be natural, and includes scenes where dreams and reality are confused. All of this was unnecessary, the spiritual and metaphorical significance of the river was well made without it, and it could be argued that overdoing it in that sense detracted from what someone else's metaphorical River could be.
There are also several other relationships in the book that had great potential and could have been much further developed. Gabriel and the farmer with whom he and his mother lived; Gabriel and Tabitha; Gabriel and his mother. All had potential, but left me wanting more.
Despite the criticisms above, The River is a great story of a boy becoming a man, overcoming his demons, growing strong and confident, facing his fears, and finding success despite the serious blows and set-backs. That story is always empowering for me.
February 3, 2013
As with "Crossroads", I bought this book as I was leaving town for a business trip. I was running early to make a flight in Tyler which is not common for me so at the last minute as I at the Wal-Mart intersection (Hwy 64) , I felt like I should stop to purchase a novel for this trip.
In a haste, I actually got two novels just in case one did not keep my interest on the short flight to Houston.
After the purchases, I felt some remose on the money spent on buying two novels. As I traveled the few minutes to reach the airport, my mind and heart was working to maximize the purchases (decision) made. Make the most of it for books are not usually returnable. Just in case, I slid the receipt in one of the books, in case I did not read one on the trip and could return it.
Yet a new idea was given to me which I have never done before. Since I had two books, there no reason for TV watching or TV cruising on this trip. I made the commitment to not touch the remote.
Upon my arrival, The room was perfect for that setting with a extra large east window, very large comfort chair with mathcing ottoman, a throw and side lamp. It's like I was to make these purchases just for this trip. Yet, I had not pre-planned it and trusted in the slections. In fact, I had those moments of regret when it came time to pay and shortly thereafter going to the car. These feelings was what made the readings more sweet.
To make the seledtion for this read - On the back page, I saw Andy Andrews wrote a review. "The River is a story that will transform how you see yourself and the world". Since I had just introduced to Andy Andrews on TV telling about his book "How Do You Kill 11 Million People?" on the Robinson show. What also intrigued me that the book did not carry any other reviews on the back as other books mostly did. So I thought this was the book. Time was ticking if I was going to make it to airport. So I purchased both novels CrossRoads and The River. I sensed I could possibly relate to both on this business trip. How many times we are at Crossroads in life but nothing is more comforting that a river the flow of life.
As review purposes, the River was my favorite of the two purchased but because of how I purchased them, I feel they are very much connected as a pair for me.
I admire the way the river story was told knowing the meaning of the story was beyond the words. Just like the river is much more than what you see. I say this book would be a great group study book, if I ever done one outside of the classroom setting. I planned to do so soon.
Appreciation to Wal-Mart for making Inspirational Books available and Tyler Airport for letting us get away but brings us back home. Crossroads were passed on to my son-in-law. I am holding out for my son to read The River. He is not a novel reader but I think this is the one. Maybe in the summer.
In a haste, I actually got two novels just in case one did not keep my interest on the short flight to Houston.
After the purchases, I felt some remose on the money spent on buying two novels. As I traveled the few minutes to reach the airport, my mind and heart was working to maximize the purchases (decision) made. Make the most of it for books are not usually returnable. Just in case, I slid the receipt in one of the books, in case I did not read one on the trip and could return it.
Yet a new idea was given to me which I have never done before. Since I had two books, there no reason for TV watching or TV cruising on this trip. I made the commitment to not touch the remote.
Upon my arrival, The room was perfect for that setting with a extra large east window, very large comfort chair with mathcing ottoman, a throw and side lamp. It's like I was to make these purchases just for this trip. Yet, I had not pre-planned it and trusted in the slections. In fact, I had those moments of regret when it came time to pay and shortly thereafter going to the car. These feelings was what made the readings more sweet.
To make the seledtion for this read - On the back page, I saw Andy Andrews wrote a review. "The River is a story that will transform how you see yourself and the world". Since I had just introduced to Andy Andrews on TV telling about his book "How Do You Kill 11 Million People?" on the Robinson show. What also intrigued me that the book did not carry any other reviews on the back as other books mostly did. So I thought this was the book. Time was ticking if I was going to make it to airport. So I purchased both novels CrossRoads and The River. I sensed I could possibly relate to both on this business trip. How many times we are at Crossroads in life but nothing is more comforting that a river the flow of life.
As review purposes, the River was my favorite of the two purchased but because of how I purchased them, I feel they are very much connected as a pair for me.
I admire the way the river story was told knowing the meaning of the story was beyond the words. Just like the river is much more than what you see. I say this book would be a great group study book, if I ever done one outside of the classroom setting. I planned to do so soon.
Appreciation to Wal-Mart for making Inspirational Books available and Tyler Airport for letting us get away but brings us back home. Crossroads were passed on to my son-in-law. I am holding out for my son to read The River. He is not a novel reader but I think this is the one. Maybe in the summer.
January 15, 2013
Once again I was sucked in by the cover and the PR. I had no idea what The River by Michael Neale was about but was compelled to read it by the tagline: “The River is changing lives...Will you let it change yours?”
Ooooh.
In The River we meet young Gabriel Clarke who takes the tragedy of his past with him wherever he goes. Actually, all the wrong in his life defines him and he refuses to accept the love and help of others. Until…(duh duh duh) he meets Tabitha who helps Gabriel break out of his shell and discover who he is meant to become.
It was OK.
The River is actually the central character in the book. It calls to Gabriel and everyone who interacts with The River (always The River…why not just the river? That got old fast) is obsessed with it. I read so many variations of “we were made for the river” I wanted to bang my head against the wall. I KNOW YOU WERE MADE FOR THE RIVER, TELL ME SOMETHING I DON’T KNOW!
But I shouldn’t be so tough on the story—it’s a first effort by songwriter Michael Neale and doing quite well on the CBA (Christian Bookseller Association) charts, which I’ve heard is kind of a big deal for inspirational writers.
And I think there is a promising story in here. It’s just you have to work so hard to find it.
After some reflection I’ve determined the main problem is the story is unbalanced. It spends the first half leading up to WHY Gabriel is so burdened and the second half reminding us that he’s burdened. By the time we actually get to the point of the story, we run out of pages.
It could have been SO much better. And about 50 pages shorter. No, scratch that. Take 50 pages off the first part (bo-ring) and add 50 pages to the end. Tell me how things end up. How does Gabriel get on. And does he completely abandon his family like it sounds like he does? For a girl? And a river? I’d like some closure on that one because the kid seems like a nice guy but I’m not cool with ditching out on responsibilities to go white water rafting. Analogy or no.
Oh. And about the analogy? I GET IT ALREADY. It not only walked on all fours, it punched me in the face. Nope, didn’t miss it.
And yet, I’m giving this story three out of five. Because it made me cry. So Neale did something right.
Disclosure of Material Connection: I received this book free from the publisher through the BookSneeze®.com book review bloggers program. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own.
May 5, 2017
"You were made for a particular purpose, and grief and heartache will convince you to never seek it. Joy comes when you decide to anyways."
This is the theme of this 300 page novel. I enjoyed the theme, but was saddened overall; I expected a lot more from this book with such a fantastic cover I keep staring it (get with it MK, I gotta write this review...).
Nippy Negatives: (They are quite cold.)
#1. Idolatry of the river. For me, the river symbolized the Lord: We are made for God. God draws us to Him. God is wonderful, amazing, and will never leave us.
Though, if the writer meant that to be, I don't know. I'm still not sure. It's ironic that the writer, who won a Dove Award for the song, "His Great Name," would leave out God's name completely.
Seeing the lack of anything about Jesus, it's understandable that some reviews have questioned the fact this book is placed in the Christian genre. With as much as "The River," was esteemed, it almost felt like they were worshipping the river (or sea, or really any moving body of water). You were made for God and His praise, not water (albeit any sort). (Psalms 117)
This was a story teeming with symbolism, just symbolism misplaced. My favorite stories are those with analogies, but sadly this one was way off track. Was the river a symbol for God? And if so, why didn't he make it more clear? I'd of done well with a note in front saying, "Our God is like the mighty river." I would've got it then. But then again, was it supposed to be? I sure hope it was; otherwise, this author needs some help. Worshipping anything other than God is idolatry. 1 John 5:21 - Little children, keep yourselves from idols. Amen.
This book would be a confusing piece of literature for those unsaved, and half as confusing for the Child of God. Contrary to popular modern Christian songs, just going down to the river won't help you. You must be saved by the blood of the precious Lord Jesus Christ. That's it. (Romans 10:9-11)
#2. Unnecessary questionables...
During the middle of the book, a few innuendos showed up, as well as mentions of beer. I found these useless mentions that were crude and seriously unnecessary.
#3. Basic writing.
I read a few reviews from people that said you couldn't tell this was Mr. Neale's first book. I figure they haven't read too much. I enjoyed the writing, but sometimes I did cringe with unnecessary commas and basic sentence structures. It wasn't terrible enough for me to give up the book, but it was enough to tell the writer hadn't been writing for long.
This is a negative that can be a positive depending on your opinion. With all the material I read, an easy read, basic story is enjoyed, but if you are looking for something opposite, you probably won't like this book.
#4. Repetition is making me sick.
The author really wanted to burn "The River," into our heads. I'm not talking about the story itself; I'm talking about that name. It's spoken over and over. Sometimes even back to back. Pronouns are good--let's use some next time.
#5. What about the others?
I love people. That's who I am. My friends and family are dear and near to me, and I pray that to always be. Though, to the Author, these characters were only needed in Gabe's life in limited chapters. (Spoiler alert:) After the trip, Jimmy wasn't spoken of again. When Gabe decided to stay in Colorado, he never thought again of his family--nor even his mom who was barely making it. What happened to these people? I know this is Gabriel's story, but you can't illustrate and add characters that you don't follow up with. It makes Gabe seem selfish, and the story seem dense.
#6. Make sense?
There were a few things that made me scratch my head like, "Gabriel was mesmerized with what Jacob had to say...Growing up in Kansas, he'd never been exposed to that kind of passion and leadership." (Pg.236) So, what? Kansas don't have good leaders? This makes no sense. What about Farmer Earl? He seemed to be a good leader to me.
Then, "Just a few paces ahead, they came upon a large, one-room shedlike structure..." Just a few sentences later you'll get--"Tabitha lowered her voice as the two approached the small building from the east side." Is it small or large? I feel like I've missed something.
And the main thing that got me was when Gabriel was talking to Samuel about Tabitha. Samuel acted like Tabitha was too good for any guy, and in his words, "A little fox like her? I think most every guide who came through here thought she was the one at one time or another?" That makes me really wonder about the girl. Is she flirting and talking with every guy who comes by? No girl is so beautiful that every guy who just looks upon her wants to marry her. This kind of stuff makes me go, "Blah!" And really have a different view of the characters.
Paddling Positives: (Short but grand.)
#1. Good story.
While my negatives were numerous and harsh up there, I can't lie that I did enjoy the story of Gabriel. The Prologue and Epilogue were brilliant, and I felt like Gabriel was a friend of mine. Seeing him grow up made me feel like he was a real person.
#2. WOW! (I'm speaking of the cover.)
I honestly believe this is the greatest cover of a book I've ever seen. I'm astounded by it. It feels worn, yet soft, with rugged pages and an engraven title. I can't get over this. I'd buy the book again just for the cover. (Call me crazy!)
#3. Wisdom to go.
While as crazy as most of the writing is, this book is filled with snippets of wisdom, like: You were made special. You have a purpose. Adventure comes when you step out of your comfort zone and overcome your fears. And on, and on. Good truths!
#4. Unique words.
Sometimes, I felt words were added just because they felt the sentence needed some variety and they consulted a thesaurus. I had no problem with that at all. I even learnt some new words--like aplomb. Walk with aplomb my friends! Plus, Nesbitt's orange soda sounds great!
#5. I wanna go rafting now.
If this story accomplished anything, it was making me wanna go rafting. With such great detail about the sport, I was ready to get in the water right now.
A Couple Good Truths:
(One of the only times God was mentioned, by the way...) "Doesn't it look like there's some sort of powerful light behind the night sky, like God poked holes through the darkness to give us a small glipse of what's on the other side?
"If you stay connected only to that which is small enough for you to understand and control, then you have nothing--no adventure, no destiny, and no purpose."
Overall and In Full:
The story was good, but purpose was lacking. I'd like to say it was worth reading, but I'm not sure. It had a lot of heart, but was missing the true power--Jesus Christ. Let us all remember that to step out and triumph over fear and hurt, we must have Jesus at the helm. He must lead us. He can forgive us, and in turn lead us to forgive. He can give us joy, and purpose. He can show us where to go, and how to get there. Only with Him can wounds be healed.
The author had a good idea in mind, just not enough of the True Healer. I enjoyed the story, but regretted the lack of beauty.
Jesus will heal! Have you come to Him? Matthew 8:7 - And Jesus saith unto him, I will come and heal him.
Jesus loves you! †
~M.K.
(More book reviews at: www.forJesusfirstlovedme.wordpress.com)
This is the theme of this 300 page novel. I enjoyed the theme, but was saddened overall; I expected a lot more from this book with such a fantastic cover I keep staring it (get with it MK, I gotta write this review...).
Nippy Negatives: (They are quite cold.)
#1. Idolatry of the river. For me, the river symbolized the Lord: We are made for God. God draws us to Him. God is wonderful, amazing, and will never leave us.
Though, if the writer meant that to be, I don't know. I'm still not sure. It's ironic that the writer, who won a Dove Award for the song, "His Great Name," would leave out God's name completely.
Seeing the lack of anything about Jesus, it's understandable that some reviews have questioned the fact this book is placed in the Christian genre. With as much as "The River," was esteemed, it almost felt like they were worshipping the river (or sea, or really any moving body of water). You were made for God and His praise, not water (albeit any sort). (Psalms 117)
This was a story teeming with symbolism, just symbolism misplaced. My favorite stories are those with analogies, but sadly this one was way off track. Was the river a symbol for God? And if so, why didn't he make it more clear? I'd of done well with a note in front saying, "Our God is like the mighty river." I would've got it then. But then again, was it supposed to be? I sure hope it was; otherwise, this author needs some help. Worshipping anything other than God is idolatry. 1 John 5:21 - Little children, keep yourselves from idols. Amen.
This book would be a confusing piece of literature for those unsaved, and half as confusing for the Child of God. Contrary to popular modern Christian songs, just going down to the river won't help you. You must be saved by the blood of the precious Lord Jesus Christ. That's it. (Romans 10:9-11)
#2. Unnecessary questionables...
During the middle of the book, a few innuendos showed up, as well as mentions of beer. I found these useless mentions that were crude and seriously unnecessary.
#3. Basic writing.
I read a few reviews from people that said you couldn't tell this was Mr. Neale's first book. I figure they haven't read too much. I enjoyed the writing, but sometimes I did cringe with unnecessary commas and basic sentence structures. It wasn't terrible enough for me to give up the book, but it was enough to tell the writer hadn't been writing for long.
This is a negative that can be a positive depending on your opinion. With all the material I read, an easy read, basic story is enjoyed, but if you are looking for something opposite, you probably won't like this book.
#4. Repetition is making me sick.
The author really wanted to burn "The River," into our heads. I'm not talking about the story itself; I'm talking about that name. It's spoken over and over. Sometimes even back to back. Pronouns are good--let's use some next time.
#5. What about the others?
I love people. That's who I am. My friends and family are dear and near to me, and I pray that to always be. Though, to the Author, these characters were only needed in Gabe's life in limited chapters. (Spoiler alert:) After the trip, Jimmy wasn't spoken of again. When Gabe decided to stay in Colorado, he never thought again of his family--nor even his mom who was barely making it. What happened to these people? I know this is Gabriel's story, but you can't illustrate and add characters that you don't follow up with. It makes Gabe seem selfish, and the story seem dense.
#6. Make sense?
There were a few things that made me scratch my head like, "Gabriel was mesmerized with what Jacob had to say...Growing up in Kansas, he'd never been exposed to that kind of passion and leadership." (Pg.236) So, what? Kansas don't have good leaders? This makes no sense. What about Farmer Earl? He seemed to be a good leader to me.
Then, "Just a few paces ahead, they came upon a large, one-room shedlike structure..." Just a few sentences later you'll get--"Tabitha lowered her voice as the two approached the small building from the east side." Is it small or large? I feel like I've missed something.
And the main thing that got me was when Gabriel was talking to Samuel about Tabitha. Samuel acted like Tabitha was too good for any guy, and in his words, "A little fox like her? I think most every guide who came through here thought she was the one at one time or another?" That makes me really wonder about the girl. Is she flirting and talking with every guy who comes by? No girl is so beautiful that every guy who just looks upon her wants to marry her. This kind of stuff makes me go, "Blah!" And really have a different view of the characters.
Paddling Positives: (Short but grand.)
#1. Good story.
While my negatives were numerous and harsh up there, I can't lie that I did enjoy the story of Gabriel. The Prologue and Epilogue were brilliant, and I felt like Gabriel was a friend of mine. Seeing him grow up made me feel like he was a real person.
#2. WOW! (I'm speaking of the cover.)
I honestly believe this is the greatest cover of a book I've ever seen. I'm astounded by it. It feels worn, yet soft, with rugged pages and an engraven title. I can't get over this. I'd buy the book again just for the cover. (Call me crazy!)
#3. Wisdom to go.
While as crazy as most of the writing is, this book is filled with snippets of wisdom, like: You were made special. You have a purpose. Adventure comes when you step out of your comfort zone and overcome your fears. And on, and on. Good truths!
#4. Unique words.
Sometimes, I felt words were added just because they felt the sentence needed some variety and they consulted a thesaurus. I had no problem with that at all. I even learnt some new words--like aplomb. Walk with aplomb my friends! Plus, Nesbitt's orange soda sounds great!
#5. I wanna go rafting now.
If this story accomplished anything, it was making me wanna go rafting. With such great detail about the sport, I was ready to get in the water right now.
A Couple Good Truths:
(One of the only times God was mentioned, by the way...) "Doesn't it look like there's some sort of powerful light behind the night sky, like God poked holes through the darkness to give us a small glipse of what's on the other side?
"If you stay connected only to that which is small enough for you to understand and control, then you have nothing--no adventure, no destiny, and no purpose."
Overall and In Full:
The story was good, but purpose was lacking. I'd like to say it was worth reading, but I'm not sure. It had a lot of heart, but was missing the true power--Jesus Christ. Let us all remember that to step out and triumph over fear and hurt, we must have Jesus at the helm. He must lead us. He can forgive us, and in turn lead us to forgive. He can give us joy, and purpose. He can show us where to go, and how to get there. Only with Him can wounds be healed.
The author had a good idea in mind, just not enough of the True Healer. I enjoyed the story, but regretted the lack of beauty.
Jesus will heal! Have you come to Him? Matthew 8:7 - And Jesus saith unto him, I will come and heal him.
Jesus loves you! †
~M.K.
(More book reviews at: www.forJesusfirstlovedme.wordpress.com)
September 4, 2012
The River by Michael Neale recounts the story of Gabriel Clarke, the son of a Colorado whitewater rapids guide, John. When Gabriel's father dies saving the life of a careless young man, Gabriel goes to live with his mother in Kansas and tries to avoid any thoughts of The River. But, after years pass, Gabriel hears the call of The River in his life again and eventually returns to The River in Colorado.
The River is a novel of timeless themes: love, loss, sacrifice, family, beauty, and, ultimately, forgiveness and redemption. In this inspirational narrative, The River is symbolic of God's call on a Christian's life to forgive and step forward with courage and conviction, as well as other metaphorical significance. This is a book you can read quickly and it will keep your interest.
Be sure to check out Neale's website for the book trailer and a short clip showcasing the live event. Neale is an award-winning musician and performer who composed the score for the HD film footage in the live show. After watching the clip, I have a feeling the live show would be a great multi-media experience.
I also have a feeling that the whole multi-media experience might be, in totality, more moving and riveting than the book. While the book was heartening and certainly affirmed enduring lessons, the constant references to "The River" always capitalized and named only in that way became a bit distracting. I think a case could still be made to compare God to an unnamed river without making it The River.
Highly Recommended
Disclosure: My Kindle edition was courtesy of Thomas Nelson, the publisher, and Netgalley for review purposes.
The River is a novel of timeless themes: love, loss, sacrifice, family, beauty, and, ultimately, forgiveness and redemption. In this inspirational narrative, The River is symbolic of God's call on a Christian's life to forgive and step forward with courage and conviction, as well as other metaphorical significance. This is a book you can read quickly and it will keep your interest.
Be sure to check out Neale's website for the book trailer and a short clip showcasing the live event. Neale is an award-winning musician and performer who composed the score for the HD film footage in the live show. After watching the clip, I have a feeling the live show would be a great multi-media experience.
I also have a feeling that the whole multi-media experience might be, in totality, more moving and riveting than the book. While the book was heartening and certainly affirmed enduring lessons, the constant references to "The River" always capitalized and named only in that way became a bit distracting. I think a case could still be made to compare God to an unnamed river without making it The River.
Highly Recommended
Disclosure: My Kindle edition was courtesy of Thomas Nelson, the publisher, and Netgalley for review purposes.
October 10, 2012
The common writing advice for today’s authors is to show, not tell. However, many modern books fall into telling you what the point of the story is, or the lesson they wanted you to learn from it. The River was a refreshing change from the norm and trusts the readers to understand this subtle allegory for themselves.
The book design by itself gets five stars. It is made to look like an old, worn book, with rough cut pages. This book would look great on a self or a coffee table and is tempting to any book lover. The design matches the wonderful story inside.
This sweeping narrative not only gives you they story of Gabriel, but an amazingly beautiful and powerful allegory of God. Every time someone talked about The River, it was obvious to me they were also talking about God. Yet, it was written in such a way that that fact isn’t in your face. It pulls you into the story and the allegory rolls gently over you… like a river.
I read this book in one day, even though it wasn’t fast paced or suspenseful. It was a well written and engaging story that left me feeling refreshed. It also made me want to go spend the day at a river.
If you are looking for a break from heavy story plots and still be challenged, or just a nice Sunday afternoon read, I would highly recommend The River.
I received this book from Thomas Nelson through Book Sneeze in exchange for my honest review. I was under no obligation to write a positive review. The opinions in this review are entirely my own.
The book design by itself gets five stars. It is made to look like an old, worn book, with rough cut pages. This book would look great on a self or a coffee table and is tempting to any book lover. The design matches the wonderful story inside.
This sweeping narrative not only gives you they story of Gabriel, but an amazingly beautiful and powerful allegory of God. Every time someone talked about The River, it was obvious to me they were also talking about God. Yet, it was written in such a way that that fact isn’t in your face. It pulls you into the story and the allegory rolls gently over you… like a river.
I read this book in one day, even though it wasn’t fast paced or suspenseful. It was a well written and engaging story that left me feeling refreshed. It also made me want to go spend the day at a river.
If you are looking for a break from heavy story plots and still be challenged, or just a nice Sunday afternoon read, I would highly recommend The River.
I received this book from Thomas Nelson through Book Sneeze in exchange for my honest review. I was under no obligation to write a positive review. The opinions in this review are entirely my own.
March 19, 2013
I didn't realize until after I requested the book that this is a novel that is considered religious fiction; the summary gave me no such clue. I guess I wasn't thrilled when I read that, because while religions all fascinate me, "Religious Fiction" tends to mean a books that "Shove Christianity Down Your Throat." Luckily, this book really didn't give off that vibe. It's comparable to how I love Flyleaf - yes, they're technically Christian Metal, but they're not overtly so, and I love them anyway. Now, I didn't love The River, but it was a nice story.
When Gabriel Clarke was five years old, his father took him out to The River. A risk taker in a kayak didn't know The River well, and he went over the falls; Gabriel's father jumped in after the man. The man survived, but Gabe's father never resurfaced.
Gabriel moves out of Colorado and to Kansas where his mother lives, where he struggles to overcome the mental issues that The River instilled in him. He grows up, damaged, in more ways than a "normal" child, until he rediscovers The River and the healing begins.
Bottom Line: This was a nice story, though the writing style was fairly simple and nothing terribly special.
I received this book for free from the publisher, via Netgalley.
This review was originally posted on RATS.
When Gabriel Clarke was five years old, his father took him out to The River. A risk taker in a kayak didn't know The River well, and he went over the falls; Gabriel's father jumped in after the man. The man survived, but Gabe's father never resurfaced.
Gabriel moves out of Colorado and to Kansas where his mother lives, where he struggles to overcome the mental issues that The River instilled in him. He grows up, damaged, in more ways than a "normal" child, until he rediscovers The River and the healing begins.
Bottom Line: This was a nice story, though the writing style was fairly simple and nothing terribly special.
I received this book for free from the publisher, via Netgalley.
This review was originally posted on RATS.
December 1, 2016
This novel caught my attention from the very beginning on the self. When I started reading this novel I was not sure about it, but as the novel continued I was sucked in. From the beginning when the main character Gabriel Clarke was a young boy with his father down by the river I almost cried. The main reason I loved this book is because you get to see and grow with Gabriel and it happens before your eyes. Later on in life when he is living with his mom and going to school in their small town, he grows up before the reader knows it and is moving on with what calls him: The River. Another reason this book is a good one is even if a reader does have to put the book down it is an easy pick up. I would recommend this book for anyone who loves a thriller that can keep your attention but also loves a peaceful journey through a book as it moves along.
April 10, 2016
It's entirely possible that this book was written for children and not for adults. If that's the case, it might merit two stars. However, if it is written for adults. Wow. An extremely shallow and childlike story that was so predictable it was painful. "The River" was referred to so many times I almost let myself hope that there might be an underlying meaning of some kind, but alas, no such meaning could be found in "The River". Or anywhere else in this book.
Nice book cover, though. I'm a sucker for embossing.
Nice book cover, though. I'm a sucker for embossing.
August 16, 2020
Hmmm ... not sure how I felt about this one. I went with the audio edition, and the author was also the narrator. He was fine as narrator, maybe not quite as expressive as a professional narrator. The audio also had "sound" ... music at the beginning of chapters (I'm not really a fan on music) and then other sound effects, like the sound of a rushing river, the cry of a bird, the bark of a dog. The echoing sound of young Gabriel calling out. I'm not sure how I felt about those. For some, it did add a little to the story, other times it just felt a bit eye-rollingly over-the-top.
It starts with ... the author? meeting a man (Gabriel) in the airport during a layover, and then this man telling his story. So this man is older now, but as he tells the story, he switches between his childhood years, and his late teen years. Even with the dates/years being listed as the chapters began, it felt a little jumpy and hard to keep track of which time-frame we were in at the moment.
I don't know that I ever really connected with "the river" or the albino bird flying overhead, or the mysticism of Gabriel's transformation, coming to terms with everything. I wasn't expecting the ending twist, even though there had been a bit of foreshadowing, as Tabitha remarks upon his last name.
I see it's listed as #1 in a series - I don't know that I'll continue. I felt like this was a stand alone.
It starts with ... the author? meeting a man (Gabriel) in the airport during a layover, and then this man telling his story. So this man is older now, but as he tells the story, he switches between his childhood years, and his late teen years. Even with the dates/years being listed as the chapters began, it felt a little jumpy and hard to keep track of which time-frame we were in at the moment.
I don't know that I ever really connected with "the river" or the albino bird flying overhead, or the mysticism of Gabriel's transformation, coming to terms with everything. I wasn't expecting the ending twist, even though there had been a bit of foreshadowing, as Tabitha remarks upon his last name.
I see it's listed as #1 in a series - I don't know that I'll continue. I felt like this was a stand alone.
April 14, 2024
Michael Neales Novel, Titled The River, explores Gabriel Clark's past and his father's death. His father drowned in the river trying to help a kayaker, and leaving Gabrielle behind his father always told him “We were made for the river”. He would have flashbacks and go into hiding. Why did he leave me behind? Why didn’t he come back? What if he didn’t go help them? Gabriel's single mother worked at a diner all day exhausted, she tried to help Gabriel but didn't know how. He found a friend in Jimmy Bly who always protected Gabriel and helped him out from time to time. Gabriel went on a trip to The Colorado Rockies after much convincing from Jimmy they were off. He finds himself having fewer and fewer flashbacks and finding peace in the river. He understands that he is finally home and where he belongs. In my opinion, I enjoyed the book but I was confused when Gabriel imagined that the water was rising above the campsite as if it was speaking to him, and for that reason, my rating went down to a four. In the book, some literary devices that were used were Imagery, connotation, metaphor, and analogy. In summary, this book would be enjoyed by anyone who enjoys the beauty of nature and the treasures the river has to offer.
August 26, 2023
Several years ago I listened to the audiobook. At the time I didn't realize that this author had not written a book before. I was new to audiobooks and didn't have the experience of typical narrators. Well, this is not typical; this is extraordinary. This is a production. The author is a musician and reads his own two books (this one and the sequel "Into the Canyon"). Our book club raved about both books, but most missed the full experience by reading the paperback version. So, when I found the DVD, especially made for educators to share with their classrooms, I included that as part of the book club experience.
So, I listened to the books....and then purchased the books....and watched the DVD. Then I listened to other narrators in other books. Not even close.
The author told the story from one old man's memories. Yet, he was able to capture the voice and struggle of all age groups and social standings.
A must read or better yet listen to the author read as you hold the paperback in your hands.
BTW: I had to re-read/listen this summer. Books I won't let go.
So, I listened to the books....and then purchased the books....and watched the DVD. Then I listened to other narrators in other books. Not even close.
The author told the story from one old man's memories. Yet, he was able to capture the voice and struggle of all age groups and social standings.
A must read or better yet listen to the author read as you hold the paperback in your hands.
BTW: I had to re-read/listen this summer. Books I won't let go.
November 6, 2018
I was surprised by this story—caught off guard completely.
This book sat on one of my library shelves for a while, maybe a couple of years, kind of ignored. I had a sort of "I'll get around to it when I get around to it" attitude toward it. Many a book got read before I considered picking it up. I wish that hadn't been the case.
The River is special. It takes the reader on a journey with a small boy who witnesses the death of his father in The River. Life must progress, but his father's death plays on his mind just about every single day through adolescence through young adulthood. He's learned, through that tragic event, to fear The River, to believe that it will only bring more bad things into his life.
But then he meets a girl...
Initially, as I was reading this story, I wondered why the author kept capitalizing The River throughout the book. Then it struck me, like I think it will strike you. There something about The River that can change your life forever.
This book sat on one of my library shelves for a while, maybe a couple of years, kind of ignored. I had a sort of "I'll get around to it when I get around to it" attitude toward it. Many a book got read before I considered picking it up. I wish that hadn't been the case.
The River is special. It takes the reader on a journey with a small boy who witnesses the death of his father in The River. Life must progress, but his father's death plays on his mind just about every single day through adolescence through young adulthood. He's learned, through that tragic event, to fear The River, to believe that it will only bring more bad things into his life.
But then he meets a girl...
Initially, as I was reading this story, I wondered why the author kept capitalizing The River throughout the book. Then it struck me, like I think it will strike you. There something about The River that can change your life forever.
May 26, 2023
Not sure how this physical book ended out in my possession - but I'm ever eager for random reads. However, this one did hit some personal tender spots that surely affect this response, as my brother met his too soon end of life in a river, my father present. I know how that ends. For the last one standing, it doesn't. Ever.
Genre listings include this in the 'Christian' category. It doesn't feel particularly that - more hinting at spiritual metaphors rather than a religion of any stripe. And the obsession with The River feels very worshipful.
Truly, a story written to make a few specific points that can spread into even more if you want follow them down their various trails. Good points, wise advice about life focus, whole-hearted engagement, honesty and respect for fellow travelers.
Genre listings include this in the 'Christian' category. It doesn't feel particularly that - more hinting at spiritual metaphors rather than a religion of any stripe. And the obsession with The River feels very worshipful.
Truly, a story written to make a few specific points that can spread into even more if you want follow them down their various trails. Good points, wise advice about life focus, whole-hearted engagement, honesty and respect for fellow travelers.
October 20, 2020
I found this buried deep on my kindle. It was a quick read and I loved that the blurb didn't give too much of the story away.
Beginning when Gabriel is only 5 years old and progresses till he is an adult. The River is his journey of self discovery, it's about coming to terms and understanding the past.
Like I said it was a quick read that I found lacking in depth and felt rather flat as did Gabriel's character. The story moves fairly quickly not leaving a lot of time to connect or appreciate all he goes through. It kinda felt like a short story but longer. The scenery was nice, made me crave summer and spending time in the outdoors.
Deemed Christian Fiction it didn't touch on anything on that front, maybe the second book - Into the Canyon, does.
Beginning when Gabriel is only 5 years old and progresses till he is an adult. The River is his journey of self discovery, it's about coming to terms and understanding the past.
Like I said it was a quick read that I found lacking in depth and felt rather flat as did Gabriel's character. The story moves fairly quickly not leaving a lot of time to connect or appreciate all he goes through. It kinda felt like a short story but longer. The scenery was nice, made me crave summer and spending time in the outdoors.
Deemed Christian Fiction it didn't touch on anything on that front, maybe the second book - Into the Canyon, does.
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