2.5 stars.
Bertie immigrates with her family from Ireland to New York City in the 1880's. Trials and hardships abound as the family struggles to find and\or keep employment, they deal with sickness, financial problems, and Finn is angry at Paddy, their father, for casting aside their Irish heritage and trying to be all American. Her father finds work at J.P. Wellington's mansion for himself and one of the boys. He also manages to sweet talk his way into getting Bertie a job as a seamstress there. Bertie does the best she can while enjoying the work. She meets the handsome son of the textile tycoon, Mr. Wellington, and there is a mutual attraction.
I liked James okayish up until he proposed and then I was all; "Wait a second. You like her cause she's pretty (It's the ginger hair. Gets the guys every time without fail.)and because she can design and make pretty dresses? Wow, shallow much? Not much. Much too much."
I like Bertie and her brothers; Finn, Seamus, and Liam. Paddy, not so much. He causes his family so much trouble without a care in the world. He is more than willing to separate the family. He lies his way into getting whatever he deems necessary, regardless of how it will affect his family. And poor dear Eileen. I like her though she doesn't have much of a character.
When Paddy makes a promise that Bertie knows she is unlikely to be able to keep, she takes the offered help of Ray Stall, the equivalent of a stalker, to help her with the dresses. His obsession with her is a little odd but, I mean, Rumpelstiltskin? That whole story is queer.
Bertie is astounded by the beauty of the dress that Ray has created as are her employers. They demand more of these radically beautiful designs. She agrees. But when her and Ray fight and she refuses to pay him for his help with a kiss; he demands her first born child. Bertie, being rather an idiot in this instance, agrees but finishes the dresses by herself, realizing that they in no way compare to Ray's creations. She awakes to find her efforts replaced with gorgeous designs that could only have come from Ray.
Time passes and Bertie accepts James' offer of marriage and moves down to Georgia, taking darling Eileen as well. More time passes and nothing too much happens. Then Bertie realizes that she can't marry a man who is a drunk, a cheating cheater, and doesn't actually love nor does James respect her. Finally, Bertie. I would have ran the other way when he proposed.
There is a strike at the Wellington's factory and Bertie gets knocked out. She awakes to find that Eileen is gone. She hears tell of Ray being seen taking Eileen and heading for New York so she goes home.
The ending felt forced and rushed, like the author was trying to think of something that would work before a deadline and was just,
Ray: "I took Eileen because I "didn't see you and didn't bother looking around. Oh, also, the whole "take your firstborn" thing? That was just a joke. Sorry about almost giving you a heart attack, Bertie. I was stalking you because I love you."
Bertie: "Oh, that's all right, Ray. And I love you too."
Excuse me? Oh, well.
The epilogue was probably my favorite part of the book, to be honest. It was cute and tied in "Rumpelstiltskin." George and Maria = a thousand times yes.
Overall, I enjoyed this one and recommended it but I still think the ending felt like a first draft. It needed a wee bit of work.