“Forced Alliance” by Lenora Worth
3 stars
REVIEW SUMMARY
This had some intrigue and a lot of lag. I did not feel the connection between the hero and heroine. He comes off as disingenuous, and she comes off as weak-willed.
When you’re paired up professionally, and your lives depend on it, you don’t make the stupid moves that these two did relationally over and over. She’d have been gone right at the start.
I did experience a great amount of frustration—heroine’s guard down in the bayou, gun left on night table…really stupid moves that didn’t wash.
I liked that the hero began to behave within his character near the end of the book but didn't like the ending.
OPINION
This book felt as if the author was trying to write a screenplay but failing miserably. The reason I read books is because they are not like TV or the movies, they are more intimate and personal, and you can take your time; so, when I read one that seems to be replicating a typical TV show, I see it as frustrating and a waste of my time. If I wanted TV, I’d watch TV.
I didn't enjoy the last scene between the hero and heroine in England just because of the guy’s arrogance.
The description of the hero’s apartment in New Orleans did not fit (again, typical TV flashy), and I also had trouble with some of the other descriptives. Some of the plotline was not believable either. If they were really trying to get to the mafia guy, why not kill his son as well as or instead of the mistresses? Doesn't ring true, leaving his son alive, if they were really trying to get to him.
COMMENT
I read books because they are more personal. The author can take their time. It’s one-on-one; so, there is no need for all the flash and other attention grabbers that fall flat in a book. The author should remember that they are writing for one and can be a little bit more personal and use descriptives more specifically, the way you would in conversation, not for flash and attention grabbing. That's for TV.
Also, since this is my review, I’m not into the big macho woman submissive man thing. No need. How about writing a book about a strong, godly woman who can just be herself and doesn’t spend her life trying to overcompensate. I’d also like a man to be a man and take responsibility, have integrity. I saw a reversal of roles here when it came to responsibility.