After being missing for seven months, teenager Ted Wallace shows up alongside the river bank skinnier than a rail and no memory of what happened to him. As he and his family try to put their life back together after giving up almost all hope of ever seeing Ted again, answers are few and far between. Ted’s memory doesn’t improve. Meanwhile, his sister continues to be ignored by her parents while being bullied at school. His parents have developed their own problems over the last seven months. His mother obsessively dwells on finding someone to blame for Ted’s disappearance while his father isn’t convinced who crawled out of the river and looks like his son is really Ted. Will Ted be able to remember what actually happened and put the pieces together in time before all hell breaks loose?
Normal has the bones of some interesting ideas, but the lack of editing really hurts the final product. Spelling and grammatical errors abound, to where I thought I had a proof-read copy. (I see that it’s been re-released through Crystal Lake Publishing, where my copy is from Bloodshot Books — so maybe?) The parents aren’t likable and come across as more annoying than anything. His sister could’ve been an interesting character, but I feel she’s left to flounder helplessly without the growth to make her more three-dimensional. Meanwhile, Ted’s character never really develops past being a sad sack. The rushed ending feels like a far-fetched and unsatisfying info dump. I’ve read other work from Langley and thought they were much more complete than Normal. Maybe the newer re-release has more editing and tightens things up.
2.5 River Mud Vomits out of 5